Date: 06/01/12 01:03 am Title: Chapter 3
i love this chapter! :D This is exciting I cant wait to see how Tom and Bill will end up!
Author's Response: thanks so much! hopefully they can't start to get along at some point.
Date: 05/31/12 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
I felt my eyes were sting when Tom said that last row!
Author's Response: yeah tom's got a bit of a 'tude.
Date: 05/31/12 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
another.engaging story. by you
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 05/28/12 03:44 am Title: Chapter 3
I like this storie sounds promising :) id sugggest u add some internal monologue to the characters or some description of what is going on in their head that might spice it up :)
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading!
Date: 05/27/12 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
i haven't found anything to read on here in a while. This is intriguing. I'm with fyredancer, the older Tom younger bill idea is hot! poor nat tho....
Author's Response: there's lots of awesome stuff to read on here! you just have to wade through all the het to get to it!
Date: 05/27/12 10:23 am Title: Chapter 3
That pic was really scary looking, I agree! I'm glad Tom and bill get along better, can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: glad you're liking it. thanks so much for reading.
Author's Response: glad you're liking it. thanks so much for reading.
Date: 05/27/12 08:02 am Title: Chapter 3
It is nice, I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 05/27/12 06:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Waohh very middle class Tom i kind alike the idea
Author's Response: almost lower middle class lol
Author's Response: almost lower middle class lol
Date: 05/27/12 02:59 am Title: Chapter 3
lol, nothing wrong with a little flirty flirt till it's YOUR bf or husband who you're sort of on the rocks with....yahhh ;)
Author's Response: eh, natalie doesn't seem to mind though lol
Date: 05/27/12 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3
I am glad the boys are starting to get along better. And I feel for Natalie. She seems to be such a nice, kind and selfless person. Oh well, that happens in life:-)Not many times I can actually feel for the girl in a TH story, but then again you write it so realistically... I am looking forward to read more. Soon?
P.S. Younger Bill / older Tom constellation is so yammy:-)
Author's Response: hell, i like them at any age! and yeah, nat's just trying to make the best of a difficult situation. thanks for reading!
Date: 05/26/12 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
really love this
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 05/26/12 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
well at least they're attempting to get along...and bill made him dinner...nice...
Author's Response: very nice...even if it did look like dog food
Date: 05/26/12 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story!!!! Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 05/26/12 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
with every "episode" is so much better :) it's good that Tom is not that cold to Bill how he was on the beginning and also that Bill becomes more social :)
i'm waiting for next :)
Author's Response: yeah, bill just had to come out of his shell a little. and tom just needed to chill the fuck out. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 05/26/12 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOL that crap they ate on BTK? yup. frightening. fun chapter, i like that they're talking now and Tom sort of showed his bisexuality being all cheater-y with the cashier. not really a good thing...kinda makes him a douche
Author's Response: hey, nothing wrong with a little flirty flirt! but my goal was for people to not like tom so much in the beginning, so thanks!
Author's Response: hey, nothing wrong with a little flirty flirt! but my goal was for people to not like tom so much in the beginning, so thanks!
Date: 05/26/12 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this story. And yes, I remember the picture of that meal. Wasn't it some kind of meatless goulash?
Author's Response: yeah, i think that's what bill called it. whatever. looked like dog food. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yeah, i think that's what bill called it. whatever. looked like dog food. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yeah, i think that's what bill called it. whatever. looked like dog food. thanks for reading!
Date: 05/26/12 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
can't wait for things to heat up , I love the plot little Bill and manly Tom yumm
Author's Response: yes, tom is quite...manly...what were we talking about?
Author's Response: yes, tom is quite...manly...what were we talking about?
Date: 05/26/12 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 05/26/12 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
That meal did look totally scary but curry looks scary too and I love the HECK out of it. I could believe that scary pile tastes pretty darn good. :D
Hmm, so Nat is used to Tom being something of a hound. Did I read that right, and he was flirting with a male cashier? Makes me wonder if Tom has been doing more than flirting. *chinhands*
Author's Response: *sings* tom ain't nothin' but a hound dog...flirting all the time...rnrncome on. i had to go there. lolrnrnyes, tom was flirting with a guy. he can't help it, he just likes people. all people. all attractive people. lol
Date: 05/26/12 11:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Oo I'm really liking the first couple of chapters- looking forward to reading more of it!
Author's Response: hope you'll like chapter 3 too! it's up now!