Date: 06/10/12 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for the next chapter !! :-)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 06/10/12 01:53 am Title: Chapter 5
It's great to see Tom trying to understand Bill's actions, and giving him a break, besides. I think it's going to be interesting to see the evolution of Natalie's feelings about their now tentative friendship.
Author's Response: see? there's a little bit of a nice guy under that asshole exterior. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 06/10/12 12:39 am Title: Chapter 5
mmmmmmm bacon. More please I like it
Author's Response: more story? or more bacon? ;)
Date: 06/09/12 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill, feeling like no one wants him and he's just coming between Natalie and Tom. Loved the drunken friends, really funny, especially Gustav. And now Tom is sticking up for Bill against Natalie...sure to cause trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: i loved writing drunk gustav! so glad you enjoyed him!
Date: 06/09/12 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's sooo goood!!!! I love iiiiit, so perfectly written, more plz '-'
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 06/09/12 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay their bonding! Lol. Great chapter, can't wait for another :)
Author's Response: thanks so much! and yay for bonding!
Date: 06/09/12 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Once again, great chapter, and I can't wait till next saturday!! XD
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 06/09/12 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
and now he likes him...i love these two...and how is nat gonna say anything about hm being drunk when she just did the same thing last night?
Author's Response: cuz...nat's a grown up? or maybe...nat's just a bitch?
Date: 06/09/12 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
super :) well, i'm kind happy to see/read that with little step between Bill and Tom becomes a little better. maybe from that moment they will be like friend...or more? :)
Author's Response: hmmm...maybe?
Date: 06/09/12 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Haha. I really enjoyed this chapter. Their interaction is cute.
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 06/09/12 11:56 am Title: Chapter 5
mooooooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 06/09/12 11:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Ugh, what a difficult situation they're all snarled up into. I really feel for Bill here, I've been in his position before. Well. Without the dead parents, but a lot more fighting. It's nice to see Tom is warming up to him, a bit, but still saying some stupid things within his earshot.
Author's Response: yeah, he's coming around gradually...but sometimes he's just gotta run his mouth
Date: 06/06/12 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
thank you very much for the update!
somebody THIS is why I adore your writing, you able to write natural scenes and story, and this one is very good chapter!
update soon please I beg you :)
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much! that's so sweet! thank you very much for reading!
Date: 06/03/12 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! New Story! (how late ma i? D:...)
I always love your stories and this one is another great one so far. Thanks for writing and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: you're not late! the story's still going! thanks so much for reading!
Date: 06/03/12 08:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Please post soon! 's all I'm gonna say...!
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading!
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading!
Date: 06/03/12 03:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow Tom ya le echo el ojo a Bill eh? jiji poor natalie....
great capi And Happy that Bill meet good friends in his new school :)
Author's Response: okay, didn't understand half of that but thanks for reading anyway lol
Date: 06/03/12 02:33 am Title: Chapter 4
ew all day headache!!! i would have just caved and downed ibuprofen till it went away xD aw man, i was thinking, no, it's too soon, but i can't say i wasn't slightly disappointed that totally inappropriate and too-soon things didn't happen in the darkened living room...;) it's okay. i know tom's thinking it
Author's Response: too-soon things. that makes me giggle. thanks for reading!
Date: 06/03/12 01:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, tension between Bill and Tom. I like the excitement. And it's good to see Gustav and Andi as characters. :)
Author's Response: quick! get a knife to cut the tension!
Date: 06/03/12 01:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the update, I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 06/03/12 01:22 am Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the update, I cant wait to read more!
