Date: 07/28/12 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG I did not see that coming.
Author's Response: GOTCHA!
Author's Response: GOTCHA!
Date: 07/28/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
happy birthday then :) wiah you the besst :D
the chapter was greate :)
cant wait for moooore :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 07/28/12 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
everything about this chapter was perfect :D
Author's Response: aaww thanks!
Date: 07/28/12 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
just 3 left? omg, that unbelievable how fast the time went. hopefully u will write something else after that :)
but if it come to the story i'm happy that no matter what there is some happy end :)
Author's Response: actually my next story's been done for a while, just waiting to put it here until after this story is done.
Date: 07/28/12 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yay for Bill and Tom!
10/10
*****
Author's Response: *shakes pom poms*
Date: 07/28/12 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Eee I'm excited there's still three chapters left! Good for the boys; Tom is right, they've actually waited. Even if, well, they have definitely cheated emotionally. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: oh sure, emotionally they're a couple of little cheating bastards. but physically all they've done is kiss! lol well okay, except for that one time. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: oh sure, emotionally they're a couple of little cheating bastards. but physically all they've done is kiss! lol well okay, except for that one time. thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
So a lot of the times when Natalie wasn't around because she was supposedly working so hard, she was fucking with another guy. I never saw that coming. I'm glad Tom and Bill haven't fucked yet because it means the righteous indignation at her behaviour is at least partially okay, though obviously there are faults on both sides. It's sad for Bill that so soon after losing his parents he's now living in a broken home, but at least he gets to choose who he stays with and he knows Tom cares for him. I'm happy too that he's made the choice to wait for sex until Tom and Natalie are divorced, and it shows that Tom really does care about him that he's prepared to wait. This was a really great chapter and I can't wait for the next one on your birthday.
Author's Response: of course tom and bill aren't perfect little angels at all, but like tom said, there's no comparison between what he and bill have done and what natalie's done. and hell tom's been going without for months now, what's a couple more? *snicker* thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/12 07:10 am Title: Chapter 11
she beeat him to the punch!!!
Author's Response: *evil laugh*
Date: 07/28/12 12:38 am Title: Chapter 11
want the next chapteeeeeeer so bad
Author's Response: it's up! go go go!
Date: 07/26/12 09:25 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm so nervous and I felt so bad for Bill when he learn about their date, must be hard to be in love with a taken man....anyways waiting for the next chapter like a little kid on chrismas eve XD
Author's Response: new chapter's up. merry christmas! lol
Author's Response: new chapter's up. merry christmas! lol
Date: 07/23/12 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
LE WHAT?? O.O This story is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter XD
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/23/12 01:14 am Title: Chapter 11
whaaaa?! op... but this will make it easier for Bill and Tom nyah?
op i hope so :3
keep it coming!!!
xx
Author's Response: maybe. wait and find out.
Date: 07/22/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is so awesome :D I think Natalie's been cheating on Tom :o great chapter. cant wait for more :D
Author's Response: why on earth would you think that? *shifty eyes*
Date: 07/22/12 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
but why would she move out and not tell Bill?? he's her cousin and her responsibility...maybe she did find out and she's mad at him. hmm...it'd be really shitty of her to up and leave without him if she doesn't know
Author's Response: but he's not her responsibility anymore. bill's an adult now.
Date: 07/22/12 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
that would explain why she was being totally...not like a wife would be about tom. not super suspicious and stuff, if she's planning on running off with another man. unless she figured it out somehow and is pissed at them
Date: 07/22/12 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay!!!!! Bill and Tom get to be alone forever!!!!!
Author's Response: or together forever. sounds a little happier. lol
Date: 07/22/12 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
Uhm, well... Actually, it should be kinda good for them, right? Natalie moving out, and she apparently didn't feel like telling Tom about that, but but... I think it means the drama has just begun *anxious*
GUYS, don't go there, wait till she's gone!! *squeak*
Author's Response: but they're just so hopped up on hormones, they can't wait anymore! lol
Date: 07/22/12 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg. what is happening?! :|
Author's Response: drama
Date: 07/22/12 04:07 am Title: Chapter 11
O_________________O mh? ...That's all. O___________O
Date: 07/22/12 01:13 am Title: Chapter 11
WHAT?!??!!?! om. I did not see THAT coming. Hmmm. Well, if Natalie's moving out, then Bill and Tom won't have a problem then. :)
Author's Response: nice little twist there, huh? thanks for reading!