Date: 05/15/12 04:50 pm Title: Try, try again
Yay! I'm glad that went rather cleanly. I liked the little details you put in like Bill's sapphire tie and Tom's tied back braids. Awesome story!
Date: 05/15/12 04:34 pm Title: If at first
Well damn. I think I held my breath for a second there, and now I'm seeing stars. Hello. That was hot.
Date: 05/15/12 03:16 pm Title: Try, try again
*applauds* loved this! tom's so smooth, making up a story about how he and bill know each other. i'd love to read more if you're ever inclined to write more.
Date: 05/15/12 02:56 pm Title: Try, try again
Awww, I absolutely loved it!!! Any chance for a sequel??
Date: 05/15/12 02:39 pm Title: Try, try again
DaHm. That was almost disappointing...yet not. Does that make sense? I kinda wished/expected they wouldn't realize until one of them walked in the room. But this was even better cuz it wasn't expected! Wonderful work!
Date: 05/15/12 10:37 am Title: Try, try again
OMG !!! i'm loving it more and more :)
i can't wait to read more :D
Date: 05/15/12 07:09 am Title: Try, try again
I often long for a drama free fic, where Bill and Tom just click, and everything is hot and beautiful, the way it always is with them, in my head! This is exactly one of those fics, and I loved it, thank you!
He looked sleek, businesslike, and so sexy that Bill's knees went briefly weak
I believe this has happened, rl, at least once, lol.
Date: 05/15/12 06:40 am Title: Try, try again
great story, thank you so much for posting it!
Date: 05/15/12 05:13 am Title: Try, try again
this was a realy good story!
Date: 05/15/12 04:00 am Title: Try, try again
Aww, I'm kind of sad this is all completed! It was such a great story! Are you, by any chance, considering a sequel? *hopeful*
Date: 05/15/12 02:08 am Title: Try, try again
Great story!
Though you stated that Tom was not wearing a tie so how could Bill grab it to reel him in for a kiss?
Author's Response: Whoops, continuity error, thank you! That's what I get for writing out of order. ;P
Date: 05/12/12 06:10 pm Title: If at first
WOW WOW WOW. Next chapter please. As soon as possible. :) It was very very very good, can't wait for their "first" business meeting :D
Date: 05/12/12 04:38 pm Title: If at first
So hot and so cute. Love it!
Date: 05/11/12 11:16 am Title: If at first
Great story! Can't wait for part 2 x)
Date: 05/11/12 01:02 am Title: If at first
Guuhh...dunno if this was so smextastic cuz its so late and I'm tired, oe if it was reeally that smeztastic on its own. Guess I'll have to reread it tomorrow to make sure *sly grin* as far as tonights reading goes. Amaxing work. I am so glad to see you back! Can't wait to see the next part!
Date: 05/10/12 08:22 pm Title: If at first
pardon me while i clean up a little bit of drool...this was awesome! flirty, then sexy, then comfortably amusing at the end. perfect combination!
Date: 05/10/12 02:15 pm Title: If at first
so good cant wait for part two
Date: 05/10/12 10:42 am Title: If at first
Aw, I've been waiting for such a great story for ages! I love your writing style! It's so smooth and easy and sexy! Bill and Tom's little flirt was very cleverly done. Loved it! I was actually grinning the whole time thinking: wow, that's some smoooth talk. XD Can't wait for more!