Date: 03/05/13 12:48 am Title: XVII
I was glad to see that this was finished up just recently. I read the whole series the other day, and itched to get to each chapter. Your writing is so smooth. It's got that underlying melancholy that Amdee's does, and some of Tinnie's. Just that sensation that heartbreak lies just around the corner. I was thinking about this story this morning, and realized another aspect that made it so good - the twincest didn't happen fast, or easy, or happily. These two tortured themselves for years before they tried to commit. And even then, because they're men and therefore can't communicate, it fell apart. And it ended on such a tentative note, that delicate melancholy drifting around them, even though it's a happy ending. Lovely. Thank you for staying dedicated for so long in order to bring this to its conclusion.
Date: 07/23/12 07:24 am Title: XVII
*sobs* I really didn't think you were going to give them a happy ending! I should've trusted you when you said so.
I just love this series so much. I love how overwhelming and heartbreaking it's been and I love all the little details you've included in each part that make it all special and unique. I loved how you made Bill choose the Tom-dog and demand Tom's mug in the previous part, and how you made Tom shave his head now to prove a point. I loooooooooooooved the scene at the church. It was as if I could feel both their pain in that memory. And even though I'd always been on Tom's side in all the previous parts - despite me being a Bill!girl, the balance kind of shifted in this one. We got to see Tom being the wrong guy for once, and it felt nice and different.
Anyway, as always, you never fail to amaze me ♥ Even though I am going to miss your twins and anticipating this fic, I am so glad they finally found their peace. I wish it could go on forever, but I think after all they've been through... they deserve their happiness together =)
Author's Response: You must ALWAYS trust that I know what I'm doing (even if sometimes I do favor the angst and lay it on kinda thick).
I'm so happy that you could enjoy the whole series and read it from start to finish. I know it took a while to get there, but I hope it was at least worth it. I definitely agree that after all they've been through, they deserve their happiness together. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 07/19/12 10:49 am Title: XVII
I hate to se this coming to an end, but the end is the best possible, so I'm good with it. So tender and loving.
I wish the twins good journey back home - for good this time. :)
Thank you for writing this series, it was really a great path to walk with the twins. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for walking the path with me (and them). ♥
Date: 07/19/12 10:44 am Title: XVI
Awww, so sweet... *sigh*
I know they always do and they should go with their hearts, because really, how often - especially as adults - we get crashed under the rational thinking, if's and but's and in the end we never had the courage to go where our heart leads us? There needs to be the balance, of course, but it'd break my heart if twins wouldn't dare to trust that their love holds. :)
Author's Response: The twins are always twins in the end. That's what makes them so perfect. ♥
Date: 07/15/12 03:20 pm Title: XVII
Oh ah aaaaawwww omg what a happy, lucky ending . I loved it so much, so so so much. Happyly sighing all through this chapter. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading, my love. <333
Date: 07/15/12 03:17 pm Title: XVI
On the other hand. Exactly. That's the better hand!!!
Author's Response: The other hand is ALWAYS the better hand. =D
Date: 07/13/12 03:58 pm Title: XVII
Just beautiful. Nothing more to say really. Just an incredibly beautiful chapter.
Author's Response: No, YOU'RE beautiful. Thank you so much. <3
Date: 07/13/12 06:30 am Title: XVII
Awwwwwwwwwww..... x3 This is so cute and adorable!!!
Author's Response: Thanks@ <3
Date: 07/12/12 11:26 pm Title: XVII
This story was sooooo good and I'm happy Bill and Tom are together again. This was so bittersweet but so wonderful. Danke and I look forward to seeing where your muse takes us next. :)
Author's Response: No, thank YOU.
Date: 07/12/12 08:44 pm Title: XVII
Oh boys! Oh you, Ms. Author! This was beautiful! ;_; I'm crying the sweet, happy tears for once.
Tom is such a sweetheart in this story -- so sentimental and thoughtful. Being too afraid to give Bill the key in person was adorable. Then to have him sneak it into Bill's bag was so cute.
It's really exciting to see the boys finally getting over their own issues and getting one mind about what's important -- home is where the other is. I LOVE these last few paragraphs so, so much, especially the last line. It's utterly perfect.
What a fantastic story, all the way around!
Author's Response: D'awwww, you're compliments are always so sweet. <333
Date: 07/12/12 08:33 pm Title: XVII
Awwww, just perfect! I absolutely adored that Tom was all shy and scared with the key he'd hidden and Bill's reaction was just what I was hoping. :) Really loved this so very much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I thought the idea of the key was sweet, and it came to me late in the story.
Date: 07/12/12 08:25 pm Title: XVII
*FLAILS* I HAVE TO GO FIND TISSUES NOW.
Author's Response: A FEW MONTHS TOO LATE, BUT *HANDS YOU A WHOLE BOX*
Date: 07/12/12 12:48 am Title: XVI
This chapter is so warm and lovely. I love how you describe them so perfectly as sun and moon and yin and yang. That really sums them up. It's interesting how Tom is the one who wants to go slow while Bill is finally giving in to what he truly wants. They feel like they're finally being honest with each other here, maybe for the first time ever.
I love the last two sentences. I think I'll hold on to them as the ending of the entire story, just in case.
Author's Response: Most definitely being honest for the first time ever, I think. And I think that's what's going to make it work. But yes, hold on to those last two lines. It's not over yet. ;)
Date: 07/11/12 01:20 am Title: XVI
I just stopped by to tell you that I miss your face. Not that it went anywhere or anything, but yeah. Sorry that I have been a bit reclusive, and I think this story is fantastic. ;)
Author's Response: I miss YOUR face. ♥
Date: 07/11/12 12:41 am Title: XVI
It must be so hard to not smother the person you love and have craved for so many years. Poor Tom but I'm very glad he made the decision he did. I think they'll be able to figure it out as they go along and this time make it stronger. Love this so much! :)
Author's Response: Of course they'll be able to figure it out. I'm happy he made the decision he did, too. I have faith in them. Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 07/10/12 11:00 pm Title: XVI
*flails* YES! Move back in together! Yes!
Also, I've been reading this whole time and really suck at leaving reviews, but I LOVE this story. Thank you :)
Author's Response: *flails with you* I'm so glad you're reading, even if you only leave occasional reviews. Thank YOU. <333
Date: 07/10/12 10:16 pm Title: XVI
This chapter just put a huge smile in my face. They're together and they'll figure the rest as they go, they have everything they need after all... each other. Finally. ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad this one made you happy. That's what I was going for. =D
Date: 07/09/12 06:04 pm Title: XV
Awwww, so beautiful. Why you always write them so beautifully. I need this super tender twin love right now. So fragile that I'm almost scared to read, like even reading would break the magic, but it won't and they go on. I'm so happy. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: You are so sweet to me. I love every review I get from you. Thank you. <333
Date: 07/04/12 04:53 pm Title: XV
Just, just, just so good and perfect and what I needed to get my air back in my lungs. I'm so happy to read this beautiful turn of things to the better, and better, and better. *inserts many hearts*
Author's Response: I'm so glad I could refill your lungs. Might have been painful if you'd continued not breathing. =P I'm so happy to know that you're reading this and enjoying it. *inserts many more hearts*
Date: 07/03/12 03:09 am Title: XV
Loved it. Especially the snowflake analogy. You are such a romantic. Even though you could end it right here I'm hoping this isn't the last chapter. I want to see the make up sex. Pretty please.
Author's Response: I love analogies! And that's the second time I've been called a romantic! It's not true, I swear! I just like writing pretty things. ;) This definitely wasn't the last chapter. There are a few more to go. No word yet on the make up sex, though. haha ♥