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Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 01:36 am Title: Chapter 4

This chapter was adorable!!!! You really have a way with words :) I love this story so so much!!!!!!!!! Keep up the amazing work!!! And update ASAP :) I'll be waiting ;)

Reviewer: LonelyHumanoid Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/12 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

Three of my favorite things: Billa, BOTDF, and fluff. What more could I ask for?

Reviewer: fatal_escape Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/12 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

haha he's definitely making a statement!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/12 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

the last three paragraphs made me giggle so much!!! :P "You smell fucking good" sounds like something my man would say :P bahahaha!!

and the part about one bed... she is in shock! :P Bill is being bold, isn't he ;)

Reviewer: fatal_escape Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

thank you so much! that means a lot. I'll post the third chapter soon :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 01:46 am Title: Chapter 2

This chapter was sooooooo cute!!!!!!! :) you sure can write!!!! :) I love how Bill is such a sweetheart but absolutely awkward and trips over his words :P keep up the great work and pls update soon!!! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/12 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

AMAZING CHAPTER!!! keep up the great work! the way you write just keeps the story flowing! :) i love it! can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/12 01:27 am Title: Prologue

Oh. My. Gosh!!!! Please update soon!! :) this chapter was so well written, it kept me entranced till the very end!!! :) keep up the amazing work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be posting the first chapter later tonight :)

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