Date: 06/05/13 01:21 pm Title: Bill is always No. 1
shitpisscatfuck sent me a link to this story, and I couldn't be happier. Love the bossy Bill, love the prompt, love your version. You did it just right. Excellent, humorous writing style. Bill "climbing aboard" Gus and being the "front man" - hilarious and well written.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so excited that someone recommended this to you! Thanks! And I thanked him, too! :D I'm very flattered! I'm really glad you enjoyed the humor and this Bill--I just can't take him seriously. He would SO have to be in charge of everything. ;D Thank you very much for reading and for this awesome comment!
Date: 09/16/12 11:09 am Title: Bill is always No. 1
Hehe, you nailed being a bossy-bottom extraordinarily well!!! Loved the comment about 'did Bill need to get Tom to show Gustav how to do it right'. LOL!
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story! Bill was so mouthy here that poor Gustav never really had a chance. But it was night he'll never be able to forget! xD Thank you so very much for your comment!
Date: 05/07/12 09:54 pm Title: Bill is always No. 1
I don't like the Bill/Gustav pairing, but I decided to read it anyway because you're the author haha :)
I loved bossy Bill being so demanding! Well, he certainly knows what he wants and he's not afraid to voice his commands! It feels good to see him written that way, because usually he's depicted as the shy, virginal one and often he doesn't know how to behave himself when it comes to sex. Is it because we girls project ourselves in Bill's character and make him that way? (Sorry for my philosophical questions lol) Personnally, I think he ought to be written more often as an confident guy, just harrassing less his sexual partner and making sure his lover comes too ;)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for reading this even though you don't like Bill/Gustav! I'm really flattered that you would trust me that much. I hope it didn't disappoint you too much! :D I know this was purposely exaggerated for the prompt, but I do kind of see Bill as being a bit of a control freak. Not necessarily in a bad way -- just in the way that he knows what he wants and he expects to get it. This was totally a caricature of that, but I'm glad it was funny anyway. I agree with what you said about Bill usually being portrayed as the shy one in fic, and honestly, I don't get it at all. I like your theory that maybe girls do project themselves on him, because in my experience, 20-year-old guys are not shy or embarrassed about anything to do with sex, even if they are virgins. ;) I can't imagine him being so innocent about anything, not growing up with three other guys and being surrounded by men all the time. I guess I got my first impression of Bill from the first interview in English I ever saw -- the one before the Humanoid City Tour where Tom jokes about paying someone to have sex with Georg and then Bill says about kissing lips "down there"? Since that was the first band interview I watched, I always figured they were normal pervs like most boys that age. :P Not that there's anything wrong with that! It can be fun! LOL But, I guess that permanently colored my opinions of all the boys. Sorry for writing you a novel in response, but I really wanted to thank you so much for reading this and I'm very thrilled you enjoyed! *Hugs*
Date: 05/06/12 07:32 am Title: Bill is always No. 1
Hahaa, awww, poor Gusti. Bill the front man is just too much to handle for anyone (except maybe for Tom - I loved the little twc twist in there). I loved your characterizing and somehow it must have been spot on, even if a little exaggerated. I hope their next time worked a bit better. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for this lovely review! :D I'm really glad you liked the characterizations! The prompter wanted super bossy Bill, but I can only imagine that he's pretty bossy in real life, too. It seems like he probably wants things his way, and I'm sure everyone jumps to accommodate him. ;) Poor Gustav -- he got the chance of a lifetime, but it probably wore him out. I wonder if he would even want to try again! Thank you again for reading, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it! ^__^
Date: 05/03/12 08:12 pm Title: Bill is always No. 1
This is hilarious. I absolutely loved it, and honestly, I hope you make bossy!Bill a recurring character -- he's hysterical! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed this, and I'm so happy it made you laugh! I love bossy-pants Bill, probably a little too much. :P I've been writing more of the hairdresser!Bill universe lately, and he's so domineering, especially with poor, laid-back Gustav. But, it's too much fun to stop writing so I keep torturing them! xD Thank you again very much!
Date: 05/03/12 04:09 pm Title: Bill is always No. 1
Bill just smirked. “Can’t handle my manliness, Gustav?” OMG Bill you need to rearrange some of your mental processes. You're on your way to becoming manly but hold your horses, kid.
I loved the one moment when Gustav finally got Bill to stop bossing him around. Finally. But then the next thing out of Bill's mouth is complaining. Bill is so difficult to please, so I hope Gustav is taking notes and getting a lot of hands-on practice. At first I was wondering if Bill got off on dirty talk, but he's not really talking dirty. He's just being directive and commanding. X)
THROAT BOBBING. Was that on purpose? You know I love that throat bobbing. ;)
This is smut, yes, but I feel like you made it a bit more of a story. You illustrated their personalities and hinted at a lot more going on, plus a promise that this continues.
Author's Response: Bill will have you know he is the very definition of manly. He wears flannels shirts and has a beard and a pee-pee and everything, okay?! :P He believes he is as manly as it comes. (But we all know better...) I'm so very glad you enjoyed this, my darling. THROAT BOBBING -- I know we both love it! I can only imagine that Gustav would love it, too. I'm so excited that you thought of this as more than just a PWP. I'm really happy you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 05/03/12 09:43 am Title: Bill is always No. 1
really hot and funny, loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! :D
Date: 05/02/12 05:59 pm Title: Bill is always No. 1
LOLOLOL! Omg that made me laugh so hard! Bill's character in this fic is pure awesomeness. There's so many great lines in this one-shot I'm not gonna quote all of them but some stood out for me:
``Gustav felt like he’d already run a marathon or been in class for an intense half-hour and now was preparing for a final exam like no other.`` - Well I've been preparing for finals for the past month and I would take Gustav's preparation over it without a second thought ;)
“Do I have to get Tom in here to show you how to do me right?” - LOL! I wonder if Tom lets Bill boss him around like this...
That was so funny and sexy at the same time! Thank you so much for posting this, it made my day =D
Author's Response: Aw, I'm really glad that this brightened your day! You have no idea how much better you made my afternoon! :D Thank you so much! I'm positive that your studying is much worse than Gustav's trials. How many more exams do you have to take? I hope you're almost done -- I can't imagine how much stress the bars would be! I'm thinking of you and sending you lots of good thoughts! *hugs* Wish I could send you a Bill to help keep you relaxed and in top studying shape. ;D Of course, he might distract you too much, and we can't have that. I'll wait to send him until after you rock your exams! I'm really happy that you liked this story and it made you laugh. Thank you, lovely! (And I did imagine that Tom and Georg were in the next room, getting ready to get busy when laid-back Georg told Tom that he could do whatever, it would be fine, let's just have fun and make love, and Tom burst into tears because Georg is too sweet and wouldn't boss him around and orchestrate every single move like someone else he knew. They ended up cuddling the whole night, and Georg and Gustav were much more appreciative of their own little relationship after they saw the truth of Bill and Tom's. :D OMG these guys take over my brain once I start writing them! D:)