Date: 07/11/12 12:59 pm Title: Tell me...
I can't write any constructive criticism because I am so full of fluffy happiness that I am sighing... papers on the table around fly around because I am sighing so deeply with joy. So lovely.
Author's Response: Sweetie, my heart actually melted when I read your review... I don't have the words to thank you enough. Oh god, how do you always manage to make me this happy?
Date: 05/09/12 09:02 am Title: Tell me...
This was super sweet and adorable. Better than your first fic I think. :)
I like your characters, and the fact that Tom had that pic of them hidden is so meaningful and darling, and he stole Bill's short too- very funny. lol. Oh, and how they settled into kissing so naturally, that was sweet.
Someone else left u a review saying it was nice to see new twincest writers writing such classic twincest, and I totally agree. This is classic and I'll never get tired of it. :) Just, please use a beta and tidy up the grammar, it can be distracting at times. If you'd like, message me and I'll gladly be your beta. Ok? I think you have lots of potential as a writer. Keep writing twincest!! :) Well done.
Author's Response: Oh, you're so sweet! I don't even know what to say... I'm so glad you liked it :) When I started reading, I begun with some classical twin fluff and it's still my favorite style. Thanks for your kind words. For my next story, which I'm writing right now, I'll use a beta. I've talked to Remy and she'll beta it for me. I've tried to find a beta, but I couldn't until I talked to Remy. But she told me that she could beta for me only one time, so I'd be so happy if you were my beta reader. When my 4th fic is done, I'll message you. Thanks again! <3 (OMG! I can't believe you'll be my beta!!! I'm SO HAPPY!!! b29;)
Date: 05/05/12 06:29 pm Title: Tell me...
Awww, that was so cute and adorable. I really love to see new twc writers writing such classical twc fluff. :)
As you salready know, some little grammar issues, but they didn't bother me. You should try writing a chaptered fic as well?
Author's Response: Thank you! The classical twc fluff is my favorite. Now I'm writing another oneshot. I talked to Remy, she would beta my next fic. :) A chaptered fic sounds challenging, but I think that I would try to write one in the future. Thanks again for your review! <3
Date: 05/03/12 11:31 pm Title: Tell me...
Awwww!!!!! That's so cute and fluffy! Awwww! I loved it!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 05/03/12 05:36 am Title: Tell me...
sweet story!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: 05/03/12 12:36 am Title: Tell me...
Hey there :)
First of all i want to say that i think the idea behind this story is really sweet. To be perfectly honest it was a little hard to read, and I'm assuming English is not you native language because there were a lot of distracting grammatical errors. If I were you I might consider having my next story beta'd, just to clean it up a bit. I do have to say that your characters were really cute, and i loved the line where you said every time Tom saw Bill he got "as dumb as a fish". LOL, i've never heard that before and i thought it was so funny, and such a cool mental image. I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep rockin' it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate that you told me what you thought and I'm very thankful to you because you gave me advice. My next story is going to be certainly beta'd, I promise. I'm so so sorry if I made your reading difficult... Thank you again for saying such kind words to me; it does really matter to me, because... you know, I'm a beginner :)