Date: 01/13/25 03:49 am Title: 2/2
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 10/06/21 12:16 am Title: 2/2
oh mannnn this is good
Date: 01/09/20 09:19 pm Title: 2/2
this was a really good story!
Date: 04/18/15 08:52 pm Title: 1/2
This was absolutely beautiful. Tom's emotions and thoughts were intricately written. I loved it! Such a memorable piece indeed. :)
Date: 12/06/13 10:44 pm Title: 2/2
Cool story! Do you have a sequel?
Date: 10/03/12 08:03 pm Title: 2/2
I think its all there, he was honest and an obsessed crazy lover xD but I absolutly loved it, good job :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/09/12 08:07 am Title: 2/2
This was so sad and quite wonderful... I cried as well. In my opinion, Tom was't crazy, he was just fed up with expectation and he couldn't wait anymore. He was sincere, he truly loved his twin. God, this was such a masterpiece. So sad... beautiful!! I'm glad you wrote this
Date: 06/13/12 11:40 am Title: 2/2
in the first chapter I thought Tom was evil...
But after I finished reading the whole story... I feel sad... He was so desperate and.. pathetic.. He could only use this way to have Bill but inside he feels so empty... *feeling heart break*
You did Awesome job! *wipes tear*
Date: 06/03/12 10:28 am Title: 2/2
@Tom - next time don't drug him. Bill loves you just as much as you love him. You'll find when he is alert and actively participating it will be infinitely better.
Date: 05/17/12 01:19 pm Title: 2/2
This fic is so tragic. It should be sick and I should probably judge Tom, but i really can't. The longing is so strong, him being so torn apart with his love and things that are right and wrong. I wish there could have been another day, but it's so easy to say. I think it's great that you brought this moral aspect to this fic and made it not to be just smut. I think Tom was sincere, yet I do think that he was also obsessed. The line between those two is very hard to draw.
Date: 05/17/12 07:54 am Title: 2/2
he's a crazy obsessed man, but people say that love is crazy! so Tom was in the right track ;) naiss story, you should make more rape story, please
Date: 05/16/12 06:31 am Title: 2/2
Awwww, that's so sweet. Poor Tom, I wish they would have at least woken up together and Tom explained to Bill that he loved him. I think he truly loves Bill but it's almost bordering on obsession.
Date: 05/15/12 08:24 pm Title: 2/2
nice story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/15/12 04:23 pm Title: 2/2
That next to last paragraph is really sad. Tom really does love Bill, so so much...even if he acts upon it in an unacceptable way. Well, at least he is gentle with Bill after he drugs him? In general, I think he should stop and direct his attentions to someone else in a more healthy way. Tom's a bit obsessed and a little crazy, and it is exacerbated by his very strong love for Bill.
Date: 05/15/12 02:47 am Title: 2/2
when an object is under pressure for an extreme amount of time, especially if the pressure exceeds what the object can take, it will eventually break; it's the exact same principle with Tom's incestuous secret. He couldn't take having to hide it anymore and had to release his secret onto Bill in some form or another- unfortunately, his shame led him to do it in a terrible way... Maybe it's just because I can sympathize with Tom's pain of having to hide something that is so important for so long or maybe I'm just to logical for my own good; either way, Tom's actions made complete sense and was understandable to me. I think if Bill (later on) figured out what had happened, Tom would probably break down and start crying about what he'd done- it wasn't something he was proud of: it was some thing he 'had' to do, something he felt needed to be done in order to 'overcome' his fantasy or even his love of his own twin brother...
Date: 05/15/12 12:24 am Title: 1/2
This would've been cuter if Tom gave Bill a bath with Scotty afterwards ;)
Author's Response: You know, I was actually considering that, but I remembered that somewhere in the non-written backstory (that I hope you're familiar with), Scotty actually died tragically when the twins let him outside so they could have bdsm sex in the house without upsetting him, a session that lasted 3,5 years. Ironic.
Date: 05/14/12 09:21 pm Title: 2/2
i like that and i really would love to read the continuation of it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep that in mind :)
Date: 05/14/12 05:49 pm Title: 2/2
I think it's sweet in a really twisted way but i definately see where tom is coming from, very good story :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 05/14/12 04:14 pm Title: 2/2
crazy, obsessed but I loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/14/12 12:56 pm Title: 2/2
Wow, you are amazing at implementing "grey area". I'm sort of torn between, but more so leaning towards Tom being sincere, and being the emotional victim.
The second to last paragraph was rather moving to me as well.