Date: 05/14/12 12:35 pm Title: 2/2
Hmm, interesting. This one makes me think. It's unique, and well written and a great read IMO. I think Tom is genuine. I think he does love Bill so deeply nothing else matters, and I think he's trying to find a way to show Bill, to claim him forever but still without Bill knowing, because that would hurt Bill too much, and Tom still has to be older brother. I think many years of feeling alone with his thoughts have twisted Tom's judgement, but I understand why he's doing it. Which is unusual, bcuz I feel like it could have turned into a crazy-obsessed-delusional-rapist-Tom fic really easily. But I think you brought in just enough depth of emotion to make this heartbreaking and real and have the reader understand Tom. At least, I think I do. Beautiful in a very sad way. I enjoyed reading this. Well done. :)
Date: 05/06/12 03:37 pm Title: 1/2
*Gasp* Bad side of Tom xD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 05/05/12 05:56 am Title: 1/2
jesus. this story worth my soul. something that I have been waiting forever
!!
Author's Response: Lol. I'm glad you like it so much, but please, keep your soul. ;)
Date: 05/04/12 07:03 pm Title: 1/2
I probably should feel guilty for feeling like this, but damn, this was hot. There was just something very wrong, forbidden and taboo on what Tom did and it was hot in its own way. But also reminding how wrong this was to a person, who so blindly trusted in Tom. I'll definitely want to read the other chapter, too.
Author's Response: I felt a bit guilty while writing it, but it is too much fun to get inside obsessive!Tom's crazy little head. What I find most forbidden is that Tom is making love to his brother while actually raping him; his sincerity, however, is somewhat admirable (in a desperate, tragic lover sort of way, not that that makes his actions okay). Anyways, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. The next chapter will be up soon :)
Date: 05/01/12 02:38 am Title: 1/2
i love it!!! can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/30/12 09:39 am Title: 1/2
this is so good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/30/12 06:21 am Title: 1/2
Wooow...Good start...
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/30/12 05:23 am Title: 1/2
this sounds like a nice story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! New chapter soon!
Date: 04/30/12 04:06 am Title: 1/2
oh, come on!!!! you CANNOT just leave it there...
Author's Response: Don't worry, the new chapter will be out soon :D
Date: 04/30/12 03:05 am Title: 1/2
is it bad for me to feel that what tom did was ok since he's obviously tremendously in love (and a bit insane) i might be how you write it from his point of view, it sounds so real you can empathize with him, so it makes it seem ok. (not that i condone anyone raping bill or anything XD) xx
Author's Response: I don't see what Tom's doing as okay, but as he's raping Bill... gently, let's put it, by simply making love to him, I don't particularly mind as much. His character seems to have grappled with his feelings for years, an unhealthy infatuation turned obsession, but I agree, I've made it quite easy to empathize with him. Hehe, I don't condone it either, but I'm not sure who I feel worse for in the situation. ;)
Date: 04/30/12 02:54 am Title: 1/2
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO AWESOME! Pedo!Tom is always good Tom ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 04/30/12 12:48 am Title: 1/2
Tom...noooo dont do it!
Anxiously waiting for more.
Author's Response: Next chapter will be posted soon!
Date: 04/30/12 12:27 am Title: 1/2
(Mm, is most of the chap supposed to be in bold?)
Wow, this is different. I'll definitely be reading the second part. It's like Bill's asleep... I wonder if he'll remember this later. Maybe not.
Author's Response: Ehrm, no. That would be a mistake on my part, which I've just gone back and fixed. :) I'm glad you think this is different; I think it's quite insane if I do say so myself, but for some reason I feel for Tom. He's just this tragically-in-love hero with some whacked-out common sense. :/ (not saying I condone what he's doing though)
Date: 04/30/12 12:00 am Title: 1/2
Tom...noooo dont do it!
Anxiously waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/29/12 11:24 pm Title: 1/2
well, wow. Cant wait for part 2
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/29/12 09:56 pm Title: 1/2
Oh Tom, this isn't right m'dear. He's thinking different thought processes than what's normal. The way you depict it though, his love is very sweet. Too bad he's going about it in this way. He's using his idea of love for his brother to justify doing this! He doesn't even really seem himself as doing anything wrong, does he?
Such a short chapter, but it got me thinking and analyzing so much. :)
Author's Response: I feel like Tom has been overwhelmed by his unbrotherly feelings for Bill for years and because he both needs him and finds it impossible to be with him, he is finally pushed to take matters into his own hands. I feel bad for him, because he really does Billy, but he doesn't know how to show it because he knows deep down that it is morally wrong and that Bill would be either offended or disgusted if he ever found out. Poor Tom. Anyways, I'm glad it's got you thinking. :)
Date: 04/29/12 09:36 pm Title: 1/2
:3 damn you for making me enjoy rape.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! If you enjoy reading rape, you should really check out "Forced". :)