Date: 09/29/24 11:45 pm Title: Act One: Once a home, always an empty house
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/30/20 09:55 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
I loved your story !!! The characters were so cute. There were many problems they had to go through to meet again and become together. Thank you!!!!
Date: 07/07/14 07:06 am Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
Wow, absolutely amazing story! Thanks!
Date: 09/10/13 11:05 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
ITS SO SWEET!!!! Im glad my friend told me to read this! Its really good! And it was so hard to not comment before! I made myself wait until the end! But jeez! Once again! IT WAS SO SWEET! I liked how they hated each other at first too, isnt it how it always starts out? ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Your friend has good taste :p But seriously, I really appreciate you kind words :)I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it - and yes, I do agree with you, it's often the way things get started. Love and hate is just to sides of the same thing isn't it? ;) Again, thank you for reading - you're awesome! :D
Date: 08/19/13 12:28 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
I used my weekend to read the whole story and I just loved it. I loved the way you developed the drama, the way the relationship between Tom and Bill evolved and how I was so immersed in the reading even though there wasn’t any sex scene. Thank you for writing a fic so wonderful and so romantic. Kisses.
Author's Response: Awww, that is too kind of you! I'm so happy you liked it! :D Yeah, I know, there is a painful lack of sex..but oh, well, I guess it sort of works anyway :p You are very, very welcome - I had a blast writing this! Lots of love, hugs & kisses to you too ;)
Date: 03/14/13 11:55 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
What a wonderful romantic story! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy to hear that! :)
Date: 03/07/13 03:56 pm Title: Act Three: I've always wanted to thank you
Aww at the ending! and a really great story, tge timeline really works and made me wish evenore for them to be rogether, joob well done! :D uh and super original idea btw. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :D
Date: 11/11/12 04:19 am Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
Too cute!! Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy to hear that! :D
Date: 09/23/12 02:20 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
wow, this story was so perfect and cute!!xD I'm so glad they finally got together. I really lived the was it was split into sections - it meant that the story could span years without it going on and on, but it also didn't make it unflowing and disjointed - that shows real talent. The writing was once again flawlessly done, with so much emotion, but not like you were trying too hard and using a thesaurus on every word like some people do. :) I loved the characters and character development, and I would have loved to hear from nat and andi again but oh well :/ Anyway, once again a great and beautifully written story. Rorixx
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D I'm so happy to hear you liked it!
You know, the whole three-act thing just came to me. It wasn't really supposed to be like that, it was going to be one long story spanning over time, but when I had written the first couple of chapters I realised it simply had to be like that, split into sections that retold the most important parts and encounters in their young lives. I'm so happy you thought it worked! :) But I will admit to one thing, and that is that I love my Thesaurus XD But, it's simply because I need to find the exact right words to describe what I mean, and I don't have all of them in my vocabulary. So, whatever help I can get is greatly appreciated, hence my love for the Thesaurus. That it's not too transparent is just a bonus :p
I guess Andi and Nat could have had a story of their own, but in this particular setting their relationship wasn't exactly the one I wanted to focus on, so.. But hey, you could always write it yourself if you feel like they need a little more appreciation ;)
Thank you for the kind words :) Also, I'd like apologize for the late response, I've haven't been around much lately..
Date: 08/04/12 01:17 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
Oh, I loved it! =)
Author's Response: I love that you loved it ;) Thanks!
Date: 08/04/12 12:01 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
This was a fantastic story. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you think so! :D Thank you!
Date: 07/30/12 02:28 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
That..... was PERFECT! ohmygod, I just loved the story! LOVED it!!!
Author's Response: You really think so? Yay! XD Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear you liked it! :D
Date: 07/29/12 11:50 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
It was a beautiful story. Not the common love story but one of those that keep you imagining that certain souls are meant to be together.
Thank you for sharing this piece of your imagination with us.
=)
Author's Response: And thank you so very much for your kind words! :) I am so pleased to hear you enjoyed my little story - and you are so very, very welcome!
Date: 07/29/12 12:01 am Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
I need to go find tissues, for real.
Author's Response: Oh dear.. *hands over handkerchief* I just hope that they were tears of joy ;)
Date: 07/28/12 05:03 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
*_______________________* This was so amazing I can't even.
Yeah. It's that good. Thank you SO MUCH for this lovely story, and I'm glad to have added this to my favorites :)
Author's Response: Oh, wow... I don't have any words. Thank you! :D I'm so happy to hear you enjoyd my little story! So, you're vrey, very woelcome ;) And as always, very honoured you thought it favorite worthy :)
Date: 07/28/12 02:58 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
*sniffles* that was ju-just s-SO BEAUTIFUL! *blows nose*
Okay, you were rgiht, no need for tears, but it was just so wonderful! I had happy tears! Fantastic ending dear. I loved every moment. Beautifully executed ending. Dare I hope for a small sequel or a few one shots of their futures?
Fantastic work, I look forward to seeing whatever you bring us next *huggles*
Author's Response:
Well, tears of joy are always appreciated ;) Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm so happy to hear you liked it! :D
I'm not too sure about the whole sequel/oneshot thing, though. I haven't got anything planned is what I'm trying to say; but hey, you never know..
To be quite honest, I'm pretty keen to see what's coming next too, as I don't have anything particular lined up and too many unfinished stories that are just collecting dust at the moment. So, only time can tell. But hopefully I'll be back soon ;)
Date: 07/28/12 02:07 pm Title: Act Three: Hello, my name is William Trümper
that's the end? wow...i like how they decided to start all over again :) and definitely more romantic that any Hollywood movie xp
Author's Response: Yup, that's it.. I'm so glad you liked it! It felt like they needed a fresh start ;) Thank you!
Date: 07/26/12 04:34 pm Title: Act Three: I've always wanted to thank you
Omg, I love this story! I've just discovered it, and I already love it! I hope you're writing another chapter soon, 'cause this story is one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm so happy to hear you're enjoying my little play :) The next, and last chaper I'm afraid, is coming soon. My beta is amazing, so you won't have to wait long ;) I hope you'll like it!
Date: 07/26/12 01:36 am Title: Act Three: I've always wanted to thank you
You're a lovely human being, I hope you know. I love reading stories that remind me of ho wonderful people are. There's always this little cynicistic me in the back of my mind saying things like "you can't really trust anyone but yourself" but, the fact that Tom, a random stranger, remembers William is great. So fucking great. This story is unbelievable realistic, as in I can relate with every age level, situation, or experience presented. And William's message about the forgotten children is something a lot of kids should hear more often so, they know they're not alone. Not ever. Anyway, I can't wait for the next installment and I wish you happiness : ]
Merry part,
Bluethorn
Author's Response:
Oh my *blushes* You know, people rarely tell me that, they usually accuse me of being evil and stuff... So, I guess a huge "Thank you!" is in order ;)
And I just have to say, I can absolutely relate to what you're saying about the cynic whispering in my ear, telling me not to trust people and that they're all full of shit. But sometimes, just sometimes, I think, "Hey, maybe they're not all so bad" and I end up writing stuff like this ;)
Well, as I mentioned in an earlier response, I chose Vergessene Kinder for a reason... I always find that song painful to listen to, so most of the time I just don't. It takes a lot to actually remember the ones so easily forgotten and I do admire those who does not only remember, but actually try to make their lives better. Alass, I am not that strong. It's too easy to get all wrapped up in yourself and having the world outside seem so insignificant.. It's not something I'm proud of, but at least I admit it, so I guess that's a start :)
The next chapter will be up soon. It's the final one, so brace yourself! And thank you so much for this lovely review!
xx Ainee
Date: 07/25/12 07:56 am Title: Act Three: I've always wanted to thank you
Well, why on earth would she be rendered speechless that a male fashion designer would be gay? That's just silly to me. My go to assumption on them is that they ARE, until I'm told otherwise. Silly people.
I am so proud of Bill that he was finally able to admit to it...and I love that VKby WT was Vergessen Kinder by William Trumper. It was very fitting.
Bill 'getting back' at Tom for not paying attention during design plans was hilarious. Tom in tight jeans would throw the fan girls into a fit.
I loved the bands ribbing and the fact thatMac won't talk back to Bill.
I loved this chapter. I am going to be so sad to see this end, but I will be strong. I will *watery eyes* I can do it. Keep up the great work. I really look forward to seeing how you wrap this up
Author's Response:
Well, who knows? Maybe she's just old fashioned or perhaps she simply didn't expect him to be so open about it? Either way, she was. Silly middle aged woman *shakes head* :p
Yes! I was rooting for him all along, you know, just hoping he would find his balls and man up to the truth ;) I'm glad you liked that I used Vergessen Kinder. In reality, I have a very strained relationship with that song, I don't really like it. I just find it too painful to listen too, most of the reason being exactly what Bill explained. It's so easy to feel sorry for someone, it's so much harder doing anything about it, or even just to remember it when you've got it so much better yourself.. Sorry that was a little bit off topic, but you know I chose that name for a reason; so there you go, my reasons..
As for Bill's revenge: Wouldn't we all? ;) I mean, that would definitely be my preferred way of punishing Tom, not to mention treating myself to something good at the same time :p
Mack is and will always be awesome, but in Bill's company he's just another minion to be ordered around XD
I'm so pleased you liked the chapter and I hope you'll manage to stay strong when the last chapter's up. I promise you now, I won't kill anyone. And, as long as nobody dies, there's no need for tears ;) I hope you'll like what I've got planned for the final chapter!