Date: 05/24/13 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3 Plan A
Pls more.... It was really great!
Date: 05/06/12 02:50 am Title: Chapter 3 Plan A
I figure I should let you know something about how you are writing this fic. it feels like you are jumping around and have a bunch of ideas, but in trying to fit them all in, you are leaving out important and/or interesting transition scenes. I'm telling you this to be constructrive, you can't fix something you don't know is 'broken'. This feels like it could be a really good story if you take the time to really elaborate stuff and really dig inro it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I guess I should explain that all the stories I've written jump around from one scene to the next. I like to do that a lot. Also, I appreciate the suggestion but I don't have the time to fix this. I'm just doin it like a hobby. I will work more on the details
Date: 04/29/12 05:42 am Title: Chapter 2: Remember Me
This is good. Very good!
Author's Response: Viele dank! There will be more soon:)
Date: 04/28/12 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: Remember Me
Oooooohh sehr interessant! Can't wait to see Bill's 'plan' in action! God do I feel bad for Bill's homelife and choice in 'job', and stupid Tom completely denying knowledge of Bill...so bad! And rude! Can't wait to see more! Keep up the spiffy work!
Author's Response: Haha thanks a lot! and i cant wait either til you all find out what happens:)
Date: 04/28/12 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Remember Me
nice. maybe Tom is so district to rules i think so that's why he doesn't try to do any move or maybe i'm wrong? well i can't wait to read more....and maybe something happen between Bill and Tom...?
Author's Response: I love how your imagination works. But you'll find out what happens later on:D
Date: 04/25/12 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
You should so continue this story! :)
Author's Response: I've never finished a story in my life. Thts why i just leave sad endings. But hopefully with the inspiration, i'll be able to get this project done
Date: 04/25/12 03:44 am Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
YES...start the next chapter!!!!!
Date: 04/25/12 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
YES...start the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: haha the next chapter will be posted on Friday for sure:)
Date: 04/24/12 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
Oh well, now I'm wondering all about Bill's business.
Can't wait for him and Tom to interact a little bit.
Author's Response: Yea it was kinda hard deciding on wat personality to give tom but I finally got it!
Date: 04/24/12 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
Uh, hellz yeeeaah you should start the next chapter! In fact I'm pretty upset you haven't finished already and weren't just sitting on it until you got a feel for its reception. Very nice start. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thx again. I've had to do a lot of "research" to do the next chapter...if u know wat i mean;D
Date: 04/24/12 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: We Meet Again
wonderful start cant wait for more
Author's Response: Yay 1st reviewer! The second chapter is almost done:)