Date: 03/11/13 01:31 pm Title: Monday
This story is absolutely great but only one thing is missing:the second chapter? :D
Please be awesome as always and update it? :)
xoxo, M.
Date: 06/03/12 10:07 am Title: Monday
Brilliant! Sexy AND funny. You captured all the nuances of their speech patterns. You also nailed the reason I am reading this and haven't checked the app for days. Very creative and clever.
Date: 04/23/12 10:32 pm Title: Monday
Hmmm...Weree you intentionally making it kinda Crack-y? Cuz no offense, thats kinda how it ended up... Interesting though. I can't wait to see more
Date: 04/22/12 11:49 pm Title: Monday
Omg this was hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/21/12 08:36 pm Title: Monday
if only, if only...
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/21/12 07:15 pm Title: Monday
@story note: That's okay! You're so awesome that I for one don't mind waiting.
Lmfao at the first section, in particular.
(Hehe, Cinna for the win)
Lol, yeah, *redness* would be unbecoming -- not the actual picture content or anything XDD
Oh gawd @ Julie's comment XD
Parting observation: I love how this has almost the same voice and tone as your 'Taking a Tumble' and 'Christmas Crack'. Though I suppose all of these are crack, so I guess that's the default tone, lolol.
Date: 04/21/12 04:14 pm Title: Monday
This was funny, witty, clever, awesome and I laughed laughed laughed and laughed. Somewhere in it all was also a sexy and tender and funny relationship, and that'll all sink in eventually... but for the moment, I'm just enjoying the pain in my belly from laughing, and looking forward to the next app update.
Date: 04/21/12 03:48 pm Title: Monday
Really hot and funny as hell. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/21/12 09:06 am Title: Monday
LOL! That was awesome. I wish the app was like that! Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/21/12 07:21 am Title: Monday
so damn friggin' hot (;
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Date: 04/21/12 03:54 am Title: Monday
lol nice story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/21/12 02:50 am Title: Monday
LOOLLLLL ooooooooh jeez, i saw the prompt and really hoped someone would pick it up xD sooo ridiculous and hilarious. love how you added that of course they wouldn't want to bore everyone with stuff like...what they post xD (though i really liked the tennis video, it was like...*breathes heavily* *chuckles gaily* *grunts cutely* hot
Date: 04/21/12 12:42 am Title: Monday
I loved the fan comments, they were just like comments under porn videos. XD Man, if the app were like this... I can't even begin to imagine it, it blows my mind. The app would be like this if Bill and Tom were porn stars, that's for sure. Awesome read! I liked the funny one-liners, like about them making pizza.