Date: 08/20/12 04:39 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Yes, yes, yes, featured! Oh, my god, this is so cool!!!!
I didnt even have the time to read, but I want to express my joy.
Author's Response: I know, I couldn't believe it! I was thinking Thairice's Bad had to be next, that story is so fantastic. But it's wonderful, wonderful to have a featured story, and thank you so much for being so happy for me. Hope you enjoy the next chapter Lynn!
Date: 08/18/12 06:52 pm Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
Hi mizu I found a little time to read.I'm glad Georg and Gustav are back, they are great. OMG Bill and his fantasies, I think Bill would be happy with a threesome Bill/Bu/Tom and... well, Kay (I'm sorry, I try to get used? Kay/Bill, is the second time I read Kay/Bill, the first was King of Kingz by Raiju just a little, okay no matter.. )
Bu and Kay return, so the twins will have fun. I must say I got nervous when Tom found the video, he wasn't angry, I think he was embarrassed because the video was private and Tom feels very insecure.
Author's Response: Hi, Stilldoll29! I'm so glad you found some time for the story! Aren't the G's fun? I wish they were more entwined with the major characters, but unfortunately, they're relegated to supporting cast. The twins and Bu and Kay are a lot to handle as it is. I loved Kay/Bill in King of Kingz - it's part of the reason I put Kay in for Bill's love interest here. That was one of the few parts of the story that didn't make me feel I was being cut open and left to bleed to death. God, I love KofK!! Anyway...yes, a threesome would be a lot of fun, but I can only imagine that Bill would be jealous and possessive of Tom! That would be so hilarious! And you're right, Tom's pretty insecure, about a lot of things. I think he also was worried about Bill watching that video and getting more twisted from it. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up tomorrow - sorry it's been delayed, but I'm trying to make it a good one. Thanks as always for your review!
Date: 08/15/12 12:47 pm Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
Don't quite know where to start. As usual an amazing chapter; so much in it. I was especially happy to see Georg and Gustav. I love those two so much. Gustav is such a gentle, loyal soul and such a little geek with his love of toys (reminds me of the guys in the Big Bang Theory). And he was so cute getting embarrased when Tom asked about his injury. Oh, and Georg is just so funny, bidding online for Cher dolls and trying to hide it from Gustie. I don't think Gus has to worry that Tom will be an ex-friend. I can't see Tom abandoning his mates just because of a bit of fame and fortune. I adore your insights into Bill's strange thought processes. Makes me wonder, though, if he was just as damaged as Tom only in a different way by their childhood experiences. I must admit I was a bit disappointed at first that we didn't get to see Bill watch the video clip, although his masturbation fantasies were such fun to read. But then, thinking about it, you used the situation so well to give a glimpse into Tom's insecurities over his still- very-new relationship with Bu. I had actually never considered that he might think Bu had sent the video to Bill. Bill was actually pretty lucky that Tom was so relieved that it hadn't been Bu's doing, and also that Tom is getting to understand just how weird Bill's mind can be. At least Bill had the decency to feel really guilty about it. Oh, and I nearly forgot, love the way Joel and Tom joke around with Bill's inability to remember names. And how Tom's idea of shopping for his clothes and home was so opposite to both Bill's and Joel's.
I'm sure I've left something out, but like I said, there's so much covered here. What's the next chapter...Bu and Kay returning home? More hot sex? Sido's trial. Oh, forgot to mention Tom's nightmare...memories or a bad omen? That's it for now. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hello, Helen! Love your review. Especially the part about wondering whether Tom's childhood abuse damaged Bill as well. That is such excellent insight! And it would explain why Bill has some issues with his brother. It would make sense that seeing it happen would trigger something in the sexual part of his brain. As for actually watching the clip, Tom would hate that - not just because it's private, and that would be embarrassing, but because he knows how much it would actually hurt Bill. Tom thinking Bu sent it...he just jumped right on that conclusion. Imagine if Bill was really screwed up, and tried to blame Bu! That would have created a very long and difficult to untangle mess. And Tom would have been hurt to the core. Whew, so glad it didn't go that way! I'm working on the next chapter and it'll be up tomorrow or Saturday. Oh, by the way, I started reading Gordon's Dilemma. Damn, Helen! It's like reading Thairice's Bad - I'm tense from the get-go! I'll have to digest it slowly, because it's so wonderfully horrid! I'll get a real review to you soon. (I really need a palate cleanser for all the tough ones I've been reading lately - something where Tom and Bill meet at a coffee shop and it's funny and sweet and silly and they fall in love the end). Thank you so much for your well-thought review, I always look forward to reading yours! - M
Date: 08/14/12 06:11 pm Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
Hi, just wanted to let you know I have read the chapter but I've been working hard on my next one so will write you a proper review tomorrow. Just to say...amazing as always.
Author's Response: Hi, Helen! Looking forward to reading your fabulous and always thoughtful reviews
Date: 08/14/12 12:36 pm Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
I love this story so much! The story line, the way its written and the obvious amount of research that has been put into it. I can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm thrilled to know you're reading! Thanks for taking the time to let me know :D
Date: 08/13/12 10:32 am Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
I've been so lazy about reviewing this story lately because I've been so busy. As always, this chapter was absolutely amazing! Pure perfection. I read it on my phone in the middle of an airport in Chicago because I knew I had to read it ASAP. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: You....you....you're on your way to China!!!! I so hope you'll have internet access, spcf! If not, I'm really going to miss you. But I hope you have a spectacularly interesting time. And I hope O'hare wasn't too bumpy - I hate going through Chicago! Thrilled to know you're still reading. And Bon voyage.
Date: 08/11/12 03:10 am Title: 19. The Queen's Secret
Another brilliant chapter. To be honest, I could follow your characters for another 50 chapters and not get bored. You've written them to be so engaging. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! This is a lovely review - short, but definitely makes me want to keep the story going!
Date: 08/06/12 09:56 am Title: 18. Regrets of the Fair Queen
Hola Mizu cómo estás,perdón por no comentar los 2 capítulos anteriores, he estado muy ocupada. Me asusté, pensé que Sido los mataría a todos, por suerte no.
Pobre Bill y su pierna rota, pero con el regalo de Kay (puedo llamarlo Bildo? XD)creo que lo olvidó. Tengo que decir que amo la relación de los gemelos y su conexión.. "I love my young sister" creo que esa es la película, la voy a ver..
Author's Response: Hello, Stilldoll! I think I've got most of it....It's okay that you missed a couple chapters, just happy to know you're reading (my job is seriously trying to kill me right now, so I understand). Yes, it's lucky Sido didn't hurt anyone! Bill's broken leg, well, it's a good thing he and Kay can work around it! Yes, Bildos, a brand new one for his box! Gemelos - twin? didn't come up in my translator, but it's logical that it means twin... I like their connection, too. Wonder if they had it all along but never knew because they weren't together. Yes, it's a movie, you're right. Pretty risque, too! Nothing shown, but plenty hinted at. Jun is just too cute. I like him best in Kimi Wa Petto, though. thanks for writing!
Date: 08/06/12 05:14 am Title: 18. Regrets of the Fair Queen
Woman, you have got to go there. I know Tom's squeeeeed out about anything sexual with his twin...but 4-some. Please! Pretty please with sprinkles on top! Oh, all hot under the collar now, better fire up the fan before I carry on. Another amazing chapter. All the drama at the beginning. Loved the twin-sense with Bill so determined to get to Tom even when his leg got broke and Tom feeling Bill's pain. Kay equally determined Bill shouldn't move. Bu coming to the rescue and beating Sido senseless. Must've been so hard for Bu and Kay not being able to go to the hospital with their boyfriends. Hope there's no repercussions for Bu smashing Sido to a pulp. So funny, Gordon taking care of his sons and feeling uncomfortable with them being so affectionate with each other. Love the little ways Bill's old behaviour sneaks in...like him still not knowing his houseboy's name. Like that Tom's starting to express his own interests and not just go along with whatever Bill decides for him, although he does it so tactfully so as not to hurt Bill's feelings. The sex was scorching...as always. Kay's eyes must've been out on stalks seeing Bill work the dildo into his arse. And Bu must've been drooling at both ends watching Tom jerking off. Oh, and the final scene with Bill being such a bad boy and sending the video clip to his email. Guess its not easy for him to change just like that, especially now the object of his illicit desires is around so much and they're even sharing a bed most of the time. I have this sinking feeling though that someone's going to discover what he's done...any of the other 3 finding out would be such bad news. Still hoping for some twincest, though. And, no, Bill beating off while watching the video does not count, just in case you're wondering! More, more, more. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!
Author's Response: You were so right about the twin pain thing (spoiler!). And you know I'd love an AU of this AU with all 4 of them in bed together! Or to have a little twincest on the side.... Not so sure this Tom would be ammenable to that, though, but hey, the story ain't done yet! I'm thrilled to tears that you liked the sex scenes. I don't want them to seem thrown in. These characters are all in new relationships and the sex is very very very important to all of them, so they gots to have it! Not quite sure what's gonna happen with the sex clip.... Wow, what if someone else entirely got a hold of it! Internet sensation! Poor Tom, he'd never get over it. Would undoubtably forgive Bill, though. And no, Bill beating off to watching Tom's sex face would most definitely NOT count as twincest! Working slowly but surely on the next, and if my job would quit trying to kill me, I might actually get some written! Hope life is finding you and yours all happy and good!
Date: 08/06/12 02:23 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Thanks.............. I hope............ Oh wat da hell, no hopin.......... I'm a sick sick sick twisted person, good think I'm always too busy to Finnish my stories, I'd probably get banned form da site, that beinb said keep an eye out, I'm plannin to post by next month. Stupid school keeps me so busy n tiered I have like 5 half stories I wanna Finnish
Date: 08/06/12 01:15 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
I want sido to be toms first anal............... N I was kinda hopin for tom to cry while havin sex wit bu cos he almost died.......... Back to sido, I want him to be all sorry n wanna be friends n da guys hold him down n rape him. Tom goes first..............that would be funny
Author's Response: *shakes head* Missy P, you are one twisted chick.
Date: 08/05/12 12:22 pm Title: 18. Regrets of the Fair Queen
This chapter came fast........... Thank u thank u thank u................ Ohh n MORE SEX...... Please....... I just love ur stories.........
Author's Response: Well, there you are! I was just wondering about you this morning. So, the sex...good? I'm sooo happy that you love my stories :)
Date: 08/05/12 07:22 am Title: 18. Regrets of the Fair Queen
Hiii, so! That was h-hot :D And Im glad nothing happened to Tom, I honestly thought this was his last day. I don't know what's your opinion on twincest, but after reading hundreds of them, i know that in any other story on this site Bill and Tom would be fucking like rabbits by chapter 2 :D I'm happy that here the twincest is present, but it actually is probably never going to be carried out, ( :( to twin fans :D ) but I guess that would only hurt Tom. So all in all thanks for mentioning Bill liking Tom that way, even if its a T/Bu and B/Kay story, and for the part where Bill sent the video to himself and similar parts :D
Btw, remember me once telling you about a story that is amazing, funny, but sad. about Bill constantly traveling in time? I couldn't find it for a long time, but now i have it, and re-read it like 2 times, so I thought I'll drop the name for you to check out because I know you'll love it- I will be by knw.
Now im going to watch the anime so until next chapter :). Dia
Author's Response: Hi Dia! Thanks for touching on the non-twincest weight of the story. Yes, Bill teases around it, and Tom had thought of it in the past, but this is not a B/T story. And I'm so glad you appreciate that. I think a lot of people skip my stories simply because they are NOT B/T! Oh, and the time traveler story? I have that saved! Started reading it just a few days ago, in fact. It already starts out so sad! I'm on "Tom, age 9," where he meets his 50 year old self, who has obviously already lost 50 yr old Tom, or 50 yr old Tom is sick, or something. Had to stop right there. It's a story I'm only going to be able to take a little at a time, I think :( Thanks for writing, always great to hear from you!
Date: 07/31/12 04:03 am Title: 17. Princely Legacy
Ah, yes, now I remember the box. Oh, you have so got to write a scene with Kay, Bill and the box's contents. Hope you're not thinking of ending this story any time soon because there are still so many possibilties to explore with these characters and situations. And I am working on mine, just have to be in the right frame of mind for the words to flow; if I'm not, then it ain't happening. Once again the story has taken on its own life - was only intended to be 2-3 chapters to finish off KUA and the pendrive issue...but it keeps on growing and getting more complicated. Damn, why do I do that to myself? I have a great idea for a longer sequel with a new set of issues for the twins to deal with that is set a few months in the future but this one has to get written first because the other one is a follow on. Anyway, stop reading my reviews and get writing. Okay?!!!
Author's Response: Laffin... I CAN'T! Whiney pout. It's 1:30 in the morning here. Worked til midnight, they're putting in a new computer system at work, which is going to be the end of the world, I'm pretty sure. We have to work at lightening speed with a thousand commands, and everything will be ALL different tomorrow! So I was reading to try to unwind. Anyway, I totally understand when stories just don't want to be ended, that's what happened with this one, so I feel for you! I'm glad you're so into that world that you're planning another sequel! As for this one, I'm pretty sure Kay is going to find out about the box. Should we capitalize it? The Box. Yes, that's good. Alright, Helen, going to bed now, I'll be working this starting day after tomorrow. And I hope all that you're managing to avoid all that olympics nightmare!
Date: 07/31/12 02:16 am Title: 17. Princely Legacy
I love it!! so intense!!! I like it the personalities of cada personaje
me fascina XD please upsate soon :)
Author's Response: Hola, Ninel, e muchas gracias! Update viernes!
Date: 07/30/12 08:18 pm Title: 17. Princely Legacy
Oh dear u blew my mind away. 'm feeling so bad for Tom now
Author's Response: Oops, hope your mind is back in place for the next chapter! We've got to find out what happens to Tom!
Date: 07/30/12 05:20 pm Title: 17. Princely Legacy
Nein! And it was all going so well up to the point when Sido went apeshit! D:
I love anything/everything by shitpisscatfuck, so we're good there. And I know what shnozzberries are and I think they have to do with Roald Dahl's books... maybe the BFG in particular. Or maybe those were schnozzcumbers.
I loved reading about Bu's love for Tom. It runs really deep, and it's cute to see Tom flounder and be all nervous and adorable yet totally in love too. ^_^ They are so cute when they interact.
Author's Response: Nooo, poor Tom! He's really going through the meat grinder in this story, isn't he! ...glad you've read s.p.c.f's work, lordy they are so fun! And shnozzberries - it's all I could hear in my head! Not from the book, but the 60's movie. But, very good! You get a gold star). I love Bu and Tom too, that's probably why I'm spending so much time each chapter with them, but there's so much going on that I have to write about other stuff, too :( Thanks for your review, Melluransa, always lovely to hear from you!
Date: 07/30/12 02:35 pm Title: 17. Princely Legacy
Right, well...there was hell of a lot I was thinking of writing about this chapter as I went along reading but you kind of blew that out of the water with that explosive ending! Damn! I didn't see that coming until just before it happened. Love how Tom's thoughts, even as he's being stalked by a gun-toting maniac, are all about protecting his twin. I have a theory, though, about the pain Tom feels...has he really been shot? Or maybe he's feeling his twin's pain? Maybe Sido decided to punish Tom by turning the gun on Bill? Okay, sorry if that screws anything up, but it was just a thought that just as Bill knew when Tom got beat up, maybe Tom's having sympathy pain.
And on to the other stuff. Bu taking care of Tom while he's flat out asleep on the sofa, and getting all riled up about the remnants of the bruising. And then...Midgets? So fucking funny, even if not exactly PC. Another weird sex chat, this time Kay asking Bu for advice. Definitely want to know about that box. And no, I'm not tired of the Tom/Bu sex scenes. How the hell can you make something so sexy out of a scene that includes a discussion on body funk? The word genius springs to mind. And Bu avoiding touching Tom with the finger that had been up his arse, and then sniffing his t shirt...adore that man for being so thoughtful and proving he loves everything about Tom, even his B.O. Loved the tickling scene in the car. It's little items like that that make this story so real, just the kind of thing brothers (and their boyfriends) might do, teasing each other. I've also been thinking about Kay being jealous of Tom and Bill's relationship and, going back to the sex talk, what the hell happens if Bill has one of his little fantasies while having sex with Kay and says his twin's name? As for your footnote... it shows, sweetie, that you spend a lot of time checking things out. Me, I'm more of an inventor, I do some research but prefer to use imaginary locations. Besides, I've never even been to the States and have no idea what LA is really like so no use pretending like I do. But I'm in awe of the way you introduce so much detail into your stories. Where do you find the time to do this research, woman, with your busy, busy life? Okay, there's a shitload more I could mention but then I'd have written as much as you. One more thing...cliffhanger? You sadist. Damn. Get writing now. That's an order!
Author's Response: I'm laughing right now. Love your review, Helen. Oh, except that first paragraph.... um... damn....dammit dammit. Not saying anything else bout it. Moving on...the box is Bill's Billdo box! It's in one of the chapters (Bu comes in, Bill has it open on the bed, and had just finished, you know, doing stuff with his toys. that's the box.) Body funk. You know, a lot of people don't like those kinds of things about sex, the noises, byproducts, smells, and they happen. Anal ain't clean, and I just had to put that out there. Tom is very self-conscious about that, doesn't want to think about Anis smelling his anus. Ewwww. Bu is the opposite, gets all into the funk. Well, a little, anyway. Yes, Kay is going to be jealous, because he wants Queenie all to himself, but he also wants him to be happy. If Bill said Tom's name during sex? That is a very interesting idea. Hm..... And I put that info in the footnote because I thought kids these days are information junkies, and maybe if they knew that Avalons is a real club, and the cafe is a real place, that they'd have fun looking them up, add the pictures to the story. (ahem...I really don't research that much, just a few minutes on each thing. Took me a few extra to decide on that limo that Kay got for his first date with Queenie, didn't want anything tacky). And cliffhanger, I know, I know!!! Next chapter is Friday, fingers crossed. Hope everything's well with you and you're working on yours, I'm waiting for a couple more chapters! Hurry!
Date: 07/30/12 05:47 am Title: 16. Holding Court
Hiii sorry for not reviewing for sooo loong. I love that Tom and Bu are getting so close so fast. and when Tom said I love you in the video...goood so cute :D Bill is turning human which is awesome, and the stunt that Tom pulled was genies! so just saying hi :)
Author's Response: Hi there, it's great to hear from you! Happy to know you're still out there reading, so thanks for dropping a review. Tom...yeah, he's pretty good at getting himself in trouble, huh? At least he told Bu he loves him, even if it was kinda secretely. Bu's needing to hear it! And yes, Bill is being brought to earth a little, but I'm thinking there's still some intregal weirdness that's gonna stick around! :D
Date: 07/30/12 12:17 am Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
you really have a good story here but need to fix chapter 5 you call the same dude tony troy and Trever its distracting
Author's Response: Thanks...but that's Bill changing his name, not an author mistake :)