I loved this. Great first scene-setting chapter. So much detail and the character-building was amazing. You do know I hate you, don't you? You are so fucking good at this shit it makes me doubt myself for days after reading your stuff. Only joking about the hate, I love you and everything you write...but I do doubt my own abilities when confronted with something this good. The way you've portrayed Bu is so realistic, and I adored the song lyrics and the trash talk and the fact that he's out and proud. Bill as the queen bitch is incredible too, love the father and son more like mother and daughter analogy. The sex was...wow...shit-hot. Bill as the underage boy hitting on the older rapper...so sexy. Instant hot flush. Because we already chatted I do know what Bill's problem is, but I can't wait to read the next chapter. Post soon...pretty please.

Author's Response: It's obviously been a long day for me....I accidentally sent your response as a review.... you'll have to check it there! Ugh....tired.