Date: 05/11/12 09:51 am Title: 2. Prince of the Blood
loved it!
Date: 05/11/12 08:23 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
loved it!
Date: 05/11/12 06:24 am Title: 6. Knight's Gambit
woooooowwww!!!!!!!!!!!! b29;
Author's Response: Laffin....thanks!
Date: 05/11/12 03:17 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Ya, things can do that..................... Ohh I was so happy wen it went through, its been 2 days without internet n I was twitchin, then it got through 2 ur new chapter n nealy died with happiness...........
Date: 05/10/12 11:55 pm Title: 6. Knight's Gambit
Haha, I knew Bu was bound to fall for the more real twin! I wonder of he will end up having both or none.
Author's Response: Ooooh, both?? That's a thought....
Date: 05/10/12 06:55 pm Title: 6. Knight's Gambit
Yay, I was able to read da new chapter, my net was buggin 4 a while but now its ok
Ahh! Ya Gordon needs to make things right wit Tom...................... I can actually see why they kissed, most people would say they can't believe they did that bt I can............. Its called chemistry people!!!!!
Author's Response: Hello Missy P! Good to hear your internet is working ;) And thanks for saying the kiss was believable (Bu kind of caught me by surprise as I wrote that! Probably himself, too). I can hardly wait to see what's going to happen!
Date: 05/10/12 06:33 pm Title: 6. Knight's Gambit
I loved the scene with Gordon and Tom so much. You write serious moments sometimes, and then you have me chuckling at the absolutely hilarious and ridiculous bits. I love this story and I love your characters!
Bill's gonna go apeshit if he finds out Tom and Bu kissed.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled you like it, thrilled you let me know. And I have a feeling Bill's going to go apeshit no matter what ;)
Date: 05/07/12 06:08 pm Title: 3. On her Majesty's Secret Servicing
To get such a royal treatment at the "resort" as Tom did I would go too... gladly... voluntarilly:-) Oh, and he was getting an oral from his fitness instructor? That surprised me to be honest. Up to this point I thought Queenie was the fairy of two brothers:-) Interesting.
Mini Cooper? You must be kidding me. It's the only car I have ever paid any attention to. I don't drive, but if I did I would get a Mini:-) Such a fancy, retro style cutie:-) Tom has obviously a grand taste:-)
Twins' conversation about rehab was pretty funny, Tom was pulling his brother's leg beautifully and enjoying it vehemently. Bill came across somehow as a little "simple", perhaps? Not too bright? High fashion must have sucked out all grey matter out of his brain:-)
"..., electrodes taped all over his naked body. After the shock of the image wore off, he saved it at the back of his mind for other uses, later….in private.” - what the ... ? Is Bill seriously lusting after his brother? That might explain certain things:-)
... on the other hand... no, it doesn't explain anything. Bill is a total nutcase and - "Why, after twenty-four years, he still yearned to be close to his emotionally unbalanced twin, he’d never understand." - is a very valid point indeed. Why does he still bother is beyond me:-/
"Bu turned up one of his very secret, very guilty pleasures on his tricked out stereo system. It was labeled on the computer as “Hablamos Espanol en Trente Diaz.” In reality, it was the soundtrack to the musical Chicago." - hilarious. That man is full of surprises:-) What other CDs does have misslabeled in his car? Celine Dion? :-)
Sex between Bill and Bubu in this chapter was so wickidly twisted and so, so funny at the same time. Bill is such a wacko and "Delusions of Narcissus" is such a fitting title to this story:-)
Author's Response: Hello again G&B! Thanks for such a great review. I love seeing the story through someone else's eyes, and to get such a long commentary is such a treat! rnYes, Tom in this story is very definitely a gay boy. (I don't "do" straight boys! Yawn. Nor will I do "Tom was straight, always had been, so why was he so attracted to Bill?" Nope, not gonna happen). rnI love the Mini Coops! Especially the slightly longer ones with the hearse style back doors. Too cute. rnI'm thinking Bill is just a little "off." And that it's just part of who he is, but it may get tipped into la-la land a little by certain events (or people. or both). High fashion keeps his gray matter calm ;)rnrnAnd Tom/Bill relationship is a bit complicated in this one. rnrnCeline Dion is too awful, even for flamers. But Bu does have some other little secrets hidden in his closet.....rnrnThanks again, so so much for your feedback! Na videnou!rn
Date: 05/06/12 05:56 pm Title: 2. Prince of the Blood
I love how you made Tom enter the scene. You just described his cloths, cornrows and eyes but I am melting already. Mystery about him is so palpable:-)
"No butter. No self-respecting gay man in L.A. ate butter." - that line had me crack up so hard. The gay men of LA need obviously to re-evalute their take on butter:-) That stuff tastes great and is also pretty darn healthy. And doesn't make fat! :-) (sorry for the sudden outburst, I always do that when people happen to slay dear butter of mine:-)
Haha - Bill calls it a rehab, his father a retreat - hilarious. Their bickering has been so entertaining. And I LOVE that Bill's father calls Tom Thomas. So different vibration to this name somehow; melting again:-)
Oh my God, you are going to kill me here - "egg white omelet with feta and tomatoes" - those guys have a totally wrong perception of right kind of nutrition. Egg white omelet? My heart bleeds just from reading about it:-)
- ok I am not gonna comment on a fat free milk and poisonous calorie free artificial sweetener coffee thing:-)
"If he was going to support the gay community, he wouldn’t put up with hetero shenanigans." - where are you coming up with those lines? I can't stop laughing.
You know, when you used "his favorite son" when Gordin reffered to Bill, that stung quite a bit to be honest and it has nothing to do with this story, Bill or Tom. I kinda experrienced same sort of thing with my other sibling, my mom calling him "my favorite, more loved child" and now, when I am an adult myself, having a family and a child of my own, I look at it as the most disgusting thing a parent can do - to favor one child above the other like that. No wonder, Tom has been a silent, withdrawn one. Such a painful thing to experince. And for Bill? He trully puzzles me. What on earth could make him hate his brother like that. Just the way he and his fathre speak about him, as if he was some kind of comodity of theirs. Jeeees.
The club scene and Bu and Tom' exchange was really interesting, although it made me a little sad again, Tom's position in his own family making him an unwanted outcast:-( Interesting indeed.
Author's Response: Hi G&B (great color combo, by the way, if you chose the name for that)....I am so, so glad you caught the frantic diet disasters of these guys, I was laughing to myself the whole time I put it in there (nasty calorie free chemicals! Non fat milk! Yuck! And no butter? Kill me now). Those finicky L.A. gays....like girls who insist on being a size 2. rnrnLove that you had so many quotes and I'm so happy to make you laugh. rnrnI'm sorry your mom had a favorite child (normal) AND let you know it (cruel). Had a little of that going on in my house, as well. We'll see a little more of the Gordon/Tom dynamics in the upcoming chapter. Bill's issues - I think just being ignored by Mom and Dad put the wheels in motion, but there are some childhood memories that'll be coming out eventually that tell how Bill was shoved deeper into his own neuroses. And Bu/Tom....I'm getting sooo excited (laffin/clapping/laffin/clapping/jumping up and down). rnrnLove your long, wonderful reviews, I'm so happy to know you're out there reading!
Date: 05/06/12 05:41 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Hi Mizu!!! I have been sooo busy lately, god... and I couldn't sit and take my time to read, well only the first chapter, but I already like it, Bill is a crazy gay bitch and I like a more real Bu as a rapper but I hope he doesn't be too gay. I love a bisexual Bill and a manly, straight but sexually confused Anis hahaha!
Author's Response: Hi Constanza, so good to hear from you! I am loving this crazy Bill. Wondering just how bad he's going to get. As for Anis - I'm thinking he keeps a dress hidden somewhere in the closet (laffin). We'll have to see how far his gay goes, oh, I can't wait! Thanks for writing, hope to hear more from you :D
Date: 05/06/12 04:17 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
A friend of mine brought me here. She was vaxing lyrical about your previous stories but because I have my limits when it comes to Billshido pairing I passed.
This time though, I decided to give it a try and I am more than happy that I did. I got so pulled into this story and your writing style is amazing. I love all the humor, wit and sarcasm you have been using and the characterization of Bill and Bubu is priceless. They are so full of themselves I can't stop grinning (btw, you say "bubu" in Czech when you want to scare small children - quite fitting :-)))
I would have been praising you more but it's just a beginning so I guess I will get plenty of opportunities to do it also later, when I am more into the story:-)
Author's Response: Now you've got ME grinning like a fool. I'm so glad you gave me a chance! Sorry to say that all my stories (so far) are Billshido pairings and I hope that doesn't disappoint you too much. Thank you so much for letting me know what you think! As for scaring small children - if I could tolerate them in my presence, it would be a hobby! rnrnHopefully getting the next chapter up today, working extra hard to make it better for readers like you! Thanks!
Date: 05/03/12 03:41 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
I love the Gs. I was never into all that disco stuff in the 70s and I've never even seen Saturday Night Fever (more of a Deep Purple girl myself)but I love the way you write Georg's fascination with it and really take the mickey out of it all. And my next chapter went up yesterday. Its a bonus one because it got too involved to be tagged on in the Epilogue. Epilogue is written though and will also be posted this week. Then its all done until I decide to knuckle down and write the sequel. Can't wait for the party and look-see who gets off with who (whom?).
Author's Response: I love this super flamer Geo in his tight tiny clothing - I'll make sure he's in the next chapter, which has a rough outline right now. rnLooking forward to your last couple of chapters - man, your story wrung me out!
Date: 05/03/12 01:19 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
I'll make sure I find 1 before I go
Date: 05/02/12 08:58 am Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
Fucking amazing! Ooooh, that threesome.Bill getting drilled at both ends. Damn! I never expected Bu to be cool with that. So glad he was because it was hot, hot, HOT! And Gustav...so cute with his crush on Tom. And waking up in bed with Georg with his toenails painted pink. So funny. Willing to sell his mother to a brothel for chance with Tom. LOL!!! I can't wait for the party. Wonder if both Bu and Kay will be hitting on Bill's twin brother! Won't that piss the Queen off?
Author's Response: Hi Helen! I was sooo happy you got a few laughs (I'm finding it a little difficult to walk that fine line between funny absurd humor and silly absurd humor, because once I go with absurd, I really want to take it far out. Had to rewrite a lot and keep pulling it in. But the G's give me a little wiggle room on that). I was a bit surprised Bu was okay with the 3 way, too, but then again, their relationship is based very strongly on sex, and because they get just so darned turned on by each other, I think it opens them up to things like a quick, convenient 3 way. And thanks for letting me know you liked it that much! rnParty's coming up, hopefully I'll get it done Sunday, but there may be a delay of several days. I'm wondering who's going to flirt with whom, myself! And when are you posting the last chapter!!!!!
Date: 05/02/12 01:09 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Yay party scene.
Ya goin home to look at dust till schools open again, all I have is da internet on my phone n a TV wit 5 veiwable channels ( all the other channela eather suck or ma dad doesn't pay 4 them so we dnt get em ) god its gonna be borin, at least it will let me no wen there's a new chapter so I'll get to read it even if I cnt read the other stories.
Thanks though bt really I think Bill should end up in a mental institute n Tom n Bubu should end up together
Author's Response: LMAO - I think I agree with you there, Missy P!rnrnAnd hey, dust doesn't have to be boring. Microscopes make everything better.
Date: 05/01/12 05:41 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
and you still have no banner...:(
Author's Response: I need banners for all of them, but I hate to beg people. Had sent a couple emails out for my first story and never got a reply. Never had anyone offer. So, here I sit, bannerless. Maybe I should stop being lazy and learn how to make them myself :[
Date: 05/01/12 05:30 pm Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
You are the best.
Giggling wildly here too. That was the most hilariuos sex scene ever!!!! Never mind the fact that you managed to write a threesome, I absolutely cracked every time You called the kitchen boy a different name. We should thank Trevor...ah, Troy...Tony? ... for his guest show. God, Im still laughing. You are a genius, and getting better with every line.
Please, humor me and keep Trev...Troy...(Tony?) in the story for as long as you can. I swear I dont know his name right now.
And butterflies with little Tom faces!!!???? Im dead here...
Author's Response: Oh, my gawd, did I want to write a threesome bad, but I had to wait for characters who actually wanted one. Didn't expect Bu to give in so quickly, to be honest. I was dumb - Bu is a MAN. Doesn't take that much. rnI'm thinking Trevor (pretty sure that's the real name. Bill doesn't pay too much attention to the insignificant details, does he?) will stick around for a bit. Maybe the threesome can get a little more interesting. rnrnPoor Gustav and those little butterflies (so glad you pictured it, omg almost died when I did!)rnrnYour reviews are so fun, makes me wanna hurry and get that next chapter written....dang, do I even really NEED to eat?
Date: 05/01/12 04:17 pm Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
omg.........................
pls dnt be mad bt i ddnt realize it was you till i got a good look at ur name
Iv been reading this all this time and i dnt no that u wrote it
imma terrible fan, i no i no
Bt plus side LOVE LOVE LOVE the new story, bill is such a bitch
is Bu gonna end up wit Tom?........... pls say yes it would be HIGH-lerious and so so so touchin and such a great story and ohhh im ramblin again.......... sorry
hopefully durin ma school holidays ma internet wont ack like a bitch, i dnt think i could stand missin out on readin new chapters right when u post em, it would be sad to have to wait three months to read da story
Author's Response: Missy P! Good to hear from you, how's it going? Having fun in school? Looking forward to the holidays? Must be nice! rnrnDefinitely wouldn't count you as a "terrible fan." rnrnI'm thrilled that you're enjoying this one so far, it's been a blast to write. Party scene next? Not that the last didn't have its own party (aaahahahaaaa BAD Bill/Bu!). As for Tom, well, I had to add Tom/Bushido as a pairing because I completely forgot (sometimes having to list everything that's in a story is kind of a bummer, can't have any secrets), but we'll see to what extent they get together. rnrnThree months would be a loooong time off this site, god, that would suck. Hopefully you won't go through the torture. I'll try to have a chapter (maybe 2) up every week, not sure how long it'll take til it's finished though. rnrnThanks for your review, as always!
Date: 05/01/12 12:47 pm Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
Oh shit! This was a hot scene! :-) I so enjoyed it with three of them. Bill's vision was clear to me, instead of Troy (Tony, Trevor :-D), he saw Tom at the end. I look forward to a birthday party with Tom. There all enjoy it, except Bill. :-D He will devise a strategy "to get rid of Tom." I doubt that he succeeds. :-D I will not keep my fingers crossed for Queene, however. :-D J. :o)
Author's Response: Dirty sex!!! How fun! And dirty Bill, picturing his twin. How warped is that? So, we're all for Team Tom this story, hm? :)
Date: 05/01/12 03:23 am Title: 5. Pawn takes Queen
Tha way Bill slammed the door after the possible make up sex was indeed royal. Right at the height of the nickname. Queenie.
I expected him and Bu not to make up so quickly, but he seemed quite panicked and I really wonder if its more than just a good arrangement between them. He seems to care too much if he loses Bu and Bu is so caring...
Is it love?
I had to stop and say that, now I go back reading.
Man, I love this fic, its your best yet! ALL the characters have their place, besides Bill, Bu and Tom.
And it was awesome how you showed the dynamics between Bill and Gordon, that was unexpected to me.
Author's Response: Hi Lynn Ivan! I'm so happy you're reading, yay! rnrnI'm having so much fun with this story. Thanks for saying it's the best yet - I re-read my stories several weeks after posting them, just to see what I think, and I'm in the middle of A Light in the Fog, and it seems so fluffy and silly-romantic (not in a bad way, but maybe a touch over the edge? But then again, I'm a sucker for romance, really). And I wanted to try to do something a little different. So here we are. Not that this isn't going to get romantic, I just loooove the romance, but I wanted to make it not as hard hitting. rnrnPlus, with people like you reviewing, I have to try to keep improving! rnrnAs for whether it's love between B/B, well.....they haven't let me know yet ;)rnrnThanks again for letting me know you're with me.