Date: 06/28/12 07:18 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Yay, sorry ddnt mean to squik.......... Ok I did bt it dsnt matter, I have one more chapter to ready
Ohh ur da best mizu n now its time for me to brake my promis.......... remeber how I said if shrouded in fog endded well I'd review every chapter of every story u write, I won't do that cos its annoyin n sumtimes I say stupid things........... So I'll write the occasionall review bt I'll still read every story
So u dnt have to put up wit it anymore. I'm not sayin I'll dissapear, or write sensical reviews bt I'll Only write if I need to or to make sure I'm wit u or ask a question or share an idea
I still have to catch up on mirror image, I'll do it wen I get back to skul, I'll have better net then bt its only in August so be expectin my frustrated critizimn, just cos I'll feel Like it
Now dnt think da crazy will go away.......... I'm hear to stay bt I'll tame it a lil
Cnt wait for da new chapter n like always I creeply love you
Author's Response: Missy P, I'm so glad to know you'll be out there being all creepy on me in such a loving way. Looking forward to more of these interestingly spelled reviews (no worries about writing on each chapter, damn, that would get tiring). New chapter for you no later than tomorrow!
Date: 06/27/12 11:18 pm Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
I still hate bill but love tom and bu. And kay is just ugh too. A jerk for a jerk. (;
10/10
*****
Author's Response: More Tom/Bu in the next chapter. And (sorry) more Bill and Kay! :\
Date: 06/27/12 09:55 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Loved this universe you created. It is absolutely essential to write an epilogue to this story. We readers have too many loose ends to deal with. What's with the guy that owed Tom a favor and what did he do to Sido? Can Bill keep his head together? What happens with Bill and Kenneth? At the very least, we need a little more hot man on man action with Bu and Tom. Leaving us with a one sided blow job, come on. Full penetration or go home. Why not let them act on their deepest longings and take us along for the ride?? Please....
Author's Response: Okay, I'm thinking you have me convinced (mainly because of the "one sided blow job" not being fair - you're right! I will add an epilogue-slash-sequel or chapter, not sure which (worried that people who have already finished the story won't realize it's been added to, but I'll see what I can do). I'm so glad you reviewed - it does make a difference!rn
Date: 06/27/12 05:51 pm Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Sweetie, Im in Italy with work, it was a exhausting day, but you made it perfect with this. Review will follow. Love you and yout talent.
Author's Response: Hello Lynn Ivan and I hope you're finding time to do more than work in Italy(now that you've finished the story, of course). Very much looking forward to the review!
Date: 06/27/12 05:31 pm Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
I really enjoyed reading this story, in the end I remembered the "Keepin Queenie Happy" song.
I like the idea of a sequel, the relationship between Bu&Tom maybe Bill could fall in love with Kay or anyone else..
Author's Response: Okay, I'm adding to the story, don't get rid of it yet!
Date: 06/27/12 05:05 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Yay sequal, n u can kick sido's ass............ N we can watch tom cry while bu ducks him............ N see bill convince tom to top........ N get bill to get da same wolf tatoo or wateva it is, I hope its cute......... Anyway I'll let u be da writer n decide.............. U should seriously concider this
Author's Response: Okay, Missy P, I'm adding to this one. You might just get to see some of this in action!
Date: 06/27/12 09:47 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Maybe a little shortie sequel a few years down the line to see how Kenneth and Bill (as well as Bu and Tom) are doing? I love this story so much I don't wanna let it go yet. :)
Author's Response: You and me both, LMS! My brain is starting to play with the idea of a sequel (obviously, I do enjoy writing those sequels - it's so hard to give up these little worlds!) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/27/12 09:31 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
I want to see glimpses into the twins' past, like the different twincest moments the shared growing up and all the things they talked about in the bath. Maybe, if you wanted to, you could do a little side story of their visits to a therapist like Tom had considered, and tell the stories of their past through that. I also wanna hear about Bill's several year long seduction of Bushido. And I wouldn't mind hearing an update about how Bill and Kay One are doing together ;)
Author's Response: That's a second vote for flashbacks. We'll see! I wanna see Bill and Kay One too! I just loved how silly Kay was for him!
Date: 06/27/12 07:18 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Ahh pls do just one more..........pls pls pls!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Missy P! So, you want more....well, I might be doing a shorty sequel. I really want to see Bill and Kay, and maybe take a peek in at Bu and Tom to see how they're doing. If not, I have a couple of other story ideas (with, of course, lots and lots of sex. We'll pretend it's just for you).
Date: 06/27/12 06:16 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
what a small kinda flash back sequel? kinda like to fill in the gaps we only got glimpses off? like the twins past, and how they fully ended up how they did? kinda like how it started their downfall? idk just a suggestion
anyway, loved this story and sad to see it end, but happy it ended on a good note :D
Author's Response: I was sorry to see it end, too! This was so fun. Thinking of a small sequel, but mainly focused on the future. We'll see - I'll keep you in mind ;)
Date: 06/27/12 04:23 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
It is so nice, I like this story, you are great writer, I love your storys, so keep writing and I will keep reading :)
Author's Response: Thanks, bookme! I'll be working on the next as soon as I make up my mind which story to start. Happy to know you're out there :D
Date: 06/26/12 10:41 pm Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Awww i love them happy, twins are too cute! It was a funny story. I hope another billshido in the near future darling ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a sucker for Billshido. But I am thinking of doing a small sequel to this, because I loved this little world and I kinda wanna see Bill and Kay in the future!
Date: 06/24/12 01:13 am Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
Yay! They're together again. Poor Tom had to get beat up for it to happen. Well, Tom wins in the end... he has he brother and Bu now. :) I wonder who Bill will be in a relationship with or if he'll just focus on Tom.
Date: 06/24/12 01:03 am Title: 11. Queen of the Court
Poor Tom! Bill's very set in his delusional ways. :(
Date: 06/21/12 04:44 pm Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
I just really dislike bill and kay. Tom and Bu are just fine, though! :D
Author's Response: Well, okay! It would be nice to hear some reasons behind this, but I'm glad you're alright with Tom and Bu :D
Date: 06/21/12 09:35 am Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
Hi there. Sorry for the late review but loads has been going on here. This was another amazing chapter. Even though it was horrible when Tom got beaten up, I absolutely adored the whole twin bond thing that had Bill diving out of the bed and going to save him even though he had no idea what had happened. Just like he was on autopilot, or there was some invisible cord drawing him inextricably towards his injured twin. Funny as heck when he kept trying on the wrong trousers. I love how you worked things out, that Tom getting hurt brought the twins back together. Oh, and before that...the whole thing with Tom and Bushido. Oh, Bu is so lovely, waiting outside Tom's apartment and falling asleep...and the sex, so sweet and sad and volcanic!!! And Kay is so damned cute. It could just work with him and Bill because he is such a sap for Queenie and will tell him every minute how beautiful he is, which is just what Bill needs for his fragile ego. And now Tom and Bill are together again. So lovely. And Bill's okay that Tom's with Bu. Though I think Bu would be wise to keep that awful comment of Bill's from the last chapter all to himself. No need to hurt Tom unnecessarily, especially as Bill clearly didn't mean it. Just one gripe...poor Andrej is going to wake up all alone in an empty bed. I hope he's a forgiving friend; maybe he'll forgive and forget after the great sex he had with Bill and Kay. LOL!!! So sad that the next chapter will be the last; I've really enjoyed this whole story. Thank you.
Author's Response: Hello Helen! Wonderful review, as always :D I tried to keep the beating down to a minimum - seems to be a reoccuring theme in my stories, but I do love a little hurt, a little comfort. As I was writing the scene with Bill on autopilot (just right!) I thought about you! I know you just adore the "twin" moments, so I was very much hoping you'd like it! I would hope that Bill would have come around anyway, but knowing his brother needed him just helped speed it along. You called Bu "lovely!" Yay! You know how much I enjoy making him likeable, so that comment gave me a huge smile. I'm so glad the sex scene came out "sweet and sad and volcanic" - that's EXACTLY what I was trying to do! (I'm so thrilled that you read my stories! oh, and by the way, I've got your newest one on queue, as soon as there are a few more chapters, I'm diving in!)....And I can't believe a "lovely" Bu would EVER tell Tom about that horrid comment ;) As for pretty Andrej, I'm sure he'll take it all in stride. I would really like to write a story that has him featuring prominently..... Not sure the next chapter will be the last, the writing of it is unfolding in slow scenes, and I really love this little world and don't want to leave it, so maybe there will be two (long ones, I'm hoping!). Thank you, Helen for continuing to review, I always love hearing from you!
Date: 06/20/12 06:28 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Ohh yay, its like we have da same vagina......... Jk
Ok honestly I'm not ashamed of my addiction, I just dnt wanna scare u off bt ya I no u put a lot of sex in ur stories, I just want more.
Date: 06/19/12 04:24 pm Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
It was really emotional how Bu was finally allowed to take care of Tom. The thrilling moments where Tom fell to pieces under him. Very nicely done.
But then that pig Sido went and beat up Tom even though it could never compare to what Tom did to him. Sick individual and although 'one shouldn't encourage violence' I want Sido to suffer for this from Bu's hand ... vigorously :D
Lastly... I'm chuffed that Billi and Tom are reunited and I hope sincerely Bill's brain doesn't short circuit again because Tom is too precious :)
Author's Response: Hello, MD-E! Glad you liked the part where Tom "fell to pieces" (wonderfully put!)...I was a little worried about it coming out the way I felt and saw it happening, so thanks for letting me know you liked it! rnSido - what a jerk! I'm wondering if Bu is going to go all vigilante on him..... I've got your vote for a big fat yes, so I'll keep that in mind! And I'm relieved for B&T too - Pulling them apart was not fun! Thanks for the review, as always :D
Date: 06/19/12 02:52 pm Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
Look. I had to stop reading. The scene between Tom and Bu was too intense.
I will take a break and resume reading.
Huh. The fact that Tom had tears running down while Bu was ...doing things to him was just too much.
Author's Response: Wow. Flattered beyond belief over here. Hope to hear your reaction to the whole thing once you're recovered!
Date: 06/19/12 05:42 am Title: 12. Changing of the Guard
Ahh, I love how ur stories end.................remember to add lot of sex to the end.......... I love sex..... I mean I like reading it............ I mean.......just add sex and stop wit lookin at me like I'm a sex addict........... I might be one bt that doesn't mean u have to withold it from me....... That kinda sounded like rape ............ Ok I need to see a therapist............. Cnt wait for da next chapter
Author's Response: Missy P...the meds aren't working... As for the sex...you HAVE been paying attention to my stories, right? I started coming (hahahaha!) to this website for the NC17! Sex is waaayyyy too important to let fall to the wayside. Man on Man Action is a reason to live! So I understand the addiction. Repeat after me: "My name is Missy P, and I am a slash-fiction sex scene addict. And I'm okay with that." There, no need for therapy! Anyway, glad you keep up with the story, even with the internet issues, which I know must be frustrating when you need a fix!