Date: 07/12/12 05:56 am Title: 15. Crown the Prince
You are getting better by the second. i dont even know where to start.
The best part, for me, was how Bu was comparing tom with Bill. It was like bill had been the prequel for his twin. All the interaction in this chapter was brilliantly built. I will let it simmer for a while and then review again.
Author's Response: Can hardly wait to read it, you know I love your reviews!
Date: 07/12/12 02:31 am Title: 15. Crown the Prince
Sex was over the top, thank you ;) It was the awesomest. I had a fictional smoke afterwards.
It's shocking to get Tom's sexual history. How he suffered alone with no one to confide in. I also feel very sorry for Bill who's finally gotten a clue and is discovering all backwards. It's going to take some time before he's caught up on all he ignored from his childhood, but he's incredibly lucky Tom is endlessly understanding and forgiving.
Bill is making up for it the best he can and he's doing amazing because it's really no effort when you love your sibling the way he does now.
I also think Bill is learning. By loving someone more than yourself, you learn to perhaps love the lover you're dealt... He didn't have the tools to love Bu back then, but I think he has them now to love Kay... and maybe that's also a reason why he regrets losing Bu. Bu at the same time, he wouldn't have been able to love Bu then... you know? *g*
Author's Response: Hi, MD-E! I'm so glad the sex scene worked for you, it took a little tinkering with, so it's nice to hear. I think Bill is lucky to have Tom, too. Hopefully he won't take advantage of him! As for Bill and Bu, sometimes, the love just doesn't happen. But he's definitely gonna like the way Kay spoils him ;) Getting a lot of people saying they don't like Bill/Kay, but not any reasons why, which would help me understand if it's the writing, the character, or they just scrunch their noses at the idea. Guess I'll just have to read it carefully, maybe it's something I'm missing. Oh well. Anyway, thanks as always for your review !
Date: 07/11/12 09:43 pm Title: 15. Crown the Prince
So kawaiiiiiii!
Author's Response: Wakarimasu!!! Arigato !
Date: 07/11/12 08:26 pm Title: 15. Crown the Prince
The banner is beautiful, at first only looked at Bill Tom and Bu,I thought another Billshido (my beloved Billshido) but looking at the title I almost cried :).
Ok, Tom's life was sad, everything that happened but I'm glad Bill is with him. The sex scene was good, Bu was so patient with Tom and Bill is so protective with him , is like automatic.
Bu want to rap about Tom's neck? I'd love to see that..
Author's Response: That rap song would be something, huh? We'll see....I do know how you feel about Billshido, this was a difficult departure for me. Next story.... Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/11/12 02:41 pm Title: 15. Crown the Prince
As good as always. I literally "eat" every story you write honey. I can read Tomshido, but i really don't like Bill/Kay at all... Can you post your pic in your profile please?
Author's Response: Lol....thanks, Constanza, thrilled you're still with me. You're the second or third person who said they don't like Bill/Kay, but no one will give me a reason. Is it just that you don't like Kay? Something about the character, the plot, the story? Maybe I can make it more appealing, if I knew what was coming across as not so good... As for a pic, I'm a bit shy about this hobby of mine, so I like to keep it on the down low...
Date: 07/11/12 02:32 am Title: 15. Crown the Prince
Let me just start out by saying this, I really meant to review the last 2 or 3 chapters, but they have left me pondering for so long that I haven’t been able to formulate my thoughts clearly enough to write them, so a million apologies for that. Let be perfectly clear right now-This chapter is EVERYTHING! I just couldn’t Not review this chapter (forgive the double negative, but I just had to say it that way) It never ceases to amaze me how Bill gets so mentally sidetracked during conversations. It’s both funny as hell and slightly disturbing. Then we have Tom, poor used and abused Tom. He is just the saddest thing ever, I mean he’s just basically taken abuse throughout his entire life without having anyone to talk to or any outlet for it. Now, I have made it known in the past that my favorite pairing in the whole entire world is Bill/Bushido and that hasn’t changed, but what I will say is that the sex scene between Tom and Bushido was more than just tolerable to me- it was Hot, like camels balls hot. I usually have such a hard time imaging Tom as a bottom when reading fics, but you have made a believer out of me; how do you do that? The scene was just everything- sexy, dirty, loving, special, careful, intense, overwhelming, I could just go on and on. Their relationship has really grown on me in this story, but I also love the fact that Bill and Tom’s relationship is borderline inappropriate. I’m sick like that ya know.lol. As far as Bill goes, I still feel like he is still somewhat of an enigma. He’s so weird, his mental process is so formulaic in a way, “MUST PROTECT TOM”, “MUST TAKE CARE OF TOM” so robotic. They both need therapy, but I feel like Bill really has a mental illness of some sort. You definitely gave this fic the most fitting title. Anyway, I’ve rambled long enough, just wanted to say a billion thanks for your incredible writing.
Off Topic: I think it’s really cool how you show love for other great writers on the site, always putting in a plug here or there for them. That says a lot about you as a person. :)
Author's Response: Wow, Minibar. Just...wow. First off, thank you, this was beautiful and touching and made me cry like Tom. Well, not that much (he's a bit of the crybaby in this story, but I just love that about the guy). I love your review, how you get into Bill's ever-so-slightly demented psyche. After reading Mohanrock's Workout (which I do highly recommend), I was inspired to do a somewhat wacky Bill. Just had to wait for him to grow in the dark recesses of my mind. Not that I have a lot of dark recesses. Those are mainly used for clutter and artwork I have no more wallspace for. Anyway. See how your review got me all flustered? As for Tom. And Bu. I too am the diehard Billshido lover! But reading a story by Amdee (laffin...I'm soooo original, huh!) I thought I'd have to try Tomshido. As I wrote in another review response, I have a screensaver at work that I stare at all day, of desert mountains, and I kept picturing Tom and Bu having some hot nature sex. And that's really how the story idea grabbed me. And if I was going to do Tom and Bu, it had to be right, and sexy, and so I really had to get Tom's character right. Other than a small, secret pink boa in his closet, Bu is all manly man. Can't change that about him, don't wanna. So Tom had to have that soft, emotional side. And I'm so, so, so glad that you told me that you DON'T like Tomshido. But that this story made them camel's balls hot, and that's some pretty fucking hot hotness. Such an amazing compliment! Bill...I'm thinking he's just going to stay kind of off the wall. His little proclivity for his brother's mouth is like having a big mosquito bite - don't scratch it don't scratch it! Just ignore it, it'll go away...but you scratch, and it feeeelllssss sooooo goooood. I'm so thrilled with your review, it was wonderful to read (and re-read). As for talking about other writers - we're a nicely warped little community here, and I just love us! Some of the stories here have blown me away, and I love knowing that everyone reading my stories will probably feel the same way. Have you read Raiju's King of Kingz? Jeeesuuus.
Date: 07/10/12 08:18 pm Title: 15. Crown the Prince
Tom ddnt cry :-( bt its ok, how bout a double date night........... Mmm
It sure took u long enough to post, I was startin to worry bt u posted so .... Yay!!
Make tom cry in bed, its kinda sexy
Author's Response: I loooove the crying Tom, Missy P. But thought maybe he was on estrogen overload. He did cry, though, a little. You missed it? Oh, and sorry for being one day late :P
Date: 07/10/12 08:10 pm Title: 15. Crown the Prince
If your plan was to kill me with the perfection of this chapter, then it worked. THERE WERE SO MANY THINGS THAT I LOVED! Bill having to will himself to behave while his cock was right in front of Tom's face, his PROTECT TOM intuition flaring up again :) And the fact that Bill wasn't worried just about Tom, but also about Bu and how long he'd be able to go without sex. Made me think that Bill would offer himself up to Bu to hold him over as far as sex until Tom was ready, but luckily our little Tomi pulled through! I LOVED the image of Tom coming to sell Girl Scout cookies (something I did for YEARS) and then complimenting Bu's shirt lol. And Gordon's slight jealousy of the twins was PERFECT!! I hope the three of them can have some super gay father-son bonding in the future, which I imagine that for the 3 of them would be the exact opposite of the stereotypical "manly" bonding between father and son. Of course, Bill didn't seem so sure if he was willing to share Tom with Gordon AND Bu, which is hilarious because before he was the opposite with not wanting Tom to steal their attention from him. Bill desperately wanting to become an uncle made me think of a mother getting on her kids' case to make her a grandmother. Uncle Bill would be the coolest/weirdest uncle ever! I really would love to hear Bushido rap about Tom's body. I'd die if that ever happened in real life. OMG I'm rambling now but I absolutely loved this and I feel like such a stalker because I spent my entire weekend reading Shrouded in Fog and A Light in the Fog and then I felt guilty because I didn't leave reviews on ever single chapter like I should have so that I could communicate to you that you're the most amazing person ever. But now I sound like a total creep. I am so sorry.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, s.p.c.f.! I didn't mean to kill you! Please, please come back to me, I love your reviews too much for you to be dead! ..... Okay, now that's out of the way...Wouldn't Bill make a cool uncle! He'd say the weirdest shit to a little kid. And Gordon - I love him. He's been so fun in this story, the poor, frustrated man. All your comments on the little bits in the story made me smile myself silly. It was a great chapter to write - the sex scene took a bit of work, hope it came across like I wanted it to. I'd just love for Bu to rap about Tom's neck, too! So glad you took the time to write. I'd also love to know what you thought about the Fog stories! As for being the most amazing person, ever...well, that's a lot to live up to, but I will do my best, and hope you're just as happy with my future stories! Creepy? Not at all!!! I have a fan!
Date: 07/08/12 08:12 am Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
hmm, just had a look and for some reason it hasn't posted all of my review :(, so
CONTINUATION..
as i was saying
It could become your calling card (ha, like your some kind of criminal, well this story had stolen my heart!)
From what I’ve studied in psychology, I can see how bill turned out as he did, the guilt must have been so overwhelming that he couldn’t face it so -bit of Freudian theory- sublimated it into anger. From mere observation in everyday life, you can see how people use anger as a defence all the time; if they convince themselves that they are the one who has been wronged, then they don’t have to feel scared or in bills case guilty and depressed.
Troy, tony, Trevor. Very humorous, I loved it! I think this was a good technique you used to show bills instability and shallowness of attention span. And helped with the characterisation of his personality, the suggestion ‘the helps’ name is below his notice.
I think you are very talented at writing smut! I loved the first threesome, (and the second,) it was really steamy! And inventive, sometimes it gets to the point where you think you’ve read it all when it comes to sex you know? But I thought in particular, Bu watching Bill fellate troy (tony, trevor :D couldn’t help it) like it was his own personal pornographic show then licking Bill lip, was INCREDIBLE! You managed to convey how aroused and overwhelmed Bill was very skilfully.
Don’t have one single bad word to say about this story! The only thing is reading this story made me a little bit embarrassed with myself, as it caused me to realise what a crazy bill Kaulitz fan I must be!; even though his character is so messed up and nasty in this story I still love him! Even though he clearly had issues, it’s a testament to your skill as a writer that you’ve still managed to make him (to me at least) endearing, and likeable. Although maybe I’m just really biased! Honestly though a small part of me, hates myself for being so enamoured with a celebrity!, I mean I only discovered tokio hotel back in 2010, and I was already an adult then, (19) all the way through my teen years I never ever, had a celebrity crush or anything like that! And when I used to see other girls going ape shit other celebrities, boy bands and stuff (Oh, In my country we had this one singer called ‘Gareth gates’ from a show called ‘pop idol’ my friend literally CRYED over him, she went so crazy) oh yeah, -I’m going to be honest, even if it makes me unpopular- When I would see that kind behaviour I would secretly look down on those people. It just seemed so... undignified to me I guess. Maybe it’s because I’m English, I was raised to be very ‘proper’ the stiff upper lip and all that. Oh well I digress, point being you could make Bill murder bunnies ( :O) and I’d probably still worship him.
Don’t know ifs it’s just me or you made a little mistake in the last chapter. ‘spanking in the shower for the past week’... isn’t it meant to be ‘wanking’? well I suppose the image of bill spanking himself is very amusing. Although, actually now that’s made me think of the creepy guy in da vinci code whipping himself!
Fav line of the last chapter “wrap it up, I’ll take it!” made me chuckle, the subtle implication that if he didn’t like it he could get rid of a tattoo in an instant, or wouldn’t ‘take it’
I can’t wait to see sido’s comeuppance, really glad that you continued with the story, would it be too lame of me to dream of double dates... ?
Love your friendly neighbourhood ex-lurker
Author's Response: You make some valid, insightful points about Bill's personality - the repressed guilt being the dark side behind his anger, and how his misuse of names shows his disdain of unnoticeable people - very astute! As for the sex scenes, thank you! It's wonderful to have you say that they're inventive (huge relief - I know exactly what you mean by having read it all. I put a lot of thought..um...imagination...visualization...into those). rnrnAnd as for being a non-fan sort, that's me, too. I don't get that, at all. Some famous people are beautiful, sure, but I doubt very much that I'd like them in real life. I like reading the stories based on RL on this site, it's where I've gotten any info about the band at all, but I don't go looking up anything on them, and wouldn't right a story based on the real people. They're pop stars. Others can make that interesting, I couldn't (Mirror Images! If you haven't read it, start now!). rnrn"Spanking" is "wanking." Like "spanking the monkey." We don't use wanking in the states. Jerking off, spanking, rubbing one out...So hopefully that will help clear up the confusion, although the image of Bill spanking himself in the shower is priceless!! rnrnThank you so much for coming out of lurker-dom, Hannah (it took me a while, too, and then even longer to realize that some authors actually reply!). Your reviews are fantastic, and I promise you there are very few writers on this site who wouldn't love every word you write them!!
Date: 07/08/12 08:04 am Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
Hi! This is the third review I’ve ever written so go easy on me, I’m trying to make them shorter and more concise but I’m prone to rambling, look I’m doing it now!
Okay lets go!
In general I just love this story,
I think I’ve read all of your other stories as well, and I very much enjoyed your last one the ‘fog’ story. Amazing I think you’ve stepped up your game yet again!
You’ve developed your Bill and Tom characters, and they are now totally different and have their own unique personalitys, which I know is hard to do when you ‘get a character down’
I very much liked that fact that Bushido is actually gay in your storied. As so often he’s portrayed as a straight man just making an exception for bill, cause he’s so damn gorgeous and androgynous. And therefore you never come across Bu giving Bill head (it’s always the other way around) so it’s novel to see that for a change. I loved Bu singing Adele in the car! Your use of imagery throughout the entire story is brill, I could visualise it so well. That particular bit really reminded me of the film ‘Bridgit Jones’ for some reason, You know what I mean right? When she’s singing “all by myself” all dramatic and melancholy. Classic. I laughed my arse off about that for ages. We all do that sometimes right? Get really into a song and start singing really loud, voice straining on the notes only beyonce can hit.
Because I’m mainly just a Bill fan, everything I read pretty much has to be Bill X someone. But this is so well written that I even enjoy the tom X bushido, which I have never been able to stomach before. I think that because we’re so used to the twincest and seeing Tom as the dominant masculine figure; that the thought of two really masculine figures together repels some people. Generally I’ve found lots a people like one of the pairing masculine, then one pretty and effeminate, like Bill or Andrej pejic.
Great use of idiolect, within the speech of the rappers, and I absolutely loved your invention of the nickname ‘queenie’, it just adds a whole new dimension and sounds super cute. Although you do realise that from now on, you’re going to have to think of more great nicknames! It could become your calling card! (ha, like your some kind of criminal, well this story had stolen my heart
Author's Response: Hello Hannah (Capricorn?)...can't tell you how thrilled I am that you have revoked your lurker status and have started writing reviews. This is my absolute favorite kind - long, thoughtful, and very entertaining. I love knowing a little more in depth what people like or don't like about my stories. And that you mention having read the others (I'm so attached to the little guys) made me very happy! (and you can still review those if you like, I still read them!). I've been enjoying this story a lot, which is probably why I haven't been able to just wrap it up - they seem to be a bit more complex, and there's a lot more I want to get into. The other stories just had perfect "ends" to them. That was nice, too, I could get on to the next (I won't start any others before finishing the current one. Of course, I used to say I'd never post til my story was at least nearly finished, but that meant months between posts, and I just couldn't take it. So maybe one day I'll have two up and running at the same time....And you think YOU ramble). rnrnI'm glad you mentioned Bu being gay in my stories. I won't do the "I'm straight - why do I find this guy so damned attractive" story line. Unless maybe the character is young (like um...21? Sorry, sorry - it was so cute when you mentioned being an adult. You are, it's just that anything under 25 is really a baby, baby, BABY grownup. You're brand new at it! Rambling again) and still trying to figure out their own sexuality. A person can deny to themselves that they're gay or bi, like if they've been brought up by narrow-minded religious parents and have to push that into their subconscious (which is giving me an idea for a story...) But for the most part, a straight guy, even if he has messed around a few times in his life with another guy, is a HETERO - they like chicks, not dicks. So, in order for Bu to be with Bill, or Tom, or Andrej, he has to be GAY. Which usually entails enjoying cock flavored lollipops. And Bu, in this story, is going to be showing a little more of his gay side in the future (oh, sooo excited for it). I mean even more than singing along with Adele! Which was so gay!rnrnYou're right about a lot of people liking the pretty boy/manly man dynamic, which is the main reason Bill's new (horrid, horrid! I'll say it again, HORRID!) muscular body and facial hair and tatts and piercings are just ruining the fun. He'll never look like that in my stories! Well okay maybe! I'll just have to try to come to terms with it, but I'll need counseling. It's why my pairings are usually Bushido, which is my favorite and I'll probably go back to that next time. Tomshido was a departure for me, but it's been a lot of fun, and I'm so glad to hear that you like it. Maybe this Tom's just soft enough...rnrnThank you for mentioning the dialect, it's been a lot of fun and got easier as the conversations went on. I had a couple of sheets of notes I took on gangsta speak before starting the story LOL...okay, onto the second half of the review...
Date: 07/08/12 12:16 am Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
Yay, successful twin dates! And twin tattoos~ I loved this chapter and how good each twin is with their respective boyfriend. I'm going to go look up coati now!
Date: 07/03/12 05:24 pm Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
Perfect.
I am so speechless here...
Author's Response: .......me too.....!
Date: 07/03/12 03:59 pm Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
Oh really surprised to see the story was not over yet :D I liked the chapter but to be honest no me acostumbro aśn al Tomshido, this chapter in particular made r03;r03;me feel a little uncomfortable.
Btw I think Bill got the wrong idea of love, I hope Kay will help him to discover..
Author's Response: Uncomfortable! Sorry, stilldoll, that was certainly never my intention. I know not everyone liked Tomshido (I am still a diehard Billshido fan myself) but hopefully you're still enjoying it. I'm thinking Bill is gonna learn a lot from Kay :)
Date: 07/03/12 03:15 pm Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
The show must go on!
Date: 07/03/12 11:27 am Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
I think I accidentally pissed myself a little when I saw you updated. I just got my electricity back after 3 days of being cut off from the world and this was the best reward I can imagine! I love how Bill's date with Kay started out sweet and ended up sexy and Tom's date with Bu started out sexy and ended up sweet. Not to mention the fact that Bill and Kay were in the penthouse of the Ritz and Tom and Bu were in his apartment. I love how they foil one another :) And the image of Tom being swaddled at the end was absolutely adorable! I can't wait to read more, and I definitely wanna hear about their nature hikes. I have so many burning questions which are probably incredibly irrelevant like how's Tom's new job? How's Gordon taking the news that his sons are bonding? Georg and Gustav???? And are Bill and Kay gonna go public? Is the press gonna get involved when they find out that Queenie and Bu split only for Bill to end up with another rapper and Bu to be with Queenie's twin? Oh my gosh, I'm too emotionally invested in this story.
Author's Response: You must be back east - I heard about that power outage (in that awful heat, wow, if you were stuck in that, I'm so glad you survived!). I too have become caught up in this ongoing saga - it was reviewers who talked me into continuing it, and I'm so happy they did! Because you're right, there are so many little parts that can be delved into. Gordon's character, I really love him, I want to write more of his reactions to his boys. As for Tom's new job, there are going to be a few things going on in his life, so we'll see what road he takes. Kay...well, I doubt he'd ever do anything but brag as loud as he could about being with Queenie, so that's going to be interesting. And Bill on a "keep it clean" morning talk show...wonder what might happen once he opens his mouth... And how could we not see Georg and a potential obsession with Cher dolls! I'm thinking this is going to go on for a while, and hearing from you makes it all that much better! (oh, and swaddled Tom...yeah....)
Date: 07/03/12 10:22 am Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
I love this story, very well thought out and delivered. I'm interested in reading more of your stuff now. Thank you for the story.
Author's Response: Hi, Writinggirl, it's nice to hear from you! Thanks for letting me know that you're enjoying this enough to check out the others (they're all complete, yay!). And I still love hearing any reviews on those as well, since they all meant a lot to me! Thanks for taking the time to write :D
Date: 07/03/12 10:19 am Title: 14. Every Inch A Queen
I'm doing a happy dance here (not a pretty sight so I won't send you a picture or anything) that you decided to extend this story. And what a chapter. You made it so real, some lovely sexy stuff but you didn't just gloss over the problems either. Bill is bound to still have residual feelings for Bu, after all he'd lusted after the man since he was 15 and they'd been together for nearly 2 years. And nice to know that there were things Bu missed about Bill too. I adored Kay and Bill. That man went all out and really gave the Queen a night fit for...you guessed it, a queen. And so clever, the contrast between their date and Tom and Bu's pizza and movie night. Not just the difference in location, food and drink etc. but also Bu and Tom going straight at it, and Kay determined to properly woo Bill first. Although it was sad as hell, I am glad you showed Tom having problems caused by his abuse. Again, so realistic. But Bu was so amazingly understanding; he obviously loves Tom very much. Thank you for tackling the subject so sensitively. As usual you make the sex incredibly hot. Loved Kay worrying he'd have trouble keeping up with Queenie's sex drive; he did great without any viagra! And Tom got to show off his cock sucking skills. I think Bu was suitable impressed. I'd love to see Bu and Tom out camping in the wild. And, going back to the beginning, it's great that Bill now has his own cuarte tattoo and I loved how you still showed his insecurities with his hassling over Tom and Andrej possibly meeting up. I would also love to see that meeting with Bill fussing and trying to seperate them. I would have said threesome with the twins and Andrej (how hot would that be) but I don't think that would be a good idea on any level for Tom, and I'm pretty sure neither Bu or Kay would be happy about it. So, yeah, another incredible, absolutely amazing chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Hi Helen! Loved the review (and the thought of your happy dance, you know I'd join right in!). As I was writing this chapter, everything rolled out just right, and I realized I might be in for the long (er) hall with this one...Now that Tom had a new reveal, and Kay is so fun to write (yet I still find myself wishing he was better looking, but in my mind, for the story, he's got sex appeal that makes him more attractive. Plus, his utter devotion to Queenie adds to that, so, yeah...) Anyway...the contrasts of their dates struck me at the last minute (for the most part), but it worked so nicely. And I'm really grateful for your opinion on Tom's problems (damage like that doesn't just disappear, and he let me know it when Bu was manhandling him - truly, he froze up all on his own, I had my own ideas of what was going to happen!). Bu might be heaving a big sigh realizing what he's getting into, but he's not going anywhere! Oh, and thank you so much for letting me know the sex is still good - I can worry a little that the sex scenes become repetative or boring, so I try to be careful with those. And oh LORD, when you mentioned a 3 way with Bill/Tom/Andrej, the images that came up in my mind!! Thank you!! (Kay and Bu as audience members, with liberal audience participation!.......air conditioner...must turn on air conditioner....). I want to do that camping scene so bad, and here's why - the idea for this entire story is from a screen saver of desert mountains, from the perspective of a semi-cave at the top of one, overlooking a barren valley and rings and layers of mountains. I could never picture Tomshido before, it just never seemed natural, but day after day, I'd stare at that picture at work, and then, I could see the two of them there, hiking, out in nature but in a secluded area, and going at it. So I'm definitely thinking of adding that. Hoping there will be a few more chapters (absolutely must see Bill keeping Andrej and Tom apart!), and looking forward to hearing your opinions!
Date: 07/01/12 04:27 pm Title: 1. All Hail the Queen
Duh duh duhduhduh........... Mmmm mmm mhh mhh, ya dats ryt I got killa moves, dnt hate on ma robot.......chika aa, I could so beat a four year Old in a dance off............. I'm dat good..................
Mmhhh, dancin 4 da new chapter is ssooo much fun
Author's Response: Missy P! Watch that
Date: 07/01/12 11:53 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Hello sweetie, I'm glad you'll be able to continue the story. It's not always easy if essentially, you're done. But surprises are always surprising and I'm glad you’re mulling over more to their story.
It's almost eerie how Bill is so over Bushido. It’s almost sad that he got over him so fast, but then he was an early bloomer. Eager to get on with his sex life, and being not quite okay in the head on top of that, it's actually not a surprise that he cannot connect emotionally to anybody. His Tom issues needs to be fixed before he can bond to another person and really get a relationship that will affect him emotionally.
Tom... oh, man. He's stolen such a huge part of my heart :D
Yeah... that's it. Be good to him Bu.
Author's Response: Hi MD-E, so good to hear from you again! And so happy to know you'd like more chapters - me too! At the end of the last one, it had seemed to come full circle, but at the same time, I wasn't ready to let these boys go. They've been so fun to write..... Don't worry about Bill seeming to be over Bu, he really isn't. There will be more about that in the next chapter. I'm pretty sure Kay One will be there to help him. I know not everyone is pleased with that pairing, but Kay's crushing so hard on Bill, and he's very insistent! Tom and Bill will do some repairing (I really like this quiet, sweet, weird Tom too...wish I could stick him in some other stories!). We'll see how he and Bu get along.... Oh, and I was going over responses to reviews I'd left other authors and was reminded of your story End of the Road. Loved that one! And several others I didn't review (*guilty look*). Thanks for taking the time to review on mine. As you probably know, it's always wonderful to get thoughtful feedback!
Date: 06/30/12 02:48 am Title: 13. Long Live the Queen
Ahh, your chapters are like a really satisfying meal. So much to take in and digest. Is that weird to say? XD
I loved the twins' heart to heart in the bathtub, and I'm glad they talked about the weird sexual stuff between. I hope they've moved on from that and are together for good now. Gustav is a clever child for figuring people out, and Bill with the toys was adorable. I think I'm a person who builds toys and then loses interest in them once they're done. And then Tomshido, booyah! Tom is finally getting swaddled with all sorts of lovin on all sides. Finally, what he deserves after a lifetime without that! ^_^
Author's Response: Holy cow! Weird to liken my story to a satisfying meal? No way - that is one huge compliment! I'm glad you pointed out another "toy type," didn't even think of that one, even though I'm like that too! Okay, Tomshido will be featured in the next chapter, just for you!