Date: 04/22/12 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
hmmmmm,a sequel maybe
Author's Response: There will be at least one more part. :)
Date: 04/19/12 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! *_* I loved the tense atmosphere you set and the way Bill is just fed up with everything. Then for him to go after Tom like that and make him like it then walk away... wow. How are they going to make up after this?!
Author's Response: It's going to be hard to make up after this, but they'll work something out, I'm sure. ;)
Date: 04/19/12 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wooooooo!
That's was sexy! Bill are so... manly, aggressive... I think, this was a punishment bad for Tom? Nooo!
Author's Response: haha Thank you!
Date: 04/19/12 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
:O haahahahahhaah omg kyaaaahahaahahhaaaa I shouldnt laugh at poor Tomi ehehhe but I cant help it!! Bill is such a bitch I LOVE IT >.<
Author's Response: LMAO Thank you!
Date: 04/19/12 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1
That was surprising:D
Author's Response: haha :D
Date: 04/19/12 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
this looks like a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/19/12 02:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, damn! That was hot and harsh and beautifully done. That solid look? I could so see that. Damn. Well done! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! That look is all kept imaging as I wrote. It was because of the way his mouth was set in the photo. Unf!
Date: 04/19/12 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I'm so glad you wrote this! :D I was actually planning on writing one myself and might just do it if I get time c: But thank you so much for this! Perfect way to end the day! XD
Author's Response: Yours will probably be much better since you'll have more time to think about it, but I thought it'd be nice if something was written FOR you. :)