Date: 04/29/12 12:58 pm Title: Kapitel Zwei
Good idea!! I like it!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)))
Author's Response:
oh yay! C: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
it's coming soon! sit tight ;D
Thanks for reading! (:
Date: 04/21/12 12:00 am Title: Kapitel eins
Ah, sorry xD i was thinking it's universal wordxD i was mean these big break between each part of dialogue :)
Then im waitin for next part!:)
Author's Response:
oh sorry. But, I kind of like it that way.
I've always liked big spaces between writing, but I can minimize it.
c: it's coming soon!
Date: 04/20/12 12:20 pm Title: Kapitel eins
Okay. First of all... TOO much enters! XD and i totally don't know who is who. Try to write abt feelengs, what is around, who talks what... Not oly a dialogue, but describe the house, who is Giselle, how old are twins, their past, who's daughter is Giselle, and all that stuff around :) [sorry abt my mistakes, English isn't my first language ;)]
Author's Response:
"enters" is the only thing I don't understand, but that's fine c:
Yeah, I see what you mean. Maybe it's just my style, I prefer dialogue/action.
Thanks for the tips! I'll definitely try to incorporate it into the following chapters! c:
rnrn
Thanks for reading (:
Date: 04/18/12 12:31 pm Title: Kapitel eins
OH-EM-GEE. okay, firstly, it kinda confused me but eh... It sounds like the great start too an awesome story! :D
Author's Response:
haha I'm glad you like it!
Thanks for reading (:
Date: 04/18/12 05:12 am Title: Kapitel eins
this sounds like a nice story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it!
Thanks for reading (: