Date: 06/21/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
you dont like the idea but you wrote it anyway, and extremely well, shows just how good a writer you are tink and chap.1 was great, we are all our own worst critics dont forget that.
you got the point of how it can be to love someone so much youd give them anything and everything across so well and so beautifully
well done
A+++++
Date: 06/01/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwwww, Tom je sa Bilom samo da bi ga usrecio... Ovo je preslatko.
Author's Response: Hvala :)
Date: 03/10/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 2
wow
that's..just..damn good, in a way i feel bad for tom, setting aside the real him just for bill's happiness..
very well done tinki!!
::gives another batch of cookies::
Author's Response: *starts eating right away* you're gonna get me all fat! not that i mind, these are really good... Thanks! :D
Date: 03/10/08 04:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw, I loved it. You really portrayed Tom well and the sacrifices he's willing to make with his own happiness for Bill. I don't think I've read about their relationship written that way before.
Thanks for writing it honey ♥
(I still want to see them having sex in a church though... I might have to write that^^)
Author's Response: O________________________o this is getting too weird... i've started a story in which they are having sex in church, like, 2 minutes ago. and thanks! :D
Date: 03/07/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh noes D': Tom wont accept Bill's love! That was so sad!
but beautifully written hun :)
Author's Response: Tom MIGHT still accept Bill... thanks! :)
Date: 03/07/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. It's a beautiful song and I think you made it work within the story really well, even if it didn't turn out the way you wanted it to, it was still lovely. Bill's emotions were perfectly explained and so deep.
Thank you for writing and posting it ^_^ Can't wait to read more ♥
Author's Response: i do NOT need another unfinished story... you're one of the few i could do this for. *headdesk* i'm never gonna get anything done... thanks, anywayz! :)
Date: 03/07/08 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Burn the church!!
Bill's thoughts were so..well described, i found few of my own too in it, it was so emotional in a way but very good!
this was rather deep tinki...even if it didn't turn out the way you wanted it too, i think it's very good! and lame idea or not you better continue!! bitte? or no cookies....
nah who am i kidding...i always give cookies, especially for you and most certainly for this story!!
::gives cookies:: xD
Author's Response: *takes cookies and eats them* mm, delicious! i'm afraid it only has one more chapter. maybe if i get enough cookies.. oops, i mean reviews xD