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Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Bill's Gift a Wonder

Oops. I forgot to comment, silly me =blushes= Jesus, I've been so tired I can't even think straight. Did that guy who got struck by those needles die? This is so crazy. I want to know what happened to him, even if it may not be important. Who's the other ticket going to be for? Saki? Poor Tomi; he has such a cute and caring brother =cries= I can't wait for the next chapter. please update sooooon :D

Author's Response: Arigatou- Umm, you'll find out what happened to the guy. I want my readers to find out when Tom finds out. As for the extra ticket- you'll see~

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Bill's Gift a Wonder

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No one has commented yet? That's impossible. How can no one have commented? Sorry for the late review, but wow. I'm in college too and It's exam week. Non-stop studying for me =sighs=

Author's Response: It's okay babe ^^ and lol. People have commented silly ^-^ Thank you~

Reviewer: th4moi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Bill's Gift a Wonder

Yaaay! Good for Tom!! Reem, it's alright that it took you 3 weeks to write this chapter. I, including the rest of your fans, can wait as long as possible because its all worth it in the end :-) Keep up the awesome work. Love ya!!

Author's Response: Why thank you Najiba dear Gleeful Emoticon And well.... this chapter didn't take three weeks to write. It took me only a couple of days. It just took forever to post b/c I didn't know if I should end it where I ended it or if I should add more to it. AND also because we were making site problems here. Get Aamal to also read okay Greetings LHeartVE YOU Hello Kitty - Cubid

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 09:51 am Title: Chapter 3 - Bill's Gift a Wonder

The ticket the TICKET GOD DAMN IT! GRL, WHO`S IT FOR!?!?!?!?!
=P
omg how can you be this good!?!?!?
you´re AMAZING!

Author's Response: Awww Madi AsterikhugglesAsterik You're too cool Hug Thank you so much for checking on my story and noticing that I updated. You are too cool. And again, you are so awesome to have repeatedly emailed me and asked about my health. I am much better now btw. rnrnrnWho's the ticket for? hehe ^-^ I guess we'll just have to wait and see. rnrnrnrnHow can I be this good? Glomp You are definetly making me blush to the core Hyper EmoticonrnLove EmoticonrnArigatou-nasai Moji's Kiss

Reviewer: Bills girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/08 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Bill's Gift a Wonder

Chapter 2 made me cry.. and I had just done my makeup... It was sad.. and I can't stop crying

Author's Response: Is that a good thing?? ^-^ I'm sorry about your make-up. I hope you didn't miss any appointments b/c of me in having to redo it... *huggles*

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/08 09:34 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

Dangit my comment didn't go through. I wanted to let you know that I rated your poem ^-^ It was amazing.

I haven't heard from you in a while and I heard that you've been really sick. please notify me so that I know that you are well and about. Feel better

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie Boogie I am doing well. I'll email you in a jippy Angel Emoticon And thanks for worrying about me Thanks

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/08 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - My Top One

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Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/08 09:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

sleeeepy head? where A~re you? ^___^ I miss you crazy. Where've you been? Planning on updating this marvelous chapter within the next week?

Loves :D ~@~Rissa

Author's Response: Hey Rissa ^-^rnrnYeah sweetie, I do plan on hopefully updating sometime within the next few days. I'm really tired at the moment though. I don't really feel too well and I have a couple of exams to study for. I hope the wait won't be too long. I'm flattered that you're keeping up and making sure I update :Drnrn~Ria ^w^

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

And I really want to know more about the dream. this is a thinking fanfiction isn't it? Because I am already having questions popping in my head. I love stories that make you think. I hope I don't sound like an annoying stalker. &.&

Author's Response: No, you don't sound like a stalker. I'll tell you when you start acting stalkerish ^w^ I'm so flattered you have no idea. I only came on to see if my girlfriend updated Ignorancy Isn't Always Bliss. I didn't expect to be greeted with so many comments. Thanks again. I'll be looking forward to hearing from you in later chapters ^,^rnrnrn~Ria ^-^

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

I wanted to say again, because I truly don't believe that my other comment suffice, but this is an outstandingly intense story and I desperately await your next update.

Your story is so moving and painfully good. And I promise I will comment every day just so you know how good ^_^

Author's Response: Comment every day? Honestly babe, wow ^-^ And you've already commented me loads. Danke ^w^ *blushes I'm really REALLY glad that you like this story so much that you'd comment so many times ^^ You're awesome. I love the support. If it makes you feel any better I write a lot, so if I don't update asap then I might post a one-shot or something. Cool?

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

I have to go the bathroom now because of you. I haven't cried this bad since Dumbledore died in Harry Potter. This is so sad. Thank you for the beautiful chapter. Now when everyone starts saying, "Rissa what's wrong with you." and I reply with "Bill is dead" They are going to think I have a funeral to go to.

Please update asap. I'm in love with this painfully hard-to-read story T____T

Author's Response: Awwwww *hugs* I have to be honest. I haven't been able to work on it for about four days now. I've started the third chapter. Heck, I'm about ten pages into it, but I still haven't been able to attack it. I'm sorry that you cried. But I do feel great knowing that it had that much of an inpact on you ^_^ I hope you don't cry in class. Run to the bathroom :D

Reviewer: LazyCakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - My Top One

This is so sad. I thought that My Hero was sad but omg this is way more sad. I cried so hard it's not even funny. You are a great writer. I thought maybe you were a fluff artist or something but you really know how to write.

I expected to come across something cheezy and cliche, but this story is not the case at all. and given your promise that this story isn't predictable I will stick to it and see how it progresses. Honestly I feel so lucky to have come across My Hero. Otherwise I wouldn't have had the pleasure of coming across this page. This is so beautiful and I need to go to get tissues before reading your next chapter -Marissa

Author's Response: yeah.... I don't really do cliche writing ^-^ I'm so glad you like it. The comment means a lot ^^rnrnrn~Ria ^^

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

chapter not shit at all! very shiny infact.
hell i was just happy it was updated!

Author's Response: Awww, Thank you very much ^-^ Comment appreciated and I will try updating asap :D

Reviewer: cynical_terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/08 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - My Top One

Hey!

Can you please resize your banner to a smaller size, it's rather large!

Thank you :)

Author's Response: Sure thing sweets ^-^

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

omg babe...
I can´t stop my tears...

my heart aches so bad...
I feel like I can´t take it anymore...

and that is not a way to say you write bad..
you write soooo good.
too good.
it´s too believeble, I almost cant take it babe.
it is so very well written!!!
so very very well written!

Author's Response: Eeeeeeeeeeeep. Now THAT'S a comment I've been craving for. I was just speaking to my cousin Najiba (She's the brunette to the left on my home page) about this chapter and how I feared that it was probably suckish, but she says that she likes it. Now as a cousin I expected such a comment from her. So I'm very pleased by this comment. I'm glad that you like it blushes ^,^ Later Madi

Reviewer: Ryuu Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/08 05:58 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

This is excellent! Keep going!

Author's Response: Danke ^-^ I will :D

Reviewer: Kaulitz_Syndrom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/08 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

Very touching! I cried around the middle area. I love when it's in Tom's point of view. Like a diary. Keep up the AMAZING and heart touching work! Truly amazing!

Author's Response: BAMBIE~ How ya doin' sweets? I'm so glad to see that you've been able to drop by for the second chapter ^-^ Means loads to me, honest. You like Tom's POV? That's great news. I kept thinking that maybe it bothered some of my readers. That's why I decided to do it with both first person AND third person. Cried around the middle? Like around the time when Tom found Billy's nailpolish? That was a sad scene, I agree T^T Poor baby. Thanks for the comment ^^

Reviewer: th4moi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Quiet

Wow! That was a very long chapter but definitely worth reading!! I LOVE the part about the restaurant! Really changed the mood of the story by making it less depressing. The way you started and ended it was really good! I'm looking forward for the next chapter!!!
Oh and of course, your dedication is very much appreciated!!

Author's Response: Glad you think so Najiba ^-^ But I didn't think that it was long. On the contrare, I thought it was too short. I do like that the restaurant scene helped lessen the mood. I can't have my readers depressed all throughout a chapter. That'd just be inhumane of me. I'm already working on that third chapter, and of course you being you already knows how the first two pages of it starts ^-^ Call me tomorrow okay :D

Reviewer: jinxchan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Top One

I WILL STICK WITH YOU TIL THE END BABE!!!!!!!
That´s for SURE babe!
I trust you to 1000000%!

I LOVE your writing...that you know...
but it can´t be said to many times!
The way you write...it´s love!

Can´t wait for more!!!!!
*squeals*

LOVE YA BABE!

Author's Response: Awww Madi..... Sankyuu so much babes. You trust me THAT much *blushes* I WON'T let you down. I hope you like the second chapter just as much. Take care sweets rnrnrnrnrn~Ria

Reviewer: th4moi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Top One

I read the story again..and guess what? I cried again. lol. Reem, you have an incredible talent! I mean, I can read this a hundred times and cry each and every time. OMG I feel soooo special! You dedicated this AMAZING story for me!!! I CAN'T wait till the next chapter!! ;)

Author's Response: Omg, Wallahi foreals? You seriously creid a second time??? *feels special* Thank you so much Najiba. You're so amazing. And I'm glad that you commented. Even though you were like the first Tokio Hotel fan to read it ^-^ Of course this story is dedicated to you as well. I can't NOT have it dedicated to you. You're the one that seriously helped and encouraged me to go on with it. Insha'allah I will be seeing you tomorrow. I seriously cannot wait. *Is TOTALLY stoked.* I have that second chapter hiding on my USB drive somewhere. And dammit as exhausted as I am, AFTER I do the dishes and clean myself up some (you know, like brush my teeth and put on my PJ's) then I'll go and attack it with my fingers. This weekend is packed and I REALLY want to get that chapter in. Later wonderful cousin of mine ^-^rnrnOh, and I hope that my ummmm... *cough* picture doesn't frighten you ^////^ rnrnLaterrnrn~Reem ^w^

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