Date: 07/12/12 08:05 pm Title: Twins are everywhere
Haha, wow. That was a really unique and interesting story. Great plot and characters, and your descriptions and Bill&Tom's interactions. Well written. You captivated me from the beginning, and I was surprised when it ended so soon. Good ending, I was just looking forward to some naughty twin smut the whole time, that the end took me by surprise. Hahaha! It's ok. This was a great story. Very nicely written, and quite funny actually. I loved reading it. Thank u for writing. :)
Author's Response: First, I'm really, really sorry I didn't get back to you sooner! Somehow my email deleted the notification of this review, and I just now saw it. I'm really sorry! I'm just very excited that you enjoyed this story. Thank you so much! ^__^ I'm so happy you thought it was unique and that you liked the characters. I just couldn't get the guys to cooperate to go into NC-17 territory, so I didn't want to force it. ;) I'm really glad you thought it was funny and good without that. Thank you very, very much for all your kind remarks! And again, I'm sorry for not responding sooner!
Date: 04/17/12 10:18 pm Title: Twins are everywhere
Loved this! Georg's personality really came through and it was fun to read his observations of the twins. I liked the ending, where Tom wasn't acting cocky and finding out they hadn't done a threesome before.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed this story! :D I'm glad you liked Georg; I struggle to write him more than anyone. I'm really glad you thought it worked. Thank you very much!
Date: 04/16/12 09:29 am Title: Twins are everywhere
nice story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/15/12 11:24 pm Title: Twins are everywhere
I loved this story! What with the twiness and the hotness at the end :D
This part made me laugh lol:
~He went around the back of the building to find the lineup of Braids, Blond and purple gorilla all standing and taking advantage of the same idea as he. Well, Georg didn’t think the plushie was actually smoking but the other two were making enough for three.~
Also this one made me smile since I know the twins really did say this in real life:
~When I look at Bill, I know instantly what he thinks. I can feel it when he has a problem, even if he is not with me,” Tom claimed.
“We are very different, yet alike. We don’t look like twins, but we are soul mates,” Bill said.~
Wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! :D I loved that poor gorilla, and he didn't deserve to get ripped apart by the dogs. In my world, he goes home to live with them happily ever after and Georg comes over often for sexy-time visits. xD But seriously, thank you very much, and I'm really happy you thought this was funny. Before I wrote the twins, I went back and tried to find as many of their quotes about being twins as I could. Some of their quotes were perfect for the story, although I might have attributed one to Bill that Tom said or vice versa. Either way, those boys say the sweetest things about being twins! Thanks again for reading!
Date: 04/15/12 07:02 pm Title: Twins are everywhere
You already know I love this fic =) I've been fascinated with Twin festivals since I read about them in a book about twins (of course). So I was really excited to see a fic with this plot! It was really interesting to see the twins through the Georg's eyes too... It was just a really great fic and you did a fantastic job as usual =)
Author's Response: Thank you again, so much! I remembered reading a magazine article a long time ago about a big twins festival in Ohio, so I looked it up on the Internet and read about their activities and looked at pictures and things. I don't know how accurate it turned out in the story, but I kept imagining poor Georg just being a little overwhelmed by all the twin obsession. Most of these twins in the story were actually based on twins I've known, especially Connie and Bonnie. They are in their 70s and they STILL dress alike every time I see them out shopping or whatever together. That's very interesting to me. xD Thank you so much for reading this and reviewing again. You are just so sweet and encouraging. Thank you!
Date: 04/15/12 06:21 pm Title: Twins are everywhere
damn, the sad part is that Bill and Tom ARE at a festival right now, less than 2 hours from where I am sitting ;_; Coachella is a little more adult than this twins fair, but sitting here doing my homework (this was my break, ha) is a little disappointing knowing that they're not only having fun but at a festival that some of my acquaintances happen to also be at....:/
apart from making me want to go find Bill and Tom at Coachella, this was really great, I liked the way it flowed with the news story and the actual story interspersed. really nice glimpse of the blond Bill, though tweaked to suit our purposes, since I tend to shy away from thinking of him in his current appearance when it comes to fiction...good job making me want to, though! :)
Author's Response: Aw, man, you're so close and yet so far away! I'm glad I could provide you with a little break from your homework! :3 To be honest, I don't think I could handle going to a festival like that with so many people so close around me all the time. It would be an experience, but I don't think I could properly enjoy the music. Plus, I'd be too busy looking everywhere for the twins! :P I'm really glad you liked this story! Thank you so much! I haven't written current!Bill with the blond or grey hair, so I thought I'd give it a try. Plus, it kind of worked for the point of him and Tom looking so different that Georg wouldn't believe they were twins. I'm so happy you liked it, even with that detail. Thank you again!