Date: 06/06/12 11:14 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Ah, this chapter was such a tease, knowing that something terrible is coming when they leave the House. But it was a very sexy tease!
I love that Bill wants to go on a date before they have to leave. Okay, so it's not a date but it certainly felt like one, especially since he planned ahead and wanted to get twin piercings. That was so cute, especially how Tom had to go first.
I don't know if Bill licking Tom's blood should be hot, but it really, really was. What a way to share their first blood between both of them. It was very sexy.
Still loving how Samy drops hints and kind of helps Bill, if Bill is sharp enough to pick up on it. I really hope it does help him!
And then, and then Bill with the hnnnnn and Tom with the sniffing and the chase and the hnnnn ... that was very hot. The scene in the hall was so animalistic but so sexy, like Tom was a big cat rubbing his scent on Bill. Just very, very hot as only you can write. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: What can I say, I like to keep you guys on edge! :D :D :D
Bill took them on a date, you're totally right. It was their first date together and kind of their first kiss in a way! ;D Indirectly, at any rate. And Bill knows blood magic...they're tied together even more strongly!
Hehehe chase scene and yeeeees, Tom was scent-marking Bill, totally. I'm happy you enjoyed the hotness! Thank you! More to come. ;D
Date: 06/06/12 03:44 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Weird, I felt like there wasn't much action in this chapter. There were many major revelations/decisions, but all in all you've managed to keep us in suspence. Doubt the tension could get higher before Tom, Bill, and/or Jorg does something drastic. I'm about to read the next chapter. I'm excited to see where we are heading. ^_^
P.s. For that near kiss, you have officially been declared a total tease
Author's Response: I definitely wanted to keep the suspense going, and we're overdue for some action! Thanks and of course it's a huge tease. ;) Definitely meant to be.
Date: 06/06/12 01:41 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Oooh, how do i say this. it was definitely more than i expected, but less than i wanted? in the basest sense xD not that it wasn't perfect, but that i'm dying for them to jump each other already xP but hey, this was a huge leap forward so i'll take it happily. unfortunately i'm not really hep to Jorg's jive, but it's okay. i've not been focusing on him per se...i've been more like biting my nails wondering when these blasted twins are going to get naked :D i don't know what it says about me as a reader, but i could barely care less what Jorgy is thinking at the moment. but...maybe he's trying to get rid of both of them unless one miraculously lives up to his expectations at long last? or maybe he's sending them out and will send assassins or something :P either way, i think the twins will HOPEFULLY be too busy with their mating frenzy to care, though i guess if it is assassins, that might not be best...
aaaaaaarghh cliffhanger! may not seem like a cliffhanger? honey, they've all been cliffhangers for bill and tom's sex life ;) yay for explosive update! sounds like the outlook is up from "more UST to come" woot. excited! oh, and what's our tentative update schedule here, just mondays or is it a 2x week thing?
Author's Response: I know what you mean, and it was intended that way. ;) I've got to get you to that point, dying for them to explode all over each other! And so much anticipation, yet still so far to go... Alas, the twins have to worry about Jorg's plans and they're not thinking ahead the way they probably ought to be. And yeah, assassins would put a damper on a mating frenzy...
Oh, well, then they've all been cliffhangers for the sex! ;D I would say the outlook was definitely upgraded. And, I wanted to commit to a 2x per week thing but UGH, things have been HAPPENING and they won't settle down. :( Sorry.
Date: 06/06/12 11:01 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Oh. Oh! The twins will stick together after leaving House Kaulitz. Jorg's endgame? To kill his sons? Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: It's a good guess! Stay tuned to find out! :D
Date: 06/05/12 11:22 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
I really like this story... i cant wait for read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you like it and hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 06/05/12 12:27 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Holy jesus-h-christ that was EPIC! Wondrfully twintastic. It met all expectations, plus. And Samy was ridiculously helpful. It was great. I loved it. And the piercings??!! Awesomesauce.
Why do I have the feeling the ridiculous hotness in the room wasn't pent up teen/twin angst, but had something to do with those swords?? *raises eyebrow* or am I just crazy?
Gaaawwwd this is getting SO good. I can't wait to see more! *glomps* update soon?
Author's Response: Yay for being twintastic, I am so glad! Samy just can't help himself, he's got to put them on the right path. And they had to get their signature piercings! :D
Hmmm now that's an interesting theory!
Thank you so much! Sorry to take so long with updates, sometimes life gets away from me.
Date: 06/05/12 09:53 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
The twinerrific update was absolutely brilliant! Everything you write is better than what I expected =) I love how Tom wasn't able to control himself anymore... very sexy! I really can't wait to see where they'll go from here and I look forward to them kissing!
I like Sammy more and more with every new chapter, I just hope he doesn't have ulterior motives and turn out to be a jerk... but I liked how he pushed Bill in the right direction about the sword.
The piecing scene was very interesting, especially the exchange of blood part... loved it! I'm very excited for this explosive update =D
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the twinerrificness! :D I'm so happy to hear that. Thank you! Tom's self-control couldn't last forever, of course.
Ohhh you know they need to get to that point...
Samy is fun to write! And yes, he gave them a BIG help there.
Glad you enjoyed their little exchange! We're definitely overdue for an explosive update.
Date: 06/05/12 06:35 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Wow! I didn't known Nephilim needed special metal to pierce themselves with.
Lol, I really thought that Bill was dreaming, having fallen asleep after climaxing. Tom's sudden actions sort of came out of nowhere XD But not in a 100% unbelievable way.
Author's Response: Yes, because of the way they heal! :D I mentioned something about it when Tom's lip ring got ripped out in Be the Death of Me.
Oh no no, it was finally the moment! That surreal sound you heard was Tom's self-control snapping. ;)
Date: 06/04/12 11:22 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Them exchanging blood was neat! They are now further bound by blood and by matching metal.
It must be difficult yet the most natural thing in the world, them having these new sexual feelings for each other.
It's Bill's purpose in life now, to be with Tom. It falls so neatly into place in the end. Bill just needs to update Tom on this, so that Tom doesn't get doubtful and suspicious again. Bill doesn't help this by commenting on how easy it would be to kill Tom in his sleep.... silly Bill.
Author's Response: It was a fun, spur of the moment addition to the story, I really enjoyed it. A fun twist on how they got their first piercings!
They are definitely having a hard time with it, poor sexually-frustrated darlings. :D
They need to update EACH OTHER on it, silly boys! So much head-pounding, the way they're talking past each other, playing right into their father's game.
Date: 06/04/12 02:35 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Hooray! I'm happy to see that Samy doesn't take the unwilling, as he said. Though hell would have broken loose if he did. That would've been slightly interesting to see... O.o
Lol, I'm not upset about the interruption of their almost-kiss. It just ratchets up the tension even more :D
Twin-loaded update? Eeeee :D
Author's Response: No, he doesn't! He's got a code of honor. But omg, if he HAD done what Jorg wanted, things would definitely have turned bad.
It certainly did ratchet it up - and so intended! Thanks for reading and of course a twin-loaded update was coming!
Date: 06/02/12 01:09 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Oh my GAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! So fucking close! What the hell?! But seriously, that was so cute, and funny and awkward. Especially when they were talking about Samy, and they both thought the other wanted him. Pfft. So funny.
It really pleased me hearing Samy doesn't do 'rape' and in facts prides himself on not doing it.
This is...interesting development...what exactly makes Jorg think that just because they leave from seperate gates, they wouldn't just circle around and meet up outside the line of sight of the House?? Which I'm willing to bet is exactly what they will do. The question is, are they going to realize that door three is going to the human citites in search of their mom?
I'm starting to wonder more about Samy...is he going to help the twins? And if so what are his motives? Because he's starting to seem like he has an ... odd interest in them? I dunno...
This was a wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more!
Ps. Sorry your May sucked. Here hoping your June is better. *holds out capri sun in a toast*
Author's Response: Yes of course! We have to keep the tension going. ;) They are adorable and awkward and I'm glad you enjoyed that.
Samy has his own code of honor! He's a good guy to have on your side.
Jorg really didn't think that through, at ALL. But he has his own plans.
All will be revealed in time! Thanks for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 06/02/12 08:45 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
OMG! This is so agonizing. Jorg just had to come between them at that critical moment. I am certain though that when they finally unite (or ignite) it will have been worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh yes, Jorg's timing is awful! Or on purpose...hehe. I thank you and sorry for making you wait for so long! ;)
Date: 06/02/12 07:16 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
a twin-loaded update. I keep my eyes on you!
Author's Response: I deliver as promised, of course! ;)
Date: 06/02/12 05:43 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Sorry that you had a difficult month. I hope from now on only good things will happen for you.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your kind thoughts. ♥
Date: 06/02/12 04:01 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Was May EVER one hell of a month...yes, let's bury it in our memories. First final projects, presentations, and exams, then starting an internship and NO this. I forgive you, but the lack was definitely felt.
OH GOD, the UST! or should I now call it ALMOST resolved sexual tension? god. you don't even know...i was ready to flip a table when that lesser demon interrupted them. UGH. okay, I know it's only going to make the moment that much more awesome, but damn, you're interfering with my hormone patterns xD
ooooh, the plot thickens? or did Jorgy just give them a huge loophole that he didn't mean to? or DID he mean to? hmmm....
Author's Response: I never want a May like that again. ._. I lost my cat to cancer and I'm still missing him so much.
It's ALMOST resolved? They're getting CLOSER? Hehe, that was the plan, get you all ready to flip tables they're so close!
Hmm indeed...answers soon, of course.
Date: 06/02/12 01:52 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
I'm going nuts trying to figure out what will happen for sure!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me glad! Always happy to hear you want more. :D
Date: 06/01/12 11:56 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
With Samy, it wasn't a matter of who won the staring contest. It was more the fact it wasn't a contest to begin with. This sentence was really badass. :D I loved it!
Samy knows! And he knows to not even try to get between them. The twins just need to figure out that they want each other, those silly things! Those two need a big slide of honesty and communication pie. And I'd make them share it.
I love the words and language you use! And if those weren't cool enough, I love the way you use the words to tell such an awesome storyline! They almost kissed, eeeee! I feel like the Earth's crust would crack open under them if they did. They have such power! Jorg doesn't understand that, does he. He keeps underestimating Bill, especially. I'm cheering for Bill already when Bill proves those low expectations wrong.
Author's Response: That is Samy in a sentence! He is full of too much win for this fic. If he was in it any more, he'd take it over completely.
Samy knows...now it's a matter of shoving it down Jorg's throat, haha.
I'm so happy you enjoy them! Hold onto that crust-cracking idea, okay? >_> You kind of anticipated...well, you'll see. Jorg DEFINITELY underestimates Bill, SO much.
Date: 06/01/12 09:55 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Wow, what a cliffhanger! Stupid Jorg and his stupid ideas and sending his stupid servant to cockblock a beautiful moment.
I'm so worried for the twins and what they're going to encounter on their quests. Will they really stay alone? How will they interact with others outside their father's household? How will they survive since they're basically still teenagers? Poor babies!
I really love how you gave us a deeper look into Tom’s brain. Your Tom always surprises me with how deep he is, even if he doesn't always show it like Bill. And he's starting to like watching Bill, and now he’s having certain urges and thoughts. FINALLY.
You are such a master of showing a character’s true self by the little things, like Tom feeling trapped and running then plunging ahead, plowing forward when he doesn’t know what else to do. And I like that Samy actually has morals, even though I’m sure he’s never had a problem getting who he wanted in bed anyway. Oooo, and Samy is wise and observant, too, but it's too bad he told Jorg his suspicions about the twins being mated. D:
I think my favorite part of this chapter was the twins’ argument over who wants Samy, and the way you set up them drawing closer and closer and almost kissing… agh, what a disappointment! But I have hopes there will be more! Someday! This story and your writing are so wonderful!
Author's Response: I like cliffhangers! :D And yes, ah, Jorg, ever the cockblocker. ;D
They are teenagers without a single day of survival training under their belts! I bet Jorg just expected them to go out and conquer or something.
I really feel like Tom is like that, a bit of an unexpected well there that he doesn't often let others see. I'm so glad you enjoyed all of those things! :D :D :D
Samy has his own agenda...so if he disclosed it, he must have felt it would help advance that agenda! :X
Twins can be such silly guys! Love them. Thank you so much, I always get so happy to see a review from you!
Date: 06/01/12 09:54 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 6
Yay! Thanks for the update, I’ve missed the twins... *hugs fic*. Omg this servant has the worst timing EVER! They were SO close... the tension is awesome as usual. I’m so glad they finally talked about Sammy and how they don’t want him. Sammy gained my respect when he refused to take one of the twins since they didn’t want it. He also saw the mating bond thing =D Ohh a journey! I didn’t expect that but I like the idea very much! And of course the twins won’t take it separately, right? I'm definitely looking forward to Act Three, can't wait! (especially if the inevitable conclusion is the explosion of the tension, hehe). xD
Author's Response: Sorry to keep you missing them! And yes, of course, but it's really Jorg who has the timing. ;) They couldn't let that misunderstanding go on forever! And Samy is a good guy - at least he's not going to do what Jorg was hoping. So a different plan needs to be set into action! (Of course the explosion had to happen SOMETIME.) :D
Date: 05/31/12 11:31 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 5
Poor Bill, FINALLY starting to figure out what he’s wanted all along. But, he is very wise to realize that makes it worse in a way because now he has to figure out how to get it. Get him. The silly Tom.
I love how you write confident Samy, not overly arrogant or cocky, but very sure of himself and his skills. He’s not at all surprised by Bill’s “You can’t have my brother” and he doesn’t promise anything. I really want to like him, but I’m so afraid there’s an awful twist coming and I just can’t trust him.
I may have squeed – just a bit – when Tom chose the seat beside Bill, rather than the neutral one or one beside Samy. Tom might not be the quickest on the uptake, but surely underneath all the silly boy stuff is a heart that beats for Bill. Poor Bill is crushing so hard right now that he finally realizes how he feels about Tom – all those little things like noticing how Tom licks his lips. The way you portray it and his emotions makes it feel exactly like crushing on a first love. (And you even kept their monstrous big bites way of eating in character!)
It was fascinating to learn about the history of the humans and how they live from the Nephilim perspective. You worked that in beautifully. It’s so interesting to hear it in Samy’s words and all the surprise from the twins who haven’t gotten to experience it.
Then the semi-confrontation between Samy and Bill. Wow! It feels like Samy is trying to tell Bill something, but I’m still not sure if he’s on Jorg’s side, the twins’ side, or just a side of his own. Can he be challenging them to rise up and stand against their father someday, or is he going to play them against each other? Bill feels very noble in this story. Granted, he’s still a teenage "boy" but he’s starting to realize there are far bigger things than just his own insane family feud. And he’s very smart to begin to understand his own flaws and how they can be used again him. Or how he can use them to his own advantage.
You are just such an incredible storyteller! I’m sorry I had been hoarding this story for when I really needed something to take me away, and your stories are always my ticket to escape. I can’t wait to see where you take this next!
Author's Response: Bill gets there first and it's a difficult road! Tom is so dense, but in a way it's because he's trying to be the big brother, trying to protect Bill but...kind of clumsily.
I totally had fun with Samy's character in this! Samy is just rolling with it, seeing how things play out, but he's definitely more observant than the twins might wish.
Hehe Tom is standing with Bill forever. Or sitting. These two...they're just too cute! All of the sweet, sweet UST is really coming to a peak, you know? And that is just the way they eat! It's gotta go down that way, always. ;)
I used Samy to be Mr. Exposition! I'm glad it was fun for you. :D
Samy is definitely on a side of his own! I can say that for sure. It's not a spoiler. And Bill is definitely trying to activate his full potential. He knows they've got a long way to go. And Samy is giving him a taste of that wider world in a sense.
Thank you so much honey! I just continue to be very happy you're reading and enjoying it. ♥ I really appreciate your readership.