Date: 06/19/12 01:55 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
right? right...xD yes, we do know what comes now and will keep coming for a while, now, I'm sure. I'm glad they could rouse themselves to do something other than sex, though I'm thoroughly enjoying the sex. I'm going to love to see what other people make of them now...xD
Author's Response: Yes we do, these sexy boys! They do need to take care of some essentials, that's for sure. Glad you're enjoying it and I hope you love what's to come!
Date: 06/15/12 12:42 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
Love that Nephilim sword action. Slide it into the hilt boys. Just like that!
Author's Response: Hahaha, yes, so to speak. ;)
Date: 06/13/12 01:22 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
I'm so excited for them to take on Jorg!
Author's Response: Stay tuned! ;)
Date: 06/12/12 11:02 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
Mate fever!! Sexy chapter... It's adorable to read how much they need each other. Love how, in this chapter at least, it's seems to be Bill who make sure they have their dose of sex when in the original stories, it was more Tom's role. All of that to say that it's very interesting to read a Bill who grew up in the Nephilim world =P
I'm super excited to read more, especially with the twin's decision. I can't wait to see how that goes.
Author's Response: Yay mating fever! Glad you enjoyed their need for each other. Oh yes, they're a bit reversed in that sense, Tom is so focused on the practical. Bill is so focused on their emotional wellbeing. And Bill is quite a bit more Nephilim, hm?
Stay excited for more, I hope to bring it with tension and excitement!
Date: 06/12/12 01:38 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
YAYYY!!! excuse me while I do the Cha Cha. okay okay, so, um, I guess I'll just install a surveillance cam in these ruins cuz i have a feeling they'll be here for a while...xD oooh so excited!! god, you don't wanna know how many times I reread the last half of this chapter...I am seriously in love with this universe you've created for our twins. how can it get any better than fated to love twins that screw like rabbits with very little to no shame? ahhh...I would bask in it, but there's another chapter up for me to devour, like I'm sure they'll be doing to each other....;)
Author's Response: Chacha away! Glad you enjoyed it! Oh yes, they need plenty of loving. They have no shame and they're going to do it as much as possible from now on! Once they start they just can't stop...
Date: 06/12/12 01:22 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
Speaking of nekkid Bill as we were, I love the part where he’s not self-conscious at all and walks around in the buff. But I think my favorite part of this whole chapter is when he tries to talk dirty to Tom and get him to talk dirty about what he’s going to do and it blows Tom’s mind. It’s so hot and yet poor Tom can’t roll with it and quite wrap his brain around it. But when he gets it, oh baby!
This entire chapter is very sexy, especially Bill experiencing things for the first time, things he’d never thought about – kissing the spot behind his ear, licking his belly button. It was really erotic that Tom took control and how they both get off on that.
It just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next!
Author's Response: Mmm nekkid Bill. I do love him. Bill has strange ideas, as far as Tom is concerned! Tom is a bit slow there, yes, but he can get there in the end.
Yay for eroticism! ♥ Glad you enjoyed their sexytiems.
I am so happy to hear you say that! Hope you keep enjoying it!
Date: 06/11/12 11:36 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
Ahh the three S's. (re)Supply, Sex, Strategize.
Guuuh so very sexy. Wonderful sexy times. It just tickles me to death that in the 'verse where they were seperated they both lost their virginity when they were tweleve, but in the 'verse growing up together it took so much longer.
Its not over is it? This kinda feels like the end is the beginning is the end type thing....pleasepleaseplease don't let it be over?
Author's Response: They are important S's!
Glad you enjoyed their sexytimes...it's pretty interesting, huh? Weird how that delayed development thing worked.
Oh no, definitely more to come! Hope you're enjoying it!
Date: 06/11/12 10:57 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 3
i've been lurking until now, but i just had to come out of hiding to shout three cheers for an insatiable bill!
Author's Response: Haha, the mating frenzy brought you out, huh? Yay for insatiable Bill, glad you enjoyed!
Date: 06/10/12 07:56 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Very exciting! I feel an inner demon rising within. It's magical. You have cast a spell upon me and I will forever pledge my allegiance to you sorceress Tay.
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! I'm glad you feel so strongly about it. ;)
Date: 06/08/12 08:40 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Gah!
I can't wait for more. I knew the swords would awake for each other. it was a gut feeling. Loved everyone of these stories and this one isn't disappointing me at all.
Author's Response: Thank you! Of course there's going to be more. ;) They had to share that intense moment and finally realize the truth! Thanks for the lovely review.
Date: 06/08/12 08:37 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
SO FUCKING AWESOME! :) i was Waiting for this part!!! :D i love it... :3
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Oh yes, I made you wait a long time, sorry! :D
Date: 06/08/12 12:10 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
so... intense mating ritual. I liiike, finally they are together
Author's Response: Oh yes, finally! I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!!
Date: 06/08/12 12:06 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Yay! They're together now, mates! I was surprised at how quickly their swords woke, but that's what you get when you have clear purpose, I guess. And then sex, yay! I wonder how difficult their future will be ahead of them. Will they be so powerful together that it will be easy? Easier? Jorg is going to be terrified, haha!
Author's Response: They are mates and there's no stopping them now! Oh, I couldn't draw it out any longer after laying all the pieces out, you know? ;) Of course there needed to be sex after such a dramatic rescue. We shall see how it plays out...but Jorg OUGHT to fear, he's just too stupid to realize it, haha.
Date: 06/08/12 03:54 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Aweee. That was hot and adorable at the same time. only you can do that!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it so much!
Date: 06/08/12 12:38 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
WOW! I get back from vacation and I get THIS as my welcome home present!? I should go away more often! ;) Nah, j/k. Seriously, Love, I don't know how you manage to churn out such brilliant things! *huggles*
Author's Response: Welcome back! ;) Good timing! I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much, honey. *hugs*
Date: 06/07/12 11:39 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
OH WOW! There is much incoherent flailing going on right now, but as soon as I calm down and cool off, I will comment.
This was so worth all the build-up and anxiety that you've heaped on the boys! I know they still have a very tough road ahead of them, but this climax of sorts (pun intended) was just awesome.
It figures that Jorg wouldn't even be there to see Bill off, but instead he stood there for Tom. Ugh, what a guy. Thank goodness Samy spoke up and told Tom about the sword since Bill never got a chance to, with the sniffing and the rubbing and the unf-unf. I love how you described that scene through Tom's eyes!
I was really wondering if one of them (or both) would have the bright idea to circle around, and I'm so glad Tom did. Also, I love how you describe his swagger waddle because it perfectly describes his walk in those ridiculous pants.
I have to gush all over you about how flawless your writing is, but I LOVE how you described the sword awakening and the fight. Of course Tom would figure out that he only wants to protect Bill -- who is doing exactly the same for him. The scene of them figuring it out really made me get teary eyes.
And from there on, oh yes, that was all very, very good! :D I love how you continued with the mating characteristics from the other stories, the insatiable lust, the yearning to touch and the electricity they trade. It's beautiful! And they're finally together! Yay!
Author's Response: Heeee! Thank you! Flailing is always welcome!
I definitely wanted to make it worth the, er, wait. The very very long wait. Aside from Appetite, this is the longest I've ever made the twins wait for gratification!
Jorg is a stand-up kind of dad! He sure is letting Bill know where he ranks on the hierarchy. And of course I had to circle back around and touch on how Tom saw that experience!
They both did. And omg, his duck-waddle, I HAD to. Those pants allow for nothing less!
That makes me all happy and wibbly! I'm so pleased it made you teary. ;~; The bond between the two of them is so compelling and wonderful to me.
Thank you for the lovely commentary on their first mating! ♥ It was so fun to write. It was a long time coming and they deserved this.
Date: 06/07/12 11:20 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
so he moved at a rather fast swagger out of the House gate -- I'm sorry, that just really made me laugh aloud XD Like real life Tom doing his penguin walk, but faster XD
I was shaking with glee for the entirety of this chapter :D
Lol, I have a question, though. How was Tom fingering Bill when he still had his underwear and jeans on? Unless he was reaching past all the fabric... Because it was *after* that, that they managed to unclothe Bill's downstairs.
And so it begins XDD Oh geez, we all know very well the mating frenzy that's to follow for a long time.
PS: Oh yeah, and I liked that Bill still retained a couple instances of hesitation throughout. It was a nice, even transition.
Author's Response: It's Tom! XD During that era he didn't have anything but pants he could swim in, so~
So happy it gleed you! Sorry that part wasn't clear - Tom pushed those down just far enough but not all the way down. Then later he pulled them all the way off.
Oh my goodness yes. Newly-mated. It certainly lasts a while!
Glad you enjoyed the transition! These little cuties. They've still got a long way to go.
Date: 06/07/12 11:19 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Oh muh gawd, finally! Fantastic.
Haha I was right about themcircling around once out of sight of the House! Awesome for me, even if it was pretty apparent that they would do it. For a second I was a bit worried that Bill and Tom would tured for the other in opposite directions.
Wonderful chapter full of twinly goodness, rescuing AND mate!sex? Could it get any better? Only if the rescuing involved Jorg killing. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Finally, it's really truly happened! ;D
Oh yes, they both had that same plan. Of course they couldn't stay away from each other! Twinny homing instincts for the win~
Yes, action and double rescue and mating sex! Woohoo for twins! ;D Stay tuned for more twinliness and I'm happy you enjoyed!
Date: 06/07/12 10:52 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Yayyy! It finally happended! They are mates and everything is beautiful (and very hot)! It was adorable and intense and passionate, everything I've hoped for and more... Loved that the swords woke up for the same thing a the same time! Ohh this whole chapter was wonderful and I don't have anything coherent left to say but you're not expecting a coherent review after that, right? This pretty much express my feelings atm: hehfhehwjhwwhehdjejwhshd!! *____*
Author's Response: It finally happened! What an action-packed update, right?? Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. They were definitely overdue for this kind of awakening. Heee!! If incoherence is the answer then I am well-satisfied with that. ;D
Date: 06/07/12 08:26 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 1
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D