Date: 04/14/12 11:17 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Yay i cant wait -happy dances-
Author's Response: :D :D :D
Date: 04/14/12 11:14 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Hey odd question, who is publishing signal to noise? When it is published i wanna get a copy hehe
Author's Response: That's going to be Less Than Three Press, they've told me we're aiming for an October release date. :) Thanks for asking!
Date: 04/13/12 10:40 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Awww you really know how to make a reader feel the emotions. I think i wanted to pound my fists into that nurse with Tom, that sunovabitch
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear it! Oh, poor Tom, he probably should have...
Date: 04/13/12 05:33 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Poor twins ;~; But I am glad that you decided to do a remix of your story! Its interesting to see a different way of how it'll be if you change one thing!
Author's Response: Definitely poor twins! It's a difficult thing for both of them. I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
Date: 04/13/12 04:39 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Aww! Adorable twins are adorable... this makes me nervous for what's to come. It's so heartbreaking to read about them being separated, especially the way you wrote it. So intense. Loving this fic a lot so far, can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for the update =)
Author's Response: Aren't they though?? I'm sorry to make you nervous but it can't be helped! It is a heartbreaking situation for both of them. Thank you for reading! ♥ Can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapters.
Date: 04/13/12 02:23 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
ahhh, how's Jorg gonna deal with this? as cute as it is that they slept with each other anyway, they're gonna have to learn that too much resisting might just get one of them disposed of...:/ they'll have to learn to play it safe or something. yay for faaaast update! how many chapters will this be? and will the updates continue to be so speedy? :3 this story is a ray of sunshine in my life~ thank youuuu
Author's Response: It's hard to deal with resistance behind your back! And, getting caught is how they learn to be more stealthy. ;) This will be a total of 17 chapters, and it's all complete, so there shouldn't be too much delay unless I get too busy. :D Thanks for enjoying this story!
Date: 04/13/12 01:17 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Awwww ittle bitty twins!! Oh so very adorable. Stupid Jorg. This is not going to work, especially after they've gotten used to it for six years already. Six year olds can be stubborn little asses and these two have the strengtg to back it up. I hope Tom wakes up early enough to not get in trouble. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yes, they're wee ones! So cute, and Jorg is so heartless. It's a ridiculous thing for him to try to do, but the only course of action he's fixed on. Six year olds are definitely stubborn! We'll hope they stay out of trouble...but at what cost?
Date: 04/13/12 12:54 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
This is heartrending already, and I know it's only going to get worse. But, you make it hurt so good.
I love the three-year-olds figuring out they had some differences but then not caring because they don't need to worry about them. I think the teacher was right to be worried about their close bond, and that was beautifully shown by the pictures they drew.
My heart broke when Jorg actually separated them, but I may have squeed out loud when both boys broke down their doors. That was just perfect. Right up until they were punished. And now I'm very, very worried for them when their nurse finds them curled up together.
This is just incredible so far. I love these characters so much, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm really quite happy to hear that it hurts so good. ♥ And not because I'm a sadist of course!
Twins are completely involved in one another, each other's world...of course! It couldn't be any other way with these two. :) I'm happy you liked that scene.
It's a measure of how powerfully determined they are to stay together! Poor babies.
Thank you so much! I hope you keep enjoying more. :3
Date: 04/12/12 11:53 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
oh, God, I love this universe xD I tried to explain it to my roommate, and I realized that very few people could make this premise a real gem, but you're undoubtedly far above the average writer, so really anything you touch is gold. I really don't know where this new version is going, but I'm really really excited and full of ideas!
What stood out to me about this chapter...well, first, little Bill and Tom are just adorable and I love how they already totally rule the house. I can't say how long that will last, but they definitely hold all the cards in their sticky little hands at the moment. Hahaha, Jorg is so determined to keep them apart and they prevail! I like Jost's character, too. He doesn't know what he got himself into...:)
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you love it! I certainly made this as complicated as I could have, huh? That is a rare and incredible compliment and I greatly appreciate it!
I don't write wee twins very often but they are so, so fun when I let myself enjoy them. Jost is going to be interesting, bit of a background character but a pivotal role. :D Thanks and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 04/12/12 11:35 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Oh :'( This is pretty emotional to read. In a good way, of course.
I love that the twins (or was it mainly just Tom?) were able to pulverize the first door to get to each other.
Author's Response: I know...someone asked me if it was gonna get better any time soon! My poor boys.
Oh yes, that was both twins! They are quite physically powerful.
Date: 04/10/12 11:14 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Oh wow. Wow. Wow. What a start. *_____*
Jorg is so cold and practical. I love how you show us so much about his character through his actions as a nervous father, but not in the usual expectant-father way. Instead he's already ruthlessly thinking about his heir and planning for the future.
The twins just made me melt. Just born and already they only have eyes for each other. Poor Simone really gets the short end of the deal. It would have been so hard trying to take care of active toddlers who can break your ribs by accident. But to lose them ... poor Simone. I love how you showed the huge difference between human and Nephilim thinking by Jorg disliking Simone's natural peacemaking between the boys. They are the most adorable babies!
Then David and his toddler wrangling ways. I wonder how often he had to bribe the real-life twins with candy. It seems like it may have worked! ;)
But I can't imagine the poor little twins being separated. This is going to be a roller coaster of emotions, isn't it?
Your characters just come alive and pop off the page. They're incredible. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! *equally starry eyes*
Ruthless is a good way to describe him - he is definitely a calculating, distant sort of character.
They are each other's world! Poor Simone, in this case she's lost both babies - I can't even imagine. If she'd been able to raise them together, how different would that have been!
Omg I can just picture David going through the Schrei years with candy in his hip pocket, always.
It's going to be a roller coaster, buckle in! Thank you so much for your marvelous words. I very much hope you continue to enjoy this. :3
Date: 04/10/12 04:33 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
*squee* I'm so excited for this! I've loved the original series since the start and now I'm so looking forward to the turnout of this remix. Cause I mean, "what if?" is right.
Perhaps we could get a Wednesday/Sunday update schedule? Gives us something to kick-start our week, and something to look forward to midweek for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! It's definitely a major "what if," and I hope you enjoy how it plays out.
I've been updating twice a week, I hope it works okay for you! Sundays are hard for me to update. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/10/12 01:57 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
You should have seen the crazy HUGE smile I had on my face when I saw the email telling me you post this story. I'm SO SO SO happy!! Also, I agree there's not enough young twins, and these days, there's not enough twins whatever their ages. So thank you thank you thank you for saving us from all the het! lol
I'm loving the idea of this remix, it's genius and I'm so excited to read it! Brilliant first chapter, your writing is as flawless as usual and I've missed it, just so you know =P
Separating the twins is the worst thing ever but it's also really sweet to see how they want only each other at such a young age. I really enjoy reading about the way the twins gravitate toward one other and how they communicate in their own ways. I really can't wait to see where you're gonna take this from here.
As for the schedule update, I would say the more the better, especially since there's nearly nothing else to read... but I would be happy with your ``usual`` twice a week =) Whatever you decide, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I am so, so happy to put that huge smile on your face, believe me! This story has lots and lots of young twins, hopefully enough to satisfy us for a little bit. ;)
It was loads of fun to write! Just another 'what if,' and it managed to inspire me for the final story of the Nephilim series. Aw honey, thank you so much. *blush*
These two are particularly attached! I just can't resist twins that consider each other to be the whole world. :)
I can manage twice a week! Thank you, and I hope you enjoy reading more! :D
Date: 04/10/12 12:53 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
At the store, for a long moment, Jorg wished he could disown the bawling infants as his and leave them somewhere to be raised by wolves. The produce aisle seemed like a good place.
You know if Jorg wasn't in a mess of his own making or trying to separate the twins, I'd almost be sorry for him, heehee. This was superb! I don't think Jorg took into account that the twins could make his life a living hell when he made all his plans. *giggles* I'm having so much fun reading this, can't wait to read what else you have in store for us.
Author's Response: Yes, he's bringing his own doom upon him! He seriously underestimated how they'd band together against him. I'm pleased you enjoy it and look forward to hearing what you think of what's next! \o/
Date: 04/10/12 11:22 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
I can't even open the fic yet but I think I've read something like this in your lf? Anyway, as I said I din't read it yet but I couldn't wait to ask: there's gonna be a fixed update schedule? I love that about your fics and it's one of the major advantajes of havinf most of the fic already wrote :) *bribes you*
Author's Response: This story was based around a snippet I had in my LJ, yes! There will be a fixed update schedule of Monday/Thursday, I think I can manage that. :)
Date: 04/10/12 08:59 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Oh wow, I love this! The demon twins trilogy was always my favourite story of yours, I can't wait to see what you do with this. Great start, although Jorg would have a very hard time turning these two against each other...
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Oh yes, it should be an interesting road for all of them...hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 04/10/12 04:09 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
-glomps- omg YAY! little tomi and bill are so cute
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you enjoy them. More of this to come!
Date: 04/10/12 03:32 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Eep!! So glad to see you back!!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's good to be back!
Date: 04/10/12 03:13 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
It's an interesting thought. I liked the other stories in this. Seeing it play out this way will be fun. Some how I still don't think it will end the way Jorg wants it to but we'll see.
Author's Response: I hope you like this one as well! It's quite different from the others, to a point. And we shall see how that goes for him.
Date: 04/10/12 02:07 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
I suggest at least once a week, but preferably at least twice a week XD This is REALLY good, and I love the idea of "strong Nephilim Jorg" being overcome by the screaming of toddlers XD I can't wait for the next chapter - I'm REALLY excited *sparkly eyes like when Hunny-senpai sees sweets* So far, my favorite funny line in this has been "You were hired the moment you handed that candy over to their greedy paws, and they stopped crying" XD That was perfect. I also loved when the twins were re-united. It was so sweet, and so sad, and so adorable...*sigh* I can just imagine tiny little Bill, and tiny little Tom, all chubby and pale and a little pink (most babies are a little pink, I've found), their faces red from crying, tears still coming down their faces, and their thick brown-blonde hair a bit wavy, toddling as fast as they can towards each other so they're not separated anymore...*w* It's such an adorable, sweet sight!!!! Well done, Fyredancer-san ^-^
Author's Response: I can manage twice a week. XD Thank you! That kind of contrast was definitely fun to play with. ;)
What a criteria for hiring! So pleased you imagined such vivid imagery. ♥ They are adorable, aren't they. Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy!