Date: 05/22/12 02:17 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 4
Don't their teachers and other staff know they are in danger? Why do they stay? Bill and Tom need to hatch a plan to dispose of Jorg. They need to redeem the Nephilim race just like the real twins are doing.
Date: 05/21/12 11:08 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 5
So glad to read more about them! I've missed this story but it's always well worth the wait :) I loved reading about how bill came to the realization of his claim on Tom. It was so well weitten i felt like i was in bills mind. I'm super intrigued about where he's gonna act on it from here! I wonder when Tom is gonna come to the same conclusion too :P and as for Sammy, I'm not sure yet... I guess I'll have to wait and see! Thank you for the update =D
Author's Response: Sorry to make you wait! This month has just been terrible for me. I'm really pleased you're continuing to enjoy the story of course! And we still have a few surprises in store of course...you are most welcome and thanks for sticking by me!
Date: 05/20/12 11:33 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 4
Yes, I did notice the dreadlocked mentors named Marcus in at least two of your stories. I thought he must be a real person because he keeps recurring. Is he real or is he an original creation?
Date: 05/20/12 11:26 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 3
Well I guess it is Jorg who has inspired the rumors. It is a good strategy if he wants to turn them against one another. I still believe that they will end up with a stronger bond than they have ever had even if they go through a rough patch for now. Their love for each other will transcend all this evil manipulation and insecurity. Ultimately good will triumph over evil. I have faith in our boys.
Date: 05/20/12 01:40 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
See? Nothing and no one is powerful enough to separate them.
Date: 05/19/12 12:44 am Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
No one is powerful enough to come between our twins.
Date: 05/16/12 09:45 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
FYREDANCER!! I didnt realize you were posting again. I thought all the old slash writers were gone. Yay for one of you still being here!
Author's Response: I'm still here and kicking! ♥ And loving the twins. :) Thank you!
Date: 05/16/12 09:16 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 3
Awwww, poor babies! I imagine the rumors come from Jorg, since he's not above that to put the twins against each other and it's sort of working, because as much as Tom trusts Bill, he can't help the seed of doubt that grows everytime he hears them. *sighs*
Really loving this, it's different than anything I've read before and I just love the way you transport us to this other world so easily.
Date: 05/10/12 08:45 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
Seems I can't review unless I'm on anything that isn't IE, so I'll have to re-read (not that that's a chore or anything) ;) and try to review all over again.
About this chapter, wow, it was awesome! Loved the cuddly three year old twins, with Tom willing to do anything to make Bill happy and then while growing up annoying their tutors/handlers/father by sticking together as they did, no matter what. It's lovely to see their bond depicted like that.
Date: 05/09/12 07:38 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
Keep going!
Author's Response: I am! Hope you keep reading!
Date: 05/08/12 09:18 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
Samy sounds sexy hahaha
Author's Response: I think he is. ;D
Date: 05/08/12 04:05 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
I searched all over the internet but I only get the literal meaning of "two-by-four"...please help my ignorant soul xD
Date: 05/08/12 12:10 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
Aww twins, they are so cute. The sex convo was definitely both adorable and adorably frustrating! LOVED reading about Bill figuring it out. I wonder when and how Tom will catch up. Still can't figure out Samy's angle but I can't wait to read more! This was an excellent chapter as always =)
Author's Response: They're having a rough time of it! Glad you found it adorable...and frustrating, hehe. ;D Tom is just a bit slow! And we definitely get more insight on Samy's POV soon. :D Thanks for reading, I always look forward to your comments!
Date: 05/08/12 02:57 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
Loved the chase at the end, hehe XD
"clue-by-four" meaning a clue to the fourth power? Because I didn't get that right away.
Hmm, Samy is okay.
edit: Oh, "clue-by-four" as in a pun on a "two-by-four" *facepalm* Sorry, I have mild autism. Sarcasm and word play sometimes go right over my head.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed their chase! They're getting closer and closer...
Yes, you got it at the end, clue-by-four as a play on "two-by-four." More to come, and looking forward to seeing what you think of Samy!
Date: 05/08/12 01:45 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
LOL "clue-by-four" omggg, best ever. Samy so want's to get some of that, but I wonder what he was thinking when Tom went after Bill..."interesting," eh? Argh! if Tom had caught up with Bill just then, I feel like they would have gotten to it~ but of course, nothing is ever easy in your stories(except Bill in the original version of this one ;)) they're adorably frustrating, but all their clueless-ness is giving me a second puberty! Nooo more UST ;_; lol, i love it and hate it. great chapter! really eventful and it felt like this one moved a bit more quickly, like we got further even though the UST was not resolved.
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you enjoyed it! ;D Oh yes, I think Samy would enjoy getting some of that, but he's a smart guy and very observant as well. And of course this story is more than making up for things being so easy in the original version! Poor delayed-development twins... Omg yes, sorry, there IS more UST, haha. Hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 05/07/12 11:39 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 4
Aww, bless Tom's pointed little head *pets his dreads adoringly and condecendingly*
OMG FINALLY!!! Thank goodness one of the twins gets it...and...Samy too? Methinks he knows what be going on betwixt them. That they are mated... *nods*
*rflmao* Awkward sex taaaalk. I can't pick which it is, adorable or adorably frustrating....do I really have to? Can't it be both? Schön schön Bitte?
Is it horrible of me to say I think I want it to take a two by four for Tom to catch on?
I still don't know what to think about Samy...Did he say that thing about 'not senseing a threat' to antagonize Bill, or was he just being honest?
Good lordy wonderful chapter! Keep up the fantabulous work!
Author's Response: He really is very pointed except where he's dense, right? ;)
Samy is a smart guy, hehe. And Bill...he's just pining, now! Let's go with both. I think they are both adorable AND adorably frustrating, poor silly boys.
Tom does kind of need to be knocked upside the head. ;D
Samy was teasing Bill, but Bill took him very, very seriously. XD
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 05/05/12 09:00 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 3
I think I'd go crazy if I were Bill or Tom. They're both so close yet so far apart and there is nothing keeping them that way except themselves. But at times it's Bill's instinct for survival that makes him snap at Tom *sigh*
Author's Response: Yeah, they're really close but there's an invisible wall between them! Poor, confused boys. Thank you for reading! ♥
Date: 05/04/12 10:00 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 3
I feel like I'm repeating myself but I adore the tension. Every confrontation scene between the twins is just so damn good. And the way you describe their feeling and emotions is SO vivid. I really really like this story, probably my favorite one so far in this universe (and I LOVE all the other ones =P). Jealous and angry Bill at the end was awesome, can't wait to read more about this Samy situation. Thank you for another brilliant chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear that! This one has so much more tension and lead-up and, well, probably more plot too. ;P So I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. Thanks for reading and giving me such sweet reviews!
Date: 05/04/12 11:39 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 3
Why do I think Bill will try to seduce Samy to sniff things out, then realise that that was Tom's plan all along? This story is like an AU to the original series and I like this one much better!
Author's Response: Now there's an interesting thought! Thanks, I'm really happy you like this so much.
Date: 05/04/12 09:20 am Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 3
Oh-kaaay...how did I miss a chapter? Oh right, Finals Weeks fml. These were an amazing two chapters. It really feels like stuff is starting to move at an expedited rate. Danke Jorg, und Samy für diesen bisschen Hilfe.
Bill is definitely realizing he is jealous, I just don't think he realizes WHY yet. Makes me want to slap him. Especially when we were SO CLOSE to a first kiss, and everyone who has read the original 'verse knows they would NOT be able to stop at a kiss. It would just open the floodgates.
God this is getting good. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Whoops? Glad you caught up. ♥ Yes, the story is really starting to move now!
Good call - Bill FEELS before he knows what he's feeling, you know? Oh my goodness yes. Once they start, there's no stopping them.
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it and I hope you like the latest chapter!