Date: 04/24/23 06:01 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 1
Forgive the barrage of reviews a bajillion years later! I'm still catching up on reviews one author at a time from when I got into the fandom a year ago! Just a crazy little "project" to put some love on the stories I've read lol... which includes this one! An awesome remix of the original trilogy!
Date: 12/20/13 02:37 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
hello, I really finished ths story in twelve hours or less. its awsome because i'm not from your country and my english give me more problems that it solve!
amazing story, I love the twins, Bill was so strong! and Tom ... well I dont have words for Tom behavior! I think this last chapter maybe can start another fic? so, if you do that, I will read it! :D gretings from Mexico . ... and congratulations for the story.
Author's Response: Sorry if it was difficult for you! But I'm happy you thought the story was good enough to read so quickly. Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! I really appreciate it. I'm not sure if I could write a sequel, but it's great that you wanted one. :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/11/12 03:53 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
Loved it. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank YOU. *bows*
Date: 11/03/12 07:42 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
It did. It met my expectations very well. I didn't want them to inherit the House, because it would keep them confined, so I'm glad they didn't inherit it together. I also like that Samy has spent so much time in the human world that he's become open to the notion of change, and also to the notion that new things, or different things, can be good (which Nephilim in general don't seem to have realized). Samy is kinda based on Samy Deluxe, right??? At first I couldn't figure out why it was familiar, and then it clicked XD Amazing job on this fic, really amazing. I love the parallel it gives to the other Nephilim-verse fics. Truly wonderful job, and I can't wait to see what you come out with next ^-^
Author's Response: Very good, thank you! Yeah, I didn't want them to inherit the house, either - and trust me, Jorg was not ready for them to inherit it! Samy is definitely based off Samy Deluxe. He was one of my favorites. ♥ So pleased you enjoyed it, thanks! I'm going to have a low profile for a bit, I think, but we'll see what comes next and thanks for your reviews!
Date: 10/10/12 08:13 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
What else can I say, just that I really loved it. It took me sometime to do it through the whole series, but it was worth it. Now I’m really looking forward to the next part, because I can’t stop thinking about the twins. I also want to thank you for answering my previous reviews and for sharing your talent with a simple mortal like me.
Author's Response: Really glad you enjoyed it so much, thank you, and very pleased you thought it was worth it! ♥ I'm just happy if I could entertain you with my humble story, thanks for sticking with me for the ride. :)
Date: 10/09/12 12:12 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 5
Hey beautiful, I’ve been so busy, but anyhow I found more time to continue reading this fantastic story. The scene of the battle, when the twins combined powers was wwaaa amazing, I just love it. And I also enjoy the way Bill always gets what he wants from Tomi jejeje. It’s fantastic. It’s been a pleasure to read you work, you’re really talented.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know what you thought of it! Ohhh yes, Bill sure does get what he wants. ;) Thanks so much for your lovely reviews, I very much appreciate them.
Date: 10/03/12 11:11 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 2
Their first sexual encounter was wow, and more wow. It was fantastic. OMG you are an artist when you write. I wish I had that ability to show so many emotions through words. I will never regret to have started reading this series. Thank you for painting a smile in my face with your wonderful talent.
Author's Response: *_* Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you gave the series a chance. I appreciate your lovely reviews, thanks again. :)
Date: 10/01/12 10:24 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 5
Once again you have gained my respect. You really are amazing. This fic is just great, it’s something everyone must read. It’s been so different. First because it started with the twins being babies so no sex at all. But unlike other people may think, that only has made it more interesting. You can’t wait too long before resume your reading wow. I must continue reading. I love it.
Author's Response: Oh wow, I really appreciate that! Definitely this one has no sex for a long long time - it's all about the slow development here! I think this is the second-longest time I've ever made the twins wait before they, ahem, get involved. Glad you love it so much, thank you!
Date: 10/01/12 04:26 pm Title: Their Distinctive Origins: Chapter 2
When I started reading this fic, I was surprised to find a whole new fic. My first thought was OMG this girl is fantastic, you could take your original idea and made a new and wonderful story. I really love to read about the twins being little babies, and it has been great reading the way you write about their personalities, the way they belong to each other. It’s just great and I’m anxious to continue finding new amazing thins.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Yeah, it was a great chance to explore the twins from this universe, but in an entirely new way - we get to see them grow up together and how things develop from there! Really glad you enjoyed it so much, thank you!
Date: 08/13/12 11:15 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
I love it :-) a great story
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you love it. :)
Date: 08/12/12 02:46 pm Title: Their Irregular Maturation: Chapter 2
I'd like it more if Bills first kiss was with Tom :-/
Author's Response: I know, me too. :(
Date: 08/09/12 02:52 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
I simply loved the story!! I wish it didn't have to end yet.. However, I did expect them to beat their father at the end, rule together, etc.. But I guess this keeps it mysterious.. =)
Date: 07/27/12 09:22 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
So, I read this last chapter when I was in Dresden, about an hour away from where the twins were born. I was also by a river with view on a castle... Let's just say it was a very cool moment! Love this series so much and it was awesome to read this different alternative. I enjoyed every moment of it! Before I go and explore Prag, I think today is your birthday? That's what lj tells me anyway, so HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! hope you have a fantastic day!! :)))
Date: 07/20/12 08:51 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
Lol, nope, it didn't end how I thought it would, but I wasn't disappointed! :D
Also, I think it ended well here, so I'm not expecting a sequel.
Date: 07/20/12 01:20 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
*snort* they broke the bed!
loved this story! so glad it had a happy ending!
Date: 07/20/12 04:51 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
I may be reading too much into this, but what Samy said really struck me. Could he, maybe, have been born twins, and his other was killed at birth?
It was a really good ending, but certainly not what I expected. I definitely expected either the twins or Jörg to wind up dead at the end, preferably Jörg.
It just wouldn't have been a Nephilim!fic without furniture breaking, would it? Lol
I'm really sad to see this alter uni end...maybe you will continue it someday? Some of their travels? Meeting their mom, maybe? I dunno, I'm just sad to see it go, especially seeing as you are such an amazing writer. Wonderful work. I will be keeping my eye out for the final installment of the original 'verse now...
Date: 07/20/12 02:30 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
Wow, what a perfect ending! The last three paragraphs were just the perfect icing on the cake.
This story has taken so many twists and turns, but you've always made it about the twins and their bond and how much stronger they are together. It's just a beautiful story, and I want to read it again now that it's complete!
I love every little bit of defiance the twins can throw at Jorg, from scaling the wall to blowing into the dining hall. It really suits them trying to rebel and stand up to him.
The confrontation was not what I was expecting but was so much better! Figures Jorg would be savvy enough to know the twins are a real threat now, so he'd try to tell partial truths to satisfy them for the moment. He should be worried about them, though, but I love that you've made the twins just as suspicious (rightly so) as he is.
I had to laugh that Tom knows exactly how to appease Bill, when he told him "You’re always right, Bill." xD It just seemed like such a perfect twin detail. Right up there with breaking the bed, which was really hilarious and beautiful!
Then I was surprised that David was kind of a double agent the whole time. Looking back, maybe he was more ambiguous than I thought. I'm glad the twins can sort of trust him. Maybe.
But, wow, Samy was great here. The twins definitely needed someone wiser in the world than they are, and I hope they heed the advice he offered. Still, it made me sad that they have to remember never to talk about their true relationship. Maybe someday when they've come into their strength, they can return and show the Nephilim world what they're made of. In the meantime, they'll have other grand adventures together!
This was such a fabulous story, and you, my dear, are such a gifted storyteller. You're amazing!
Date: 07/20/12 12:16 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 7
I loved the ending! I love that they walked out with their dignity and ability, and even some support. And now they're off, together, to forge their own path. How neat! I'm glad it didn't end in battle, death, and coup de etat or whatever that french term is. It ended with a huge heaping scoop of potential, plopped right on top of the ice cream sundae of a wonderful adventure. :) Thank you for taking us on this journey with the twins.
Date: 07/14/12 03:35 am Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 5
The twins won their second battle together! What a fight. Bill is way powerful! I love how he uses his power to break open the earth or get Tom to pull him on the trailer. XD
It was sweet how the twins were kind enough to consider protecting the fields too. It shows their compassion and thoughtfulness. Noble rulers indeed. I also liked how Shana's village was so accepting of the twins. That worked out for the village in the end, because Tom and Bill defended them all the more zealously.
Speaking of zealous defending, Tom is so defensive of his butt. I feel like that will just make Bill tease more and more.
Date: 07/11/12 06:46 pm Title: Their Inevitable Conclusion: Chapter 6
I'm nervous for them, but excited to read about it.