Date: 04/09/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Poor Tom, so confused, and Bill is so happy with Kiro and unaware of his twin's torment. It must have been pure torture for Tom to shower with Bill. You show his emotions really well. At least Bill has realised something is wrong with his twin. I'm really looking forward to their talk later.
Author's Response: thank you! we try to show his feelings as good as we can :) next chapter in few days xx
Date: 04/01/12 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it :3 .Keep Going!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 04/01/12 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This has great promise. I love Cinema Bizarre and Kiro is so cute, and in this story he and Bill are just too sweet together. Poor Tom struggling with strange feelings for his twin. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, you can read the next chapter in few days xx