Reviews For The Fallen
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Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/12 10:12 pm Title: Council's Decision

oooOOOooo!!! "Well, he was going to be my bitch" bahahaha!!! :)

great chapter!!! :) i really enjoyed this one! :) the story is really unfolding!

Why did they take Tomi?! Poor Bill is losing his everything! I hope he gets to keep his Schatzi :)

keep up the great work! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/12 06:45 pm Title: Reminiscing

so short! please update soon! :) loving the story! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 11:15 pm Title: Curse Those Fates

Very short!!! Haha more?? ;)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/12 04:36 pm Title: Mein Derik

awwww!!! :) she is falling for him isn't she?! :) great chapter :) loving the story :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/12 05:01 pm Title: Everyone Deserves Their Secrets

I got a chuckle reading the mercury is gay part! Haha :) great new chapter :) I love it!! Keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/12 09:58 am Title: Everyone Deserves Their Secrets

nice chapter :)
please update sooon :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 09:02 pm Title: Don't Hurt the Messenger

hmmm... what is the message?!? :P good chapter as always! :) definitely enjoying the story!! :) I'll be waiting for more! :D

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 12:48 am Title: Don't Hurt the Messenger

nice chapter :)
cant wait for moooore :)
please update soooon :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/12 11:50 am Title: Judgement

Amazing chapter as Always!!! :) I can picture Bill being the sweetest dad!! :) and poor Derik!! He really is a sweetheart! :)

Is Tom goin to become fallen along with Bill?? I can't wait to find out *fingers crossed for good luck for Tomi*

Keep up the great work :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 02:55 am Title: Judgement

oooooh......father and daughter...how sweet :)
now i want to hug my daddy :):):)
very nice :)
please update sooooon :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 07:48 pm Title: Candy

hahahaha!! so is bill's style in this story the style he has now?? :)

And Candy has returned!!! :) I love that most of the main characters are still major parts of this story :) keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: I'm thinking something similar. I just can't see Bill with anything normal ^_^

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 04:38 am Title: Candy

aaahhh very nice chapter :)
please update sooon :)
keep up the goood work :)
cant wait what bill will do :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 01:28 am Title: It's Time

i can picture Georg loving Schatzi like his own child ((or niece ;] ) and thats why he would give in :P haha and is she old enough to learn of her mother?!? :) I sure hope so! and my question from my last review was definitely answered :) Keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 01:14 am Title: Derik

im really excited for more Derik! :) and I hope Schatzi doesn't get in too much trouble for a little loss of power, she is just young!! :) ps, I'm wondering how Derik and Schatzi met? :P did their parents know one another? :) just a lil question ;)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 12:56 am Title: Pendant

awww Tom is so sweet! :) I hope Bill can eventually tell Schatzi of her mother :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/12 03:14 pm Title: It's Time

clifhanger.....
very nice chapter :)
it was time that bill talk to his daughter!!!!
cant wait!!
update soooooooooooooooon :)
keep up the goooood work :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/12 07:25 am Title: Derik

i started loving derik tooo ^_^
awesome chapter :)
cant wait for the reaction of bill
please update soooon :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/12 03:20 pm Title: Pendant

please mooooooooore :)
update soooooooooon :)
pleeeeeeeeeease :)):):):)):):
keep up the goood work :)

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