Date: 06/09/12 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Ah, this was very good, I liked every word, it was so smooth how they went to it.
The title will not fit to the third chapter, though...
Author's Response: You're quite right, the whole Surrogate thing has gone entirely out the window in chapter three. ;0)
Date: 06/08/12 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Now I know what they were thanking me for in the reviews, lol! YOU'RE WELCOME LADIES! But I still get to read it first.
Excellent work. One of them called you "brilliant".
Author's Response: Brilliant feels like too strong a word, and seriously - you saved chapter three. I was so off my game I reverted to seventh grade I think.
Date: 06/08/12 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, she really is. But then...so are you.
Author's Response: I just saw the review with someone thanking you for spurring me into continuing this, that's so danged sweet. And boy howdy am I behind on reviews...
Date: 06/08/12 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is great smut - loved the dirty talk!
Author's Response: Yeah, I confess - I love it too. lol Thanks!
Date: 06/08/12 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! thanks to Aufgeweckt Engel!!! wooooo, can't wait for the last part xD this story begged for completion almost as hard as Bill and Tom did ;) oh,yah. that was...well, i think we all know how it was. hottttt
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, Engel is awesome. Chapter three was rough, very very rough when I first banged it out - she and Amdee helped me get it back under control. Posted and ready to read!
Date: 06/08/12 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Again, wow! This is brilliant. U realize that right, lol. Can't wait for the next update xDDD
Author's Response: I'm too shy to accept brilliant - but I am glad you enjoyed!
Date: 06/08/12 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit! Other than that being said, i'm speachless...Wow!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/08/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Abso-effing-lutely fantastic, more please
Author's Response: Thank you! The third and final chapter should be up in the next week or two.
Date: 06/08/12 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I have never ever read story this good before:)
Author's Response: Oh there are a bunch of authors better than me on THF, go look at my favorite authors list and you'll find them. Thank you though!
Date: 06/08/12 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved the first part of this story and thought it was just a one-off so I was overjoyed to see you'd written a second chapter and there's going to be a third. I re-read chapter one and it was as amazing as I remembered and this one was just WOW! Can't wait for the conclusion.
Author's Response: It was a one shot, but a few people requested a continuation and the second chapter just popped into my head a little while ago, so here it is. Glad you like it!
Date: 04/12/12 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was like, really, really, really hot... and awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/09/12 03:11 am Title: Chapter 1
really really good. would love a sequel :3
Author's Response: Added another chapter since you and a few other people wished for one. :0)
Date: 03/30/12 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1
That was freaking AMAZING!!! Even tho the whole thing was Het, it didn't feel that way... the twincest was staring u in the face, the energy between them palpable. I love the way u wrote this, the way u built the tension and the situation. Great work. Super sexy. The end was fab too, I kind of like the cliffhanger. It feels like they're still brothers. Super awesome. I loved reading every minute of this fic. Crazy sexy. :)
Author's Response: I was going for a het but... well, not, sort of thing here so I'm really glad you got that out of it. Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/29/12 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a fantastic read:-) It's quite interesting because I never read HET, can't stand HET, simple as that. But I gave it a try and wasn't disappointed. Now your story belongs to a tiny, exclusive collection of 4-5 HET pieces I did like:-)))
The funniest thing is the chemistry between the twins was rediculously hot and they didn't even touch:-)) It was simply explosive, how they kept watching each other and Tom's "Want you" ...god damn it, they don't even need to touch and reader is ready to faint.
I loved it.
Author's Response: It's really cool to have one of the non-het people like a het story, so thank you very much for that, and thanks for giving it a chance. I've posted a chapter two - which is decidedly NOT het any longer.
Date: 03/29/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just posted a chapter two.
Date: 03/28/12 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I looked, this is a one shot.
Please make a sequel...
Author's Response: Request granted! ;0)
Date: 03/28/12 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful.
I was amazed at every word.
I liked it so much! And when the girls REALLY switched I was screaming my delight. Per-fect. I dont even know if there is a sequel to that ( Im gonna look now) but I really hope so.
Author's Response: Thanks! This was originally a one shot but it's turned into a trilogy, in part because you and another few people wanted to see what happened next. Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: 03/27/12 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Shut up, Bill.”
Perfect ending to a perfect story. It could have been that I was there. This read so realistically and with such emotion. Honestly? I think this may be one of the best stories on the sight second only to HaiZoe's Sk8ter Boi.
This could actually happen.
Exemplary effort as always. I hope that for once, people on this God-forsaken site actually catch on and recognize you for the superior talent you are.
For this site, I give you a 10 of 10.
Author's Response: Aaaaand... chapter two is up. You know I went and read Sk8ter Boi after you suggested it here. HaiZoe is kind of awesome.