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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/23 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it! Was SUPER HOT!

Reviewer: tina12011981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/14 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I totally love your stories. Why did you stop writing?

Reviewer: empathee101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/14 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ohmygod. This is soooo well done. It seems so realistic, like real people instead of 2d characters. really intense story. Loved it

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/13 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 3

This fic was freaking awesome!! Loved every second of it. I don't know what else to say.
The sex is some of the best I've ever read, the characters feel realistic, the connection between the twins is brilliant. All-around amazing fic. It's well developed and I love love love the detail and pace of it. This is definitely the best twincest I've read in a long while and I'm so glad u wrote this. I've been itching to read something like this and this was perfection. Thank you! Super well done! :)

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/13 03:18 am Title: Chapter 3

Perfect.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/13 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

As I already mentioned, you are a great smut writee. Well, you're all the way great, but I want ti bring up such amazing combination of little awkward reality and lovely fantasy mixing in your smut in right way. So good! If I only had had that rimming or bitToming... :D
Overall it was fun to read how Bill struggled with his feelings and how it was not only of the feelinfs, but also kind of a power stryggle between them. It was nice touch to add Tom's insecurity about being rejected here.
And there was this adorable boy'ish and brotherly feeling all along, keeping it more twc than just normal relationship.
Great job and love to see you back!

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/13 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

Well, THAT was sexy as hell!

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/13 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have no words to describe how fabulous this story is. I was hoping it would get finalized with 3rd part and now when it did all i can say is BIG THANK YOU!
Beautiful, just beautiful!

Reviewer: Aufgeweckt_Engel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/13 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I'd have to go back and read it, but I think initially, you used something else and I was pushing for a whole different adjective. I just knew that "skittish" was the one you'd choose. It was afterwards that I said "lose the horse thing". Or was it a colt?

Reviewer: Aufgeweckt_Engel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/13 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

"Saved" feels like too strong a word, and seriously - it turns out even the gifted have to actually work at it. Right?

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

that was awesome :) i'm so out of the words :)

Reviewer: tina12011981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 09:40 am Title: Chapter 3

I totally loved this story!!!Congrats

Reviewer: Nessie-san Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/13 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Awesome job on this. No other words needed. Simply awesome job XD

Reviewer: Nessie-san Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

KYAAAAAAAA!!! Okay, I will say that I mostly skimmed the first chapter, but that's 'cause I don't like reading het very much. I did, however, take note of every time Bill and Tom were looking at each other during the act XD This chapter was... I dunno. It was beautiful and wonderful and sweet and sad and... this chapter was just perfect. Really, really perfect. I can't wait for the last bit ^-^

Author's Response: Chapter three is up (finally) and no worries - it contains no het whatsoever. lol

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/12 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hot. Super hot. But most of all, so intimate. You detailed anmd defined their morning perfctly, it felt really real and strong. I could feel the power of their connection and coming like that. It was really beautiful, actually. Sincere.

This is how it should be. Forever. :)

Author's Response: Thank you Amdee - and for your help with chapter three. It's finally finished!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/12 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

How have I ,anaged to miss this fic? I have no idea... Damn. But I'm here now.

And dauymn that was hot! I have no shame when I say that I want this to happen and I wouldn't mind at all to be involved. Ops. Really, very hot idea and it's always fascinating to read twins being so... close... watching, wanting, reacting to each other without actually touching. It's somehow so forbidden, but still possible.

And the ending... aww. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, neither of the female characters are even remotely based on me personally, but I too wouldn't have minded being either one of them for awhile. lol

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/12 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

Absolutely fabulous. It took my breath away. Literally. Third part would be more than propriate:-) Angel is absolutely right about that. Please, continue.

Author's Response: Thank you! And chapter three is now posted. :0)

Reviewer: Aufgeweckt_Engel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/12 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

And I KNEW you were going to use "skittish". I KNEW it! Have we become mutually predictable?

Author's Response: I think you tried to get me to take that word out, didn't you? Or was it just the horse part... (I did at least remove the horse).

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well then. I'll be in my bunk.

But before I go, I want to leave a worthwhile review! I like that Bill was a bit mortified at Tom's confession. That was something new and fresh to read, since in ficverse when the twins usually have their first time, it is something they immediately accept without question.

It was very sweet that they both realized there was an emotional component to their coupling, that it was more than the physical release of sex with other people. And now they're going to be hooked, but not without a bit of awkwardness and hiding first, hmm? Looking forward to part three to see where you'll take this.

Author's Response: You get mad props for quoting Jayne there, I'm a huge Firefly fan. Heh. Thank you for your thoughtful review, and chapter three is now posted. :0)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH WOW. This was so sexy, that they were focused on each other and still intent on bringing those girls pleasure. This was insanely sexy. I love how Bill is still adorable even after all that.

Author's Response: When I write Bill he is always at least slightly adorable, I cannot help myself. Heh. Thanks!

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