Date: 03/22/08 10:29 am Title: Chapter 10
OMG OMG OMG!!
she has to remember!!
please update soon!!
Author's Response: I will XDrnThanks for reading =)
Date: 03/18/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
i love this story!! more more more please?
Author's Response: Thank you ^^rnI will, Im actually starting to write the 9th chapter now, hopefully it will be up today =DrnXD
Date: 03/18/08 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG OMG OMG OMG
what is in that book
* grabs you and shakes you until you tell me *
xx
Author's Response: LOL ..youll find out soon enough ^^
Date: 03/17/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Duh, Duh, Duh... ooohhhh is there twincest coming... jk. Update soon!
Author's Response: Lol unfortunatley no =PrnI will, as soon as possible ^_^
Date: 03/17/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should make sure you get the 'ie' and 'ei' in words like nein and meine the right way, It's a little irritating to German speakers. Also, when Tom comes in in Chapter 6 or 7 (the one where they play video games) he says "Hallo meine freunds", it should be "Hallo meine freunde". Other than those tiny and insignificant things that non-german speakers would never know, I F*ING LOVE THIS STORY!!!! You really are amazing!!! keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Lol thanks so much for the corrections,! I didnt even notice the mistakes I made =PrnThank you ^_^ Im glad you like it so much XD
Date: 03/17/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh damn.....this is great!!! i bet i know what's in there!!!
Author's Response: lol thanks ^_^rnHehe
Date: 03/17/08 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
WHY THE HELL DID YOU END IT THERE! I'MA GET YOU AT SCHOOL OFELIA!
Kay, all jokes aside, I guess you deserve a real response from me,
although, this will be the ONLY (I repeat ONLY) time you'll ever have
me write anything seriously. I just love getting all cirtical:P
Let's see...OMG! I LOVE ALL THE LITTLE FIGHTS YOU HAVE GOING
ON BETWEEN TOM, SARAH AND BILL! SO FUNNY! Tom's rules of the road:P
Oh yea,h and all of Sarah's band t-shirts:P We all know you got half
them from me. Okay, maybe the MCR one. But THAT STILL COUNTS! Oh yeah,
I also liked how you introduced Georg and Gusti, but it sucks how so far
they didn't really stay much in the story.
Honestly, I really liked it, as in over all. But if you want
me to be really nit-picky, there are some things that don't really go.
Like the biggest thing so far. The totally awesome German languge.
Everyone in the story knows that Sarah doesn't speak German. So WHY DID
HER PARENTS SEND HER THERE? Speaking of parents, I'm so glad they care
about their dear, loving daughter, for they have already totally called
her three times this chapter ;) (Kay, I'll shut up now).
I totally know why you made Sarah never see The band of Tokio Hotel.
I just find it hard to believe that she's never seen them before, I
mean, she bought the album didn't she? Well, actually now that I think
about it, I guess it could happen.
Oh yeah! Um...why ARE Bill and Tom in school anyways? Shouldn't they go
and make an album or something:P?
SO I guess thats all...I wonder if there's a litmit to what you can
write...
UPDATE OR I'LL PUMA ATTACK YOU! And ditch you at Starbucks on the way
home
Author's Response: LOL ok im going to explain some things to you..rn1. Gusti and Georg will come again, dont worry domi ^_^rn2.Sarah DOES speak a little German, if you notcied, she says small words, like i do ^_^ Her parents sent her there beacuse it was far, and they thought it would be good if she was far from Notrh Americarn3. Her parents might have called (use your imagination hehe) its just that, i write the important things only lolrn4. she DID NOT buy the album, she only listens to them on her mp3 ( didnt you read lol love you)rn5. Bill and tom are at school because in REAILITY they are actually supposed to be in like grade 12 or something, because the schools in europe are different *shrugs* also, this is a fan FIC meaning, none of this is true, so dont take it too literally ^_^rn6. holy snot you wrote me my biggest review *gives cookie* XDrn7. I will update soon dont worry ^_^rn8. LOVE YOU/LIEBE DICH!!!!!!!!!!!<3rnsee you at school tomorrow ^_^
Date: 03/17/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh Bills little black book what could be in there?
Author's Response: lol, youll find out soon ^_^
Date: 03/17/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG , an btw , nien like yoy write it it's nein ! like ftw :DD
Author's Response: Oh ! lol Thank you I didnt even notice *slaps forhead* Thanks for pointing that out ^_^
Date: 03/17/08 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
'He humps them, then dumps them'
HAHAHA!
Oh, I love you:P
Is Max Foxx based on Max Green? C'mon, dood, I totally knew it! These names are soooooooo German! XD
It's good so far:)
b29;
Author's Response: LMAO! rnYa, he is based on Maxx Green hehe you are good ^_^rnDanke Schon hehe love you <3
Date: 03/17/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
OFELIA!
Remember when I told you that I might've passed your story while I was browsing, well, the link was purple, which means that I've already clicked on it. WHICH MEANS I'VE READ IT OMG. I totally didn't bother to check the name of the author OMG.
Author's Response: LMAOrnHow do you like it by the way ^_^rnDomi already read it, and managed to give me a PARAGRAPH of a review, but it was fuuny^_^rnlol see you tomorrow Oli <3
Date: 03/17/08 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 8
eeeekkkk you have to update i like luv this stor and im guna die if i dont no wuts in that book!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol thanks ^_^rnI will as soon as I can =D
Date: 03/17/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
the first part made me laugh a lot i think bill over reacted a bit but please update soon i really want to know whats inside that book please
Author's Response: lol I will ^_^rnThanks for reading =D <3 xXx
Date: 03/17/08 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww, Bill is so sweet :)
Author's Response: lol ya ^_^
Date: 03/16/08 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
i amost cried reading this chapter how can they be so mean to her i love the ending
Author's Response: aww thank you ^_^rn
Date: 03/16/08 11:09 am Title: Chapter 7
It's really good! I cried when they burned her picture *sob* Update soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^rnI will =D xXx
Date: 03/16/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 7
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was the sweetest thing ever
*huggles*
xx
Author's Response: aw thanks ^_^rn*huggies* =DrnxXx
Date: 03/16/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww! The end was cute ^^,
OhmiGOSH how I hate them right now!
Author's Response: Thankies ^_^rnYa me too lol
Date: 03/13/08 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
BITCH!!!
I swear to God i want to kill her!
omg, i just about cried like 3 times during this story...especially when Bill started to sing to her...
Amazing, please update soon
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like ^_^ Thank you <3rnI will update as soon as possible ^_^
Date: 03/13/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
uh Ann and Max are such assholes. lol great chapter I loved the part when Bill was questioning Sarah about sleeping with him and Tom too funny
Author's Response: lol thank you =Drnlol ya that was funny, hehe ^_^