Date: 05/11/12 04:53 am Title: This Is Hell
Loved it as always! Poor Bill and Tom. I think it'll take 2-3 chapters to get Tom better 'cause these things take time. Can't wait to Tom feel better and start talking with Bill again!
Author's Response: Thank you! It'll take a while before Tom's better, you're right about that.
Date: 05/10/12 10:43 pm Title: This Is Hell
A lot of chapters, because you have to keep this story going. It's so emotional and the reality is, when most people have eating disorders, they are constantly in and out of recovery because it is a mental disease first and a physical disease second. For someone who says they've never dealt with this, you are portraying the emotions and mental states of the sufferer and everyone around him so well. The helpless feelings of loved ones who desperately want to get the person through it is written so well in this story. It's great, but end it when you feel the story is ready to end because sometimes, the writer doesn't really get to choose, but what's being written has a way of finishing itself when it's ready, if that makes sense. You should be proud of this, because it is amazing and you must have really taken the time to research it and think it through. Job well done!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow, I... thank you so, so much. I am really proud of this story, especially because of all the positive feedback I've been getting. I actually didn't do very much research. Hollyoaks, some other eating disorder stories, and a tiny bit of online research gave me the knowledge that I have. The rest is what I think would be logical. But really, thank you so much for the review.
Date: 05/10/12 08:48 pm Title: This Is Hell
*sob* Yes my heart is successfully broken. This may take a while for Tom to see clearly .. I am guesing 2 or 3 chapters? My heart clenches,literally, :'( Owww.
Author's Response: Good, it was supposed to be heartbreaking. :D
Date: 05/06/12 10:24 pm Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
looking forward to more XD
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. XD
Date: 05/06/12 02:30 pm Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
O My.. Sad! Also sad for Gustav, Georg and Bill, because they have to help Tom trough this. I hope Tom becomes better, soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'll tell you this, there's more drama coming up. Things may not be so easy just yet. Stay tuned!
Date: 05/06/12 11:00 am Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
Awww, so sad .(. But it'll be for the best in the end. Tbh, staying in a hospital for a long time sucks, but maybe they'll all feel better soon. Very nicely written pain with this hospital thing. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much.
Date: 05/06/12 10:37 am Title: In Too Deep
I think it depends on a country if it's possible, but at least it will be very difficult. However, this is fiction and in fiction we can always "moothen thingfs up" a bit for the sake of story telling.
I'm curious to see how things go in the hospital, so up to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think you might be right. But it fits this way, and this is fiction. Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it! I update every Friday, so stay tuned!
Date: 05/05/12 01:46 pm Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
This was so emotional. You wrote it so well, I could just picture Tom resisting being pulled down the stairs and clinging onto the rail and anything he could grab hold of so he didn't have to go on that gurney. I could feel his sense of betrayal and Bill's anguish at having to do this to his twin. And the end part with Bill returning home to an empty house was absolutely heatbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, doll. I'm glad you could feel all the emotions.
Date: 05/04/12 01:01 pm Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
Wow...Just wow. This whole story has been amazing and realistic, but this chapter..I can't. It hurts to read, because it hits so close to home. This is so well written, and you have all the feelings and emotions spot on. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so, so much! I really appreciate it.
Date: 05/04/12 12:27 pm Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
Oh my god I teared up during this chapter :(
Author's Response: Yeah, I was expecting some people to maybe tear up a little. Thank you for reading and for the review!
Date: 05/04/12 10:35 am Title: Smokers Outside The Hospital Doors
Oh my, i'm crying here. I just hate seeing Bill sad. But awesome chapter. can't wait for next Friday!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/29/12 01:18 am Title: In Too Deep
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next XD
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/28/12 12:37 pm Title: In Too Deep
I just read all chapters one after one. Couldn't stop. It feels so real and i did cry. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it. Stay tuned, I update every Friday.
Date: 04/27/12 10:43 pm Title: In Too Deep
Omg I love this. It drives me crazy waiting for the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you love it!
Date: 04/27/12 04:46 pm Title: In Too Deep
Honestly I don't really know what to say, but I don't wanna be a lurker so I will just tell you that I love your story!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! XD
Date: 04/27/12 04:07 pm Title: In Too Deep
Omg! Noo!! Toomm! Awh, so sad. He really has to get better.. But i also hope there will be a little bit of the rough stuff:) Love this story!
Author's Response: There'll be lots of drama coming up, don't worry. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/26/12 04:14 pm Title: Wondering
*Shock* omg.. Pour Tom! If i would think one of the twins are anorexic i would think of Bill. It is a incredible sad story but reaally good! More soon?:)
Author's Response: The problem is that it's always Bill, and he seems way too bubbly to be anorexic. But if you want to keep up with the story, then I update every Friday. Thank you for the compliment and for the review! :)
Date: 04/25/12 08:29 am Title: Skin And Bones
Yep, it's not that simple. It's great that you actually don't make it look so simple to recover, because it's not. Poor Tom though... It's a vicious cycle. I hope things will turns for better soon.
Author's Response: Stay tuned, is all I can say. Stay tuned. There are big things coming up.
Date: 04/25/12 08:14 am Title: Sick
Hmmm, so, what will happen next? Anorexic people are good to hide things, but eventually they get caught. I'm not sure it'll be that easy to fix trhese things since they are mostly psuchological issues, but let's see where you're taking this. :)
Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry, there will be drama.
Date: 04/25/12 08:11 am Title: Secrets
Gustav, we all know he is the best for this job. I think you're doing a great job on describing the inner struggles Tom is having and really, it's not REALLY about weight or looks in the end. I also like the way you brought real-life events to this. Now up to the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! Updates occur every Friday, so stay tuned!