Date: 07/23/13 06:09 am Title: Epilogue
awesome what a great ending, that was a realy unique story and i've loved reading it. I'm going to go read the others in your series but for now I can't stop laughing at how Bill discovered his powers, it was so funny
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy the next two as well. How Bill discovered his powers was supposed to be a light way to end the story. If you like the paranormal tone to this one I think you'd also like my story The Hunt. And my City of Angels series has been a big hit with a lot of other people as well ^_^
Date: 07/23/13 05:58 am Title: Chapter 19
love it, never saw that coming GO KYLER. Wow that was such a asweet chapter but what's going on? Bill's eyes just flashed, this can't be good
Date: 07/23/13 05:57 am Title: Chapter 19
love it, never saw that coming GO KYLER. Wow that was such a asweet chapter but what's going on? Bill's eyes just flashed, this can't be good
Date: 07/23/13 05:48 am Title: Chapter 18
noooooooooooooo LOL
Date: 07/23/13 05:08 am Title: Chapter 15
coooool Bill is out of control. On the plus side, Tom is free! YAY! :)
Date: 07/22/13 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
YAY GUSTAV IS BACK!! :D who knew wearing glasses could be the thing that saved your life.
Date: 07/22/13 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am loving Miry and her obsession with people's hair, technically she and Bill should be best friends but she seems to hate him haha. I love her, she's my fave character who's not a member of TH so far, her appearence, her personality, she's great.
This is an awesome story and i'm loving all the turns its taking, not only that but now we've found out what Bill is, i feel things are about to get even more interesting.
Date: 07/22/13 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh cool, Bill might have powers.
I'm loving the new character Kyler and how Bill has instantly attached himself to him because he reminds him of Tom,its nice, he needs someone on his side but can he be trusted I wonder?
Date: 07/22/13 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
I absolutely loved this chapter, i tried to review it before and the internet decided to die but i came back to send it again because i really couldn't leave without letting you know what i thought.
I agree with your end notes, i really felt for Tom being trapped iside his own body like that, unable to do anything about any of the things that witch is doing to him, it really did make things more interesting. Up until i read this chapter I didn't realise he was aware of anything, it must be real torture I hope he manages to break free eventually. is it anything to do with the fact that he and Bill are twins and Bill was resistant so now he's fighting back too? Either way I think its really cool.
Then of course we have Bill, whom I feel equally sorry for, stuck out in middle of nowhere with a fan bordering on the edge of obsessively creepy... look at the amount of times she uses his full name, theres something not quite right about her.
I'm really enjoying your story and i'm quite surprised your read and review count isn't a lot higher... it deserves to be, the idea is unique and not like anything I've read here before, you should be proud, i'm loving it, your curses series is now in my faves so I can read it all... expect more reviews :)
Date: 07/22/13 05:29 am Title: Chapter 3
Ooh that was really cool, i loved how she put a spell on everyone to make them give her her own way. Not only that but when she sent Tom after Bill i could literally see him catching him, speaking in a robotic voice and his eyes going vacant when Bill responded, creepy, love it. Now i have a question, Bill was able to resist her spell right, Well his makeup is the exact same as Tom's so i'm wondering whether tom shouldn't have been able to fight it too? Or is the reason for Bill's resistance going to come out later on?
This is great, I'm really enjoying it so far.
Date: 07/22/13 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Oooh, the last paragraph sounded kinda ominous, I wonder what she's going to do to him, or has she already started?
Date: 07/22/13 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1
I started to read your story a while ago and then lost it but i remember loving the paranormal tone so I decided to read it again, to the end this time. I was so pleased to find out its since become a series, I want to read them all now. :) Last of all I love to review as i go through a story so you can expect to hear from me a lot, i'm gonna enjoy this
Date: 05/02/12 02:42 pm Title: Epilogue
A sequel would be a great idea! I also liked how Bill discovered his abilities because he was lazy, made me laugh(:
Date: 05/02/12 01:26 am Title: Chapter 19
Fabulous, but wait, is this the end? Because it still is marked as unfinished... anyway i thought that was a good twist, totally didn't see that coming. (:
Date: 05/01/12 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
*gasp* Cliffhanger!
Date: 04/30/12 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wonder what Tom is going to do
Date: 04/29/12 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm so excited to find out what happens next!