Date: 03/31/12 05:23 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
I seriously loved this!
Author's Response: That means a lot, thank you <3
Date: 03/31/12 03:03 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
Loved it:) I definitely think you shoul continue this
Author's Response: Haha I think I'm going too :) I've gotten enough feed back thus far.
Date: 03/31/12 02:40 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
YES! I am curious to continue. Bill what you can bring out the night.
Author's Response: Hahaha I probably wont pick immediately up from where I left off, there will be a bit of a skip, but you'll get to see what goes on at night ;D thanks <3
Date: 03/31/12 02:09 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
Lol, I looove how the tables were turned with Tom being the desperate one, willing to do anything.
Author's Response: When I got the idea I couldn't resist! haha glad you liked it :)
Date: 03/31/12 01:54 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
....NEEEEEEEIIIIIIN!!! It can't end like that! That's like the biggest tease ending EVER!
And believe me I just finished watching Trinity Blood and THAT was a big enough tease at the end...
Why does it have to end now?!
Author's Response: Oh God, now you make me feel like I tortured you! I mean man really ;.;rnTrinity Blood did have a shity ending like that -.- But it's such a good show though. Eureka 7 was the same way too -.-rnrnAnd I just did haha this was actually meant to be one chapter only but it progressed to this haha. But I think I may write more of these two ;D
Date: 03/31/12 01:17 pm Title: Maybe There's Some Unleft Needs?
YES!!!! Please continue this story - it's hot as hell!!! I love all the kinks. ;)
Author's Response: hahaha I just very well may well, I've gotten a lot of good feed back thus far :) But thanks <3
Date: 03/30/12 10:54 am Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
Drop dead hot
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Cum Whore does too ;D <3
Date: 03/28/12 07:09 pm Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
My birthday was on March 24th o.O
AND THIS WAS AN EPIC PRESENT FOR IT!!!!
I've never actually read something like this ._. and I think, like Bill, I find it hot...
Can't wait for the next update! This is a great story :D
Author's Response: Haha that's awesome! Happy belayed birthday then X)rnrnI'm glad you think so X) I'll try to update again soon <3
Date: 03/28/12 07:02 am Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
That was so hot *moans*
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so ;D <3
Date: 03/28/12 04:32 am Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks hun! <3
Date: 03/28/12 02:24 am Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
Aww, poor little Cum Whore had to wait more than two whole weeks to finsih what was started. Poor thing.
Ok, so. I love dirty talk, absolutely love it, but I feel like you might've went just s bit too far with it. It pulls me out of a story seeing cuss words when its not a spontaneous expletive. Im great with the 'dirty little whore/ slut' and the like, but...I dunno...cussing just doesn't do too much for me personally. You might take that into consideration if you ever try to write something like this again.
Other than that mit of critisim that I intended to be constructive, I loved this story...well...and the water sport, I don't like water sport, but you did give us fair warnin so that my own fault/problem. I can't wait to see the final chapter. I kinda hope this was us seeing the start of a sexy beautiful loving relationship or something. Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: Even if there was criticism in this, it made me happy to see a long review x) This is just another account I made for this and other stories like, and I usually just get short reviews xDrnrnAnyhow, in response to your comments, I agree on the dirty talk. It was a hit and miss thing for me and I've never really written it in before so I was just taking a blind hit at it haha, but I'll most definitely keep that in mind when I write smut like this again :)rnrnI actually wasn't going to do the water sport, but I just recently read a story that had it in it and loved that story a bunch, so yeah xD. I'm working on the final chapter right now so let's hope Cum Whore wont have to wait too long.rnrnBTW! I love you're opening line on this. Too great haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 03/27/12 09:11 pm Title: Maybe A New Name Is The Answer?
Gets more cum! hahaha
Author's Response: Haha yay for more cum..... XD
Date: 03/17/12 07:40 pm Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
Nice, very nice.. *grin*
Not only was this smut, but you managed to write nicely flowing, well-written start for this. And oh, loved the rim job scene! Can't wait to see how this continues...
Great start for the first kinky (?) smut fic!
Author's Response: Ekk! -huggles- Now that makes me beyond happy! I'm so glad you think so x) hope you enjoy the next chapter as well <3 rnrnYess this is the first kinky smut fic I've done xD
Date: 03/14/12 05:54 pm Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry for just getting back to you! But I'm glad you liked it and hope you like the next chapter as well :)
Date: 03/14/12 12:00 am Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
I am thinking maybe Tom isn't the new manager? He was in Georg's office for some reason and decided to pretend he was?
Bill would be a sexy dancer at a club! *swoon*
Author's Response: You're just gunna have to wait and see ;D New chapter will be out tomorrow, promise! But my God yes *-* I would love to see him dancing up on a stage like that *-*
Date: 03/12/12 05:25 pm Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
That was hot...can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Hot is what I was going for ;D I'll try to get more out tonight or soon at least! <3
Date: 03/12/12 05:04 pm Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
:D oh my god i love this!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 03/12/12 10:19 am Title: What's A Little Billy To Do?
Omg haha! Bills whore-ing himself out! This is awesome, can't wait for the next chapter:)
Author's Response: Haha I know! What could be better ;D I`ll try to get the new chapter out soon :)