Date: 06/07/12 09:43 am Title: Surprise!
Omfg lmfao that was fantastic. I loved it so much.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/12 03:57 pm Title: Surprise!
I love how it starts and ends with the Gs
Author's Response: Haha, I hadn't even thought about that, but you're right. That is kind of funny XD
Date: 03/17/12 10:19 am Title: Surprise!
Honestly, when I started to read this, I was a bit confused. This was something I truied to get into, but somehow I felt like I'm missing the whole point, what is this universe etc.
BUT when I read further, suddenly it all started to make sense and I really like the way you portrayed twins' relationship and the steps they took. Tom's little fetish was actually cute. :)
I don't even know. Just... Annoying Bill, but lovely story :D
Author's Response:
You know, I totally understand that. I guess the only reason I don't feel the same way is that it came from my head, but had I read it as an outsider I would be pretty confused myself. Actually, I was very confused when I woke up after dreaming it.. See, I totally get it! ;)
I'm glad you figured it out eventually, though. Wouldn't want to have lost you completely. And yeah, Tom's fetish was kind of adoreable, though slightly disturbing XD
Bill was definitely annoying and an ass and all the things in between. But you know, I figured he couldn't be the 'sweet, kind, innocent one' in all my stories. Sometimes Bill just has to be a bitch, a really horrible person than annoys the shit out of my readers. That's just how it is. So, I'm glad you liked the story despite of Bill! :P Haha, I'd never thought I'd say that.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!Date: 03/15/12 01:26 pm Title: Surprise!
This was hilarious!!! I love your characters and your edgy, biting, narration! Very unique. Had it not been written as well, this fic easily could have turned into a little emo girl's sappy diary, but you navigated away from that dangerous territory well, and all that was left was sexy good humor. Your twins characters are overthetop and full of themselves, and normally that would be tragic, but you played them well and it worked very nicely. Very funny, very sexy. Well done! :)
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you!
So, I was gonna be all offended that you would call this as a little emo girl's sappy diary (mostly because I haven't been a little girl in a while), but then I read the rest and decided I should simply say "You're really too kind" instead ;) I'm a bit surprised you thought the humor was sexy and good, though. I mean, I would probably describe it as dark and twisted, but hey, whatever floats your boat :p In either case I'm flattered :)
Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm really happy you liked the story!
Date: 03/12/12 09:57 pm Title: Surprise!
That was awesome, I really great read!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it :D
Date: 03/11/12 11:30 pm Title: Surprise!
O_o...your writing is amazing.
Author's Response: Oh.. *blush* Thank you!
Date: 03/11/12 10:43 pm Title: Surprise!
this is so strange....and good!!!! i love it, though i'm not generally a fan of twc, i still highly enjoyed it. great job. and awesome dream!! ;-)
Author's Response: Yeah, it was an awesome dream, despite it's weirdness ;) And I'm kind of proud I could make you enjoy a twc story! I'm so happy to hear you liked it! Thanks :)
Date: 03/11/12 04:43 pm Title: Surprise!
yeah that was weird
Author's Response: Yeah, it was ;)
Date: 03/11/12 04:41 pm Title: Surprise!
I liked this! It was neat, in a weird way. Bitchy narcissistic Bill was fun to read.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 03/10/12 05:35 pm Title: Surprise!
Great. Just great :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/10/12 05:22 pm Title: Surprise!
I loved this :D Very entertaining, thanks :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 03/10/12 04:54 pm Title: Surprise!
Lols XD I knew it would end in a sexual tension fight then sex XD I LOVE Bill's assertion that Tom will have to bottom for them eventually XD I've always thought that a person would have to be at least a LITTLE narcissistic to be in love with his/her own identical twin XD This was really confusing until when Tom was in his room with Bill singing to him. The guard at the door...XD That was hilarious XD He was so out of it that he told BILL what he'd been telling the girls to do...XD Hilarious. Well done, Ainee-san ^-^
Author's Response:
Of course it had to end like that! XD And there is no doubt in Bill's mind that Tom will have to bottom eventually. I mean, Bill's a very determined man and he always get what he wants ;)
I do believe falling in love with your own twin is the pure definition of narcissism. But then again, how could they help it? They're fucking gorgeous! XD
Hmm, I guess I could understand that it was a bit confusing in the beginning. But, hey, I was confused too! Imagine waking up one morning with that story stuck in your head.. And it's not surprising if people get a bit confused when I write the twins so out of character. Sorry about that ;)
I like the guard. I imagine this being an everyday thing to him, but in the long run nobody an keep up with the Kaulitz twins, they're too wacked :p A breakdown was bound to happen sooner of later. In this case, it happened at the worst/best time ever.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story, I had a lot of fun writing it :)
Date: 03/10/12 04:42 pm Title: Surprise!
First! :P
Anyway, awesome story! Couldn't have asked for a better birthday prezzie. :P Tom's room really made me laugh and seeing the banner made me laugh again. XD It's so utterly ridiculous. So great job. :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it sweetie :)
And I had a lot of fun making that banner. When it was all done I couldn't help but snicker, because it loked more or less like I'd pictured it in my head when I was writing the story.. Except all the mirrors, of course. And yes, it is utterly ridiculous, that's why it's funny ;) Thank you!