Date: 04/09/12 10:33 pm Title: The 1st Day
*is flattered* oh absolutely, feel free to use it, or any of my reviews, in anyway you see fit.
Author's Response:
Ok thank you.
Date: 04/09/12 10:21 pm Title: The 1st Day
I forgot you're not used to my weirdness yet xD Charrie is short for charactor(character? I NEVER spell that bloody word right. Which is ANNOYING 'cause I have fabulous spelling). And Sarah hurt Gustav when he tried to... yeah :D Therefore she owned him in the face :D
Author's Response:
I develop methods for words I can't spell and after a while they become natural like weird, or character. I had trouble with that word for a while too. I am going to ask another question and just answer it in a message on my profile. What do you mean by finally a character in a fanfic? As far as I was concerned all fics had to have at least one character. I am glad you are proud of Sarah. I was proud of her too.
Date: 04/09/12 08:34 pm Title: An Unlikely Ally
YAY! Finally a charrie in a fanfic LISTENS. Not just one, but TWO! (And Kudos to Sarah for owning Gus in the face). Have I mentioned I love Jorg? Like, serious adoration here. HANG ON TOMI-TWIN!
Author's Response:
Ok I am not sure what most of this mean. A charrie? Do you mean cherry? What do you mean Sarah owning Gus in the face? I am glad you love Jorg. I have tried to make him enjoyable in this fic since i have made him cruel in the past. Keep rooting for Tom.
Date: 04/09/12 08:04 pm Title: An Unlikely Ally
Why do I feel like this was a very bad idea? I hope it wasn't buut...yea, I gots a very bad feeling...I really enjoyed this chapter though! Twas liberally drenched in awesome sauce!! It was so awesomely amazing I can't pinpoint anything specific to comment on so...*huggles* *gets embarassed and scurries away*
Author's Response:
Doesn't matter if it was a bad idea or not they have to follow through now. I am glad you think it was liberally drenched in awesome sauce. I am thinking of using a few reviews in the summary and I was wondering if I could use this one? I am really glad you liked it and thank you for the hug. Don't be embarassed I like reviews like this.
Date: 04/09/12 07:13 pm Title: An Unlikely Ally
I have a feeling they're gonna get caught before they can even get Tom and Sarah out of there. But this seriously was not what I had expected to happen. Getting better and better!
Author's Response:
I guess you'll just have to wait until Wednesday. I am glad I am still surprising you. Thank you for the reviews and wonderful support.
Date: 04/09/12 07:10 pm Title: An Unlikely Ally
Huge sigh of relief!
Bill is going to save Tom! And Jorg is going to help, yay!
Can't wait til Wednesday!!!
XD
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are relieved now. I knew Jorg's role wasn't over yet but even I was surprised at where Jorg showed up. I will definitely be posting on Wednesday.
Date: 04/09/12 05:57 pm Title: An Unlikely Ally
i can't wait for the next one. Amazing *_*
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. Next one will be out soon.
Date: 04/08/12 11:43 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
I am in love with this. PLEASE continue updating.
I really hope Bill gets Tom out of there....
Author's Response:
I am glad you like this. I will definitely continue updating. I hope Bill saves Tom too.
Date: 04/08/12 06:39 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
I really love this story but I so hate Bill right now! >_<
He's so selfish to me. Like, did he ever stop to think that tom might be punished for his escape? He saw in the dining room in one of the other chapters what happened to people who helped others escape and tom was with him like, 24/7...
GAH JUST GIVE ME MORE PLEASEEEEEE! D:
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and sad that you hate Bill. He thought that Tom wouldn't be punished. Minds work in weird ways you know. This si explained a few chapters down the line. I am glad you are excited for more. Next chapter will be up tomorrow.
Date: 04/08/12 05:01 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Nooooo. He has to come back and help Tom!
Author's Response:
I agree. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/08/12 02:14 pm Title: The 1st Day
I will, even if it ends bad. I can leave it now, I'm 2 invested. N I have 2 say its a very good story
Author's Response:
I am glad you will stick with it until the end. I hope you will enjoy it.
Date: 04/08/12 02:00 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
I'm not sure I like what Bill is doing. I know he wants to put it all behind him, but what about Tom and Sarah? I thought for sure he'd go for help right away...
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and hope you will stick around just to get into Bill's head to find out why he didn't go save them. I will try to answer all questions in the next few chapters.
Date: 04/08/12 11:55 am Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Ok, if u dnt save them n have bill n tom together imma kidnap U n treat u lyk ma sex slave......................... Ha ha just kiddin bt still please let this be a happy endin, this story makes me sad cos of da hole kidnap thing n makes me think that somewere in da world sum1 is actually goin through somethin horrable n it makes me cry so if this story ends up bad imma be really sad. Bad is wen bull 4gets bout da others n leaves em to die
Author's Response:
Very interesting opening statement I am glad you are just joking. I am not sure how this ends yet so you're in the same boat as me. There is a sex market in many countries were toutrists get kidnapped and sold into slavery. It does happen unfortunately. I am not sure this will have a sad ending. I hope you will continue to read.
Date: 04/08/12 09:17 am Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Oh wow. I'm going to be pacing until you continue this. I'm actually hoping that Bill has some scars or something left from the beatings, something that he can't just explain away so he has to tell the truth so they can go and get Tom out of there.
Author's Response:
We shall see what happens. I hope Tom gets saved too.
Date: 04/08/12 02:46 am Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Aww man, it looks as though Bill is taking the path that I didn't want him to choose. I really hope he changes his mind, because it appears that Tom and Sarah don't have much time. I also have a question for you though, how come the slaves and anyone else who disapproves the treatment they go through fight back all at one time and tear the place apart together? Keep up the good work, ai adore your story :)
Author's Response:
Sorry but I felt it was a good plot twist. Fear is what keeps the people from revolting. They are told from day one that they will be killed if they fight back. They are then put through rigorous training that is specifically designed to break their spirits. They are then passed to whoever wants them. It is a viscous but it's the truth. They are all scared one or two might rise up but they'll be killed. Thanks for the question and the review.
Date: 04/08/12 01:36 am Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Billll. Go save Tom. GO. *shooing motions with hands* Get gone.
Tom. BREATH. BILL WILL BE THERE.
SARAH... HAVE GUSTAV'S CHILD.
Author's Response:
This is a cute review. I like it, it made me laugh. I will definitely see what I can do. Thanks for the cute review and the smile it induced. :)
Date: 04/08/12 01:34 am Title: Freedom...Or Not...
Oh Bill, you foolish foolish boy *shakes head sadly* of course they're going to think Tom is involved... and why the fuck did you not go to the police in whereverthehellyouwere sometime before/afterGbetween calling your parental unit and flying home??!!
This was an awesome chapter! Ich liebe es! I am confused about why it would matter if the father of the baby was a Slave or not if they kill all boys regardless and girls get sent to the kitchens, why would they kill Sarah if it wasn't aMaster's kid, s'not like she can control getting pregnant in that situation.
It scares me that there are really people like Bill, that make a habit of just leaving for days/weeks/months on end without a word. I know they exist though. My brother is one of them. My mom and I haven't seen hide nor hair of him since christmas.
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for Monday to roll around! Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response:
I am glad someone else saw the foolishness of Bill's decisions. All of the police questions will be answered in the next chapter so just hang on with that one. If you remember sons of the house master become upper level slave handlers. Sarah's in trouble so having a boy child would redeem her and having a girl child would just make her useless. My brother is one of those people who just disappear too. I kind of am one but I try to call my boyfriend at least once a week and I text all the time. I am glad you like it and I already have the chapter finished so it will be up first thing Monday morning.
Date: 04/07/12 10:08 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
O_____O Didn't expect that. But wow. I'm actually totally impressed that you were ballsey enough to take such a hard left turn. I must know how this ends up... it's somehow even MORE addicting because you took out the predictability factor. O_O Dear god, you're amazing.
Author's Response:
I am glad I can surprise all my readers. I am glad I impressed you with my ability to take the predictability out of the story. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. I am glad you think I am so amazing. Thank you for the review.
Date: 04/07/12 08:54 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
I love this story, the only thing that's nagging at me is that you wrote that bill had gotten away before without telling anybody, but in past chapters he never mentioned that, in fact he seemed a little mama's boy in that scene when he departures to NYC, so it doesn't make sense now that he's the opposite, he's like carefree and isn't that worried about college and stuff, like he's an entire different boy. No offense but last chapter and this one look like they weren't writen by the same person who wrote the whole story.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like this story. I admit there are a few inconsistencies but I never claimed that Bill was a mama's boy. Everyone gets clingy when they are leaving for college. The scene in the airport and this chapter nearly two years has passed. Bill is carefree and not worried in the past because I want to show how much his experience in the prison has changed him. I have been a little off lately but I assure you I am the one writing the story. My tone and voice change on many occasions in the middle of a story. I am glad you like the story enough to pick it apart and I hope you will continue to read despite the inconsistencies and the change in tone.
Date: 04/07/12 06:35 pm Title: Freedom...Or Not...
I love this story so much, but I have a question. Why didn't Bill go straight to the police so the others could be rescued?
Author's Response:
I am glad you like this story. That and many other questions like that will be answered soon, thanks for asking and reading.