Date: 04/17/12 06:58 am Title: Consent
Um,hello there again!:)I found my way back to the story and was delighted to see everyone 's life is back on their track!:)
It comes as a surprise though..its like a roller coastere ride. At one chapter they're kidnapped into that hell hole again ,and whoosh!They're free and bouncing. I don't know, maybe the pace is a bit fast for me -but I assure you,I do love to see them free- I guess I am adjusted to the beginning pace.
One sad thing about Bill's first escape is how no one,no one seems to give s second thought about that. Bill is amazingly brave - I thought previously he need therapies at least. You make it all just like a bad dream:) I have a feeling that no one would scarred for life over this!
The punishment on the Gs is too light for my liking (lol,I am a mean and violent person teehee). But I guess prisonment will do..At the end of the day,we all got to move on,right?
Sorry if my review isn't as long as last one,but as always I am in a hurry (lol) and I am typing this rant on my phone:-C And my natural love for rant makes two sentence review not possible haha.
One last thing - you are amazingly talented!I can't believe you're my age and already you are able to handle such emotionally painful topics brilliantly. I can't even write a decent fluff haha. But I am not a native,so I am actually in no place to complain this huge ability gap- I am Chinese btw:)- anyway, a sequel would be nice! Normal city life with the painful process if healing..O:-)
Author's Response:
I am glad you like how this is playing out. I like writing roller coasters they are fun and surprising. I had to write it a bit fast because I didn't want to linger too much over the details. Everyone seems to love them being free. The beginning was a bit slow but all my stories start out slow and speed up by the end. It's a quirk, I guess you could say. Bill is amazingly brave and I am glad I managed to convey that. I wanted him first escape to seem incomplete though with Sarah and Tom not by his side so his mind could never truly be free until he saved them. I couldn't think of any other legal means to punish the G's and unfortunately in the real world we can't just put people in basement dungeons and starve them. I like your reviews they are longer then most. My love for a good rant generally means I leave longer then intended chapter notes and replies to reviews so I know how that works.
rnI am glad you think I am so talented and that at 17 you think I am good at handling emotionally painful stuff. That's only in my stories I assure you. In real life I am a major crybaby (not in a bad sense.) Fluff, smut and emotional trauma all come in stages and everyone finds a method that works for them. I can't write fluff without angsting it out first. I am not sure about the sequel yet but I will definitely be thinking about with the response I have gotten to the idea. Thanks for the review and btw your grammar and spelling are amazing for someone who is not a native.
Date: 04/16/12 11:35 pm Title: Consent
i like it :) Tom and Bill are close again :)
Author's Response:
That was the plan. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/16/12 10:49 pm Title: Consent
This chapter, and the whole story in general, is awesome. As far as a full blown sequel, I'm really not too sure about that. I do like the idea of some one/two shots to get a few peeks at their futures though!
I think I would've liked to see some actual interaction between Sam and everyone. Other than that I think this was just perfect.
Yea, I kinda figured that wasn't what you were gonna do with Jorg, but a girl can hope/dream/pray can't she?
I can't wait o see the last chapter, even though I am going to be sad to let it go... keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so much. I am not really sure about the sequel I was just feeling out how everyone felt about it. I tried to wrtie dialouge and stuff between Sarah, her mother and Sam but nothing fit. I am sorry I had to kill Jorg and that I will not be bringing him back but yes a girl can hope/dream/pray. I will be posting the next chapter soon but I am not exactly sure when. I am going to be sad to see it go too but all good things must come to an end. I will definitely try to keep up the good work.
Date: 04/16/12 05:20 pm Title: Consent
I think a sequel would be awesome. Maybe you can have it do something with Georg and how he escapes from jail and starts ANOTHER sex slave compound somewhere in like Estonia or somewhere. But anyway, I don't think Sarah is gonna wanna go back with her boyfriend though. Getting really good.
Author's Response:
I am not sure about the sequel yet we shall see. I am not sure where I am going with Sarah yet, Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/16/12 04:09 pm Title: Consent
I am so glad that Bill, Tom and Sarah er free, and I like Sarah's mom, she is nice. The story in general is just fanatisk, I love it.
I do not think that a sequel would work, but I like the side stories with Jorg and Gustav, marby about Toms time as a slave at Jorg.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like that and Sarah's mom. I am glad you like the story too. I am not sure about the sequel but the side stories are almost a definite.
Date: 04/15/12 10:23 am Title: What Now?
oh my god noooo not Jorg! D:
I liked him a lot...At least bill tom and sarah got out! And I'm glad bill handed gustav and georg their asses on a silver platter!
This story was freaking AMAZING!
10/10
Author's Response:
I hated killing Jorg. It was so bad. I liked him too. I really wanted to show that Bill could fight back in this chapter. I am glad you like it. Thanks for the score.
Date: 04/15/12 07:07 am Title: What Now?
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
i also would love u to make a sequel to this!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and hopefully next chapter will be up tomorrow. I am not sure yet but I'll try.
Date: 04/15/12 12:25 am Title: What Now?
omg, Circus is amazing! Its, in a round about way, why I read this. Your summary kinda reminded me of it.
I am SO sad Jorg died!!! He just...really deserved better...Might I hope that in the sequel (if you decide to do one, I vote yes) we find out that Gustav was just playing one last mind game and Jorg really got away in the end? Like, thats how Gustav knew nothing would be able to keep Jorg locked up? Because nothing DID??
*flails* Hell yeah Bill!! Knee him where it hurts!!!
This was amazing, though I am a bit confused. Didn't oyu say that the compound was in Mexico? And if so shouldnt they have went to the closest police they could get to? I mean, I could've totally seen them telling border patrol (btw how'd they get passed that w/ no papers?) and making it an international affair....but waiting to tell anyone anything unitl they were in Washington state seems ...off...Ithink I would think they were a bunch of lying kids trying to waste time personally, especially if they just went to normal police instead of, like, FBI headquarters or something.
I'm glad for you that your computer got fixed. Congrats. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
I fell in love with Circus when I read it and it seemed a lot like my story so I thought I would recommend it. It is very sad that Jorg was killed. I feel bad about that. I don't know if I will do the sequel yet. I am mostly just feeling out the response to it. I don't know if I would do that. If Jorg got out he probably would have come to see Bill and Tom. I loved writing that part where Bill finally asserts that he is a person and not just a fucktoy. The compound is in Mexico but I think Bill would need the support of the family to make his reports. The police are required to take all reports, especially ones as serious as the ones Bill and Tom made seriously. If you were to walk down to your police station and say you had been kidnapped and drug to Austria to be a sex slave they would have to look in to it and fine you heavily once they found out that you were lying. Thanks I am glad its fixed too. I am glad you like it. Thanks for the long review.
Date: 04/14/12 10:26 pm Title: The 1st Day
It was amazing in a horrible way... Thanks for the suggestion! I didn't know we could vote on a sequel... make that two votes. :P
Author's Response:
Thanks I guess I'll edit the chapter notes. I am glad you liked Circus.
Date: 04/14/12 08:13 pm Title: What Now?
T__T Poor thing. I kind of figured he would be killed but it was still very sad. I like how this is written in a hectic manner like it would feel in real life if they were going through it. I love seeing your updates and I'm going to miss this as I feel it wrapping up. Can't wait to see where it goes though! *Moves over to check out this Circus you speak of*
Author's Response:
Yeah well I had to you know. I tried to make it feel like it would if you were experiencing it in real life. I am not sure it is over yet. I have at least one vote for a sequel so we'll see. I am glad you like. Circus is great in that horrible way.
Date: 04/14/12 06:37 pm Title: The 1st Day
I'll be like that one day.................... Maby........................watevz its night time ova here so I'm gonna start gettin ready 4 bed, nyt nyt!
Author's Response:
Maybe. Good night.
Date: 04/14/12 06:04 pm Title: The 1st Day
We're almost the same, except in too lazy to type my stories so I just don't have I life and spent most of my time reading stories
Author's Response:
Yeah I was at one point too. Now I find it makes up nicely for my lakc of a life.
Date: 04/14/12 05:42 pm Title: The 1st Day
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohh n that was a fast response, btw
Author's Response:
That's because I have no life and am sitting at my computer typing my story.
Date: 04/14/12 05:27 pm Title: What Now?
Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohhhh I love you so much.......... In a non creepy way of course
I hope this isn't the end, one last chapter were we find out wat happens to and and the baby n bill n tom n all that, u ni like closure................... Ohhh god u had ne worried 4 a second there................
I REALLY DO LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Again not being creepy
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and one or two more chapters are in order. I am working on them right now.
Date: 04/14/12 04:46 pm Title: What Now?
Noooo! I like Jorg :(
Are you gonna write a sequel to this when its done?
I think a sequel would be awesome!
Author's Response:
I know I feel bad about that. I don't know if I'll write a sequel. I am not sure what a sequel would be about. I think I might wirte a few side stories though. I definitely like this story and this world that I have built.
Date: 04/13/12 06:24 am Title: An Old Face
OH NO!!! Poor Bill, Jorg, and Tomi!! That Georg fella is deliciously evil. I hope he gets what's coming to him! What a wonderful twist in the story. I love it! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I feel so bad for what I put them through sometimes. I find Georg to be a character that is vastly different then what I had orginally planned but it's a good thing. I am glad you like it,
Date: 04/12/12 11:53 pm Title: The 1st Day
Speechless is most definitely a good thing. I KNEW they weren't going to get out that easily, in fact I kinda thought Jost was going to turncoat or something, but I still had a bit of hope. Ya know? It was a great chapter
Author's Response:
I am glad it is a good thing. I dont' think Jorg has it in him to go turncoat. I am glad you liked it and don't give up hope yet.
Date: 04/12/12 03:57 pm Title: An Old Face
Nooooo... No no no no nonoooooo!
Author's Response:
I am sorry you feel that way.
Date: 04/12/12 05:54 am Title: An Old Face
nice chapter!!
i really wonted bill an tom to get away from there!
i hope they do in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Things don' always go as planned. Me too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/11/12 05:55 pm Title: An Old Face
O_O holy sh- O_O
Author's Response:
I knocked you speechless. I hope this is a good thing. See you Friday. Remember breathe.