Date: 03/20/12 07:50 pm Title: Progress
I enjoyed this chapter :)
Ah, one question. I thought it said previously that Georg used to be Tom's trainer. But now it says Jorg used to be his trainer?
Author's Response:
Georg was his trainer and when Georg finished training Jorg was his master. Trainers aren't allowed to own slaves, Jorg was one level above Georg.
Date: 03/20/12 02:00 am Title: Progress
Wow, a girl goes away for the weekend, and all this happens??!! Crazy. These were two wonderful chapters. You really get that jolt of fear through. I'm am so glad Tom stood up, for lack of a better term, to Georg. Every scene with Georg he's behaved ridiculously. And I can't BELIEVE he tried being all nicey nicey I wouldn't step on your toes but you need to call dibs on Bill then went behind Tom's back to try and lay claim...gawd! Men.
Wonderful work. Anxious to see more! Oh, and Circus is an awesome series, but no, I don't think that's why this felt familiar. After reading it again I think I'm remembering something similar from a different fandom. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I know I push the updating enevlope a little but it keeps the readers interested. I am glad you like them. I am glad Tom stood up to Georg too. I wasn't sure if you meant in every scene with Georg Tom or Georg acted ridiclously? I can't believe Georg would do that either but I don't think those two men even remotely care for each other. I am really glad you like it and I hope you find that work soon because I am anxious to see it myself. I would love to see how other authors protray something like this without going completely over the top.
Date: 03/19/12 04:19 pm Title: Progress
This is definitely something different and surprising, in a good way, of course. I can't wait for more. very well written, even if a bit painful to read!
Author's Response:
I hope you mean painful in a good way. I am glad you like it and think it is well written.
Date: 03/19/12 02:07 pm Title: Progress
You may call I'm desperate but seriuosly, I just read all of your 4 chapters again. So happy that I understand things now *cheering* Looking forward to ur next chap :x :x :x
Author's Response:
I would never call someone who loves my stories desperate. I am glad you like it so much. I am glad you understand things too. If you are not a native then where are you from? Maybe you can translate my story into your first language so other can read it.
Date: 03/19/12 03:46 am Title: Progress
I love it, Bill has been broken, but Tom is a kind master, some times, and YAAAA Georg can not beat Bill
Author's Response:
Not broken just bent and I like how Tom is kind within certian ramfications. I know Georg can't touch Bill now it's great. I am glad you like this story.
Date: 03/19/12 02:47 am Title: Progress
This story is absolutely marvelous, dear! :)
Seriously, an excellent bdsm universe!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you like it. What does your username mean?
Date: 03/18/12 10:11 pm Title: The 1st Day
and yeah, Absolutely, I'm still in love with your story :x :x :x wanna see it more often >
Author's Response:
That's good I hope you liked the update.
Date: 03/18/12 10:10 pm Title: Progress
???? I'm a little confused w/ the end of this chapter. Since I'm not a native, does Bill turn away from kissing Tom make Tom piss off???
Author's Response:
I am not sure I understand your question. Bill turns away from kissing because he wants to be loyal to Andi. Tom understands this and doesn't push Bill. He is not mad. I hope that answers your question.
Date: 03/18/12 01:47 pm Title: The 3rd Day
I absolutely love this story and as sadistic or creepy it might seem I like how Tom doesn't let Bill get away with things other wouldn't, how he feels Bill has to learn and does his job.
You've created a really good setting and all the rules, training methods and routines makes it all somewhat realistic, like if this was a real place, this is how it would have been.
Also, I love how this so far isn't the normal "I will rescue you lovestory." As of now, I almost hope Bill and Tom will form some sort of friendship instead of love, but I know that's most likely won't happen. :p
Anyway, I am tracking and will wait patiently ( or maybe not) for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and I hope you will continue to like it. I am not sure if it will turn into a typical love story. I am trying to avoid that. I have tried to make this story a realistic as possible. I am very glad it is coming off that way. I will try to update as much as I can manage. Thanks for the wonderfully long review. :D
Date: 03/17/12 02:13 am Title: The 3rd Day
I wanna see bill enjoying sex a little, you said we should tell you, at least once, get inside bil''s head while he's being rape or whatever you'd like to call it
Author's Response:
I will definitely try. Thanks for the suggestion.
Date: 03/17/12 01:00 am Title: The 1st Day
It's been ages since last time I've read something this GOOD! And is just the first chapter!!!!!!!!!can't say anything for now, I'm too excited to read chap 2, but pleaseeeeeee update soon!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I hope you will continue to enjoy my updates. I will update as fast as possible.
Date: 03/16/12 01:58 pm Title: The 3rd Day
Very good chappie! I particularly liked Tom's explanation of the color code.
Hmm, if you want, I can beta this real quick. (I'm a grammar fanatic XD) There are run-on sentences and such. My email's celestialchik_86@yahoo.com
Author's Response:
I tried to think of a way to explain the house strutcure without seeming too preachy so I am glad you liked it. I have sent you chapter 4 and I hope you can get it to me tomorrow so I can get it posted. I will be going back to Leslie when she gets settled in but maybe you can beta David's Desire which at this point I have not gotten beta'd. Thanks. BTW I like your email address.
Date: 03/16/12 01:27 pm Title: The 3rd Day
Awww poor Bill finaly giving up, can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response:
I almost dreaded writing that but I thought it came out alright. I am glad you liked it too.
Date: 03/16/12 11:41 am Title: The 3rd Day
I really like this game of break & trust you're circling around. Puts a hint of reality into it.
I don't even know why I like reading these sorts of things, I guess I must be twisted in some way... But it interests me endlessly... How people use other PEOPLE as their "pets" and pretend they're not worth the same. And it happens in real life as well...
It's horrible but it fascinates me nevertheless, I can't deny it.
I like what you're writing so far.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like the circle of break and trust. I recently watched a TV show about how people have been turned in sex slaves think they love thier masters because of constant brutality and moments of unexpected kindness. I tried to incorporate that here.
Date: 03/16/12 10:31 am Title: The 3rd Day
I love this story, I feel bad for Tom, that he has to do this, and poor broken Bill. keep updating
Author's Response:
I feel bad for what I am putting them both through but it has to be done. I hope you continue to like this story.
Date: 03/16/12 10:13 am Title: The 3rd Day
OH MY GOD!!!!!
more more more, im addicted sooo bad now :D
please please please :D
Author's Response:
I am glad I can supplment the kink fantasties. I will be posting more soon.
Date: 03/16/12 10:09 am Title: The 3rd Day
SUPER !!! i can't wait for saturday :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I will be definitely be posting on Saturday.
Date: 03/16/12 04:00 am Title: The 3rd Day
D:: MORE PLEASE
Author's Response:
Is that a frownie face or a smilie face? More will be posted Saturday.
Date: 03/16/12 01:27 am Title: The 3rd Day
Just found this & I think it's really good. The whole master/slave dynamic is well done & I can't wait to see how you craft the rest of this journey.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I hope you keep reading.
Date: 03/13/12 01:06 pm Title: The 1st Day
One more thing... WHERE IS GUSTAV!! Let him appear plz!!!
Author's Response:
I wondering when someone would notice the lack of the last band memeber. He will make it into this story I promise and I think you will be surprised when and where. ;)