Date: 03/25/12 11:34 am Title: Tom's Slave
First of all I'm really excited to see the new banner once it's finally made. Secondly, your cliffhangers make my jaw drop and I stutter "more" like a fish gasping for water.
Great job on this story =D
Author's Response:
I am glad that you like my stories so much. I don't like to read cliffhangers but I do enjoy taunting people with them. :p I am excited to see the banner too so we'll both be waiting for that. I hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Date: 03/25/12 10:20 am Title: Tom's Slave
Tom shoulda decked Gustav :p But otherthanthat, toooooootally worth the wait. :D
Author's Response:
I was thinking of how to make Tom fight back without getting him and Bill punished but nothing came to mind so here is sweet Bill being led away by a sadastic monster. I am glad you like and hope you continue to think my updates are worth the wait.
Date: 03/25/12 07:59 am Title: Tom's Slave
and yeah, hehe, thanks for your offer, I'm very happy to see that. I will see if my English is good enough to translate a story like this one. A lot of sexy moment you know, write them is hard, and trans it with all meaning is also hard. and btw, I'm from Vietnam xD and I'm actually an Alien here, since there's not many TH's fan in my country :))
Author's Response:
Well I guess I'll check back to see if you are up for it when I finish. I would like to translate my stories so it's easier for other people to read them. I am glad that despite the lack of TH fans in your country you are showing support for our lovely boys.
Date: 03/25/12 07:54 am Title: Tom's Slave
??????????? Is this gonna be some sexy time between Gustav and Bill????? I rather Bill and Georg but Tom's the best choice, still. Please don't be so harsh on Bill, even when he's just a character. I don't wanna see him hurts :(.
Author's Response:
We shall see what happens. I don't want to see him hurt but this story seems to be defying everything I want. Anyway I hope you stick around and enjoy the next chapter whatever the result.
Date: 03/25/12 06:44 am Title: Tom's Slave
Great update and Yay rape next chapi *-*
Author's Response:
Glad someone is excited for it. I will get it up ASAP probably Monday.
Date: 03/25/12 05:14 am Title: Tom's Slave
I live that the training is now over, but I hate that Gustav is having a night with Bill. I just love this story, keep writing :)
Author's Response:
I thought we had spent plenty of time on training. I hate that Gustav is having a night too but he is the head honcho so he can claim first rights to anyone including Bill. I am glad that you like this story.
Date: 03/25/12 02:29 am Title: Tom's Slave
Oooh I like it! I saw the update and was like "OMG! She updated YAY!" It was a good chapter. I'm glad Tom laid claim to Bill, but at the same time nervous for what Gustav may do to him.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are so excited about my updates and stories. That is really great to hear. I am very glad that Tom laid claim to Bill and I hope that the Gustav scene doesn't write itself to violent. We shall see. Thanks for the wodnerful review.
Date: 03/24/12 08:31 pm Title: Lunch
I am really really liking this story! I hope you update it again soon. When I was reading it, I was getting ideas for my own story, but its doubtful I could write it -.- Anyway, loved it and can't to read more :D
Author's Response:
What story would that be? I am glad you liked it.I'm glad to see you're back. I haven't seen your reviews in a while. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 03/23/12 09:48 pm Title: Lunch
I.LIKE.IT. there, i said something :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I am very glad you like it. :)
Date: 03/23/12 07:53 pm Title: Lunch
I was waiting for Gustav to appear! Not sure how I feel about him being part of the House Master family with such a mind set.
Anyways, loved this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response:
I generally make Gustav one of the weaker characters so I felt the need to give him the ulimate power to make it up to him. Orginally it was OFM and Gustav was the second master in the shower when Bill took his first shower but it didn't fit. I shuffled him through many roles slave and master alike, even at one point being on of Georg's slaves but none fit. Then I thougth Gustav is so stotic and all that plus no one will be expecting this so I put him as the house master. I am glad you still like it despite the fact that Gustav is horrible.
Date: 03/23/12 04:55 pm Title: Lunch
again a good chapter, I am glad that Bill is getting a friend, and now I know that I hate Gustav, I hope that Bill will not be meeting him, but maby it will happing. Tom is being a bit kind, but he is still a trainer. I can't wait intil the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
I told you that you would be surprised where Gustav came up and what he was like. I hope Bill won't meet him either. I tried to protray Tom in a softer light while still keeping him real. I am glad you are so hooked.
Date: 03/23/12 01:07 pm Title: Lunch
I really like Sarah and think it's nice that Bill met her. She might help him with the adaption and he might not get so depressed as he would have otherwise. It's always nice to have someone to talk to and God knows they need it in that place, haha :)
Author's Response:
Yeah they do. I thought I needed someone besides Tom to explain the rules and way things work. Someone in the same straits as Bill so they would know exactly what he was going through.
Date: 03/23/12 12:44 pm Title: Lunch
:P It was EnjoyTheCarnage. We're passing it around our fandom loop now. I don't think you have the ability to dissapoint. You are an incredible writier. I feel like I'm THERE when I read this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for passing it around your fandom loop. That is amazing and I am glad you both like it so much now. Thank you for the amazing compliments and I hope you're right about the not disappointing thing.
Date: 03/23/12 08:49 am Title: Lunch
This is incredible!! It seems Tom has just very well conditioned himself to that place by being broken down with the rules of its sadistic games. I just read all five chapters and absolutely love it. I'm glad Tom is finally starting to be more humane towards Bill, because at first I had my doubts as to whether he had feelings or not, lol. But, you keep him in character so perfectly well, to the very last line of the last paragraph after the lunch. It's like he has to switch back in to being in control at the appropriate times, because he's been so broken down. Job well done! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
I never felt like sympathizes with Tom but you are right. That is amazing. Thanks for the new perpective you just opened doors that I didn't even realize were there. I am glad you like it so much. I am glad that Tom is starting to treat Bill a little better too. I have tried to make Tom as real as possible without going overboard on how he treats Bill. I hope I have hit that marker.
Date: 03/23/12 01:52 am Title: Lunch
Sweet god of fanfiction this is amazing. My friend sent me the link and now i will have to buy her something amazing in return. The balance of smut/plot/affection is PERFECT and I just read all five chapters in one sitting and most DEFINITELY look forward to the rest of the fic!
Author's Response:
Which friend I would like to thank her too? I am glad you liked it enough to read the chapters in one sitting. I really am glad that people are responding so well to this. I will try not to disappoint.
Date: 03/23/12 12:25 am Title: Lunch
OhmyKaulitz... I've been MEANING to read this and finally got around to it. Regretting taking so long. XD
Though, I apparently misunderstand the meaning of "Slavery" when used in fanfiction..
Expectation: Civil War Era..... Reality: Ball gags, whips, and chains. O.O
LOVED IT.
:D
Author's Response:
Maybe I'll do the Pre-Civil War Slave thing next. Thanks for the idea.
Date: 03/22/12 10:46 pm Title: Lunch
an I start off by saying I love the phrase 'be a lover, not a lurker'? Cuz I do.
Okay, so, this was an interesting chapter. I like that Bill found himself his own little window, and it chuffs me to death that Tom had that dream about Bill. But that, in conjunction with the public discipline of the peeps trying to esc-ah-pay forshadows bad things in their futures, with them trying to escape, possibly.
Not too sure what I think, or how I feel, about Sarah yet. I just, I dunno...she seems off somehow.
Can't wait to see more! Its so fun seeing where this goes every update1 Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like that phrase, I like it too. I have no idea where I got it from i just like it. I am glad you think this was interesting. When you say it chuffs you is that good or bad, I am not sure what that means? I have no idea where I am going with this but I have an idea so bear with me. Sarah is a character that I haven' t decided what to do with yet. I am glad you like this story so far. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 03/22/12 10:20 pm Title: Progress
I meant Georg was behaving ridicullously, and disregarding the rules.
Author's Response:
Yeah I agree.
Date: 03/21/12 07:43 pm Title: The 1st Day
It's a line from An deiner Seite (Ich bin da) or By Your Side. It means "by your side for just a little while". :)
Oh, and let me just say again how wonderful this story is. I hope you'll update soon. I'm kind of obsessed!
Author's Response:
I'll try. Thanks for telling me.
Date: 03/21/12 07:37 am Title: Progress
interesting... Very interesting
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so.