Date: 03/27/12 07:26 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Poor Billa! More Please! :D
Author's Response:
Will do. Thanks.
Date: 03/27/12 11:45 am Title: Serving the House Master
Wow, first off, I surprised with the NEW BANNER!! I almost didn't recognize the story and keep roll down to the bottom, But I found yours eventually =)))
Another chapter, but to be honest, I didn't enjoy it very much, not as much as other chapters, cause it's so cruel >< at first I thought that Gustav here has an eye on Bill, but turned out he's just wanted to test Bill's ability, aw~ hope Tom will appear soon on the next chapter to heal him~ (I see the process in Tom-Bill relationship, love it :x)
Author's Response:
The one I had up first was just a random picture off of google and didn't even fit very well. This one and the one I will be putting up tomorrow is definitely better suited. Yeah I had to write this chapter unofrtunately. It reminds everyone how cruel this place really is. I am glad you liked how I am writing the relationship. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/27/12 08:06 am Title: Serving the House Master
this sounds like a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I hope you will continue to read.
Date: 03/27/12 12:04 am Title: Serving the House Master
Is it weird that I think Gustav could be worse? I mean...at least he isn't just randomly beating the shit out of Bill, they're all punishments for his 'rule breaking/ disobediance'. Don't get me wrong, he ain't good persay. Just..yea... good chapter! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
No it's not weird. Trust I thought about making Gustav much meaner with just randomly beating Bill but I thought I would probably have to ease into that after a while of Bill being good. I am glad you liked this chapter and I hope you will continue reading.
Date: 03/26/12 10:12 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Holy fuck that was so fucking horrible. I can't even look at Gustav the same way again. D8
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if you mean this in a good or bad way. I tried to make sure that the warnings and summary were accurate. I also warned readers in the story notes and the chapter notes. I am sorry if I offended you but this story is designed for a specific type of reader. I have seen worse. You have to realize this is a work of fiction I don't believe anyone in TH, their crew or management is capable of this. Gustav is a sweet guy who is quiet and plays the drums. He is probably hard working and loyal. He loves his family and friends. This is just a position I put him in to make up for all the neglect in my precious stories.
Date: 03/26/12 08:36 pm Title: Serving the House Master
*Raises eyebrow* That last thing. I've never read a fic with one in it (though I have heard of it). Well done for opening new doors for bondage fics! I still totally love this and I'll probably hike back up and read this chapter again before bed. I feel bad for Bill, but you said it perfectly in the opening notes! WELL Done and this banner is wonderful... I can't wait to see the other as well! (PS, thank you again for your RAPIDFIRE updates. Love them so, so much!)
Author's Response:
I admit I did a little bit of research for this chapter. I wanted to make it as real as possible so I looked through a few porn sites, I am ashamed to admit. For the first few videos I couldn't understand what it was or what it was doing so I looked at the site description and there it was in all it's horrible detail. I feel bad for this chapter but it was easy to write (I am actually surprised at how horrible I can think.) I am glad you like the banner and I hope you will like the next one. I am glad you like how fast I update I do it because I like making my readers happy.
Date: 03/26/12 07:39 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Poor Bill :( I want to punch Gustav, but I have a feeling I'd be punished for it.
Author's Response:
Maybe but then again this is a fantasty so maybe not. I hope you enjoyed it anyway.
Date: 03/26/12 06:41 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Gustav is...demented. BUT, I think I was maybe expecting worse? Hope I'm not speaking too soon, lolz.
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response:
It's not over yet I can promise you that. It gets worse but not by much. I am not sure how violent I can get but we shall see in future installments. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/26/12 06:17 pm Title: Serving the House Master
I usually don't say anything about my stories in other's reviews, but since you asked and if you like that sort of thing, you could check out The Playhouse Palace. It's pretty twisted in some ways and it's much more well written than my other one, With All He's Taken. I dunno. Just a suggestion. It does make me sad to read and write stories like this, but I enjoy them. Again, great job!!
Author's Response:
It makes me sad to read and write stories like this too but for some reason I am strangely fanscinated at the same time. I will definitely check out your stories and tell you what I think.
Date: 03/26/12 05:45 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Kinky OwO Very kinky. :D
Funfun.
Bill should've kicked him in the face >.>
Quick updates make me happy :D:D
Author's Response:
His legs were tied down so he couldn't fight back even if he the semblence of mind too. I am glad the updates make you happy.
Date: 03/26/12 05:43 pm Title: Serving the House Master
Wow, that's as bad, if not worse than some of the things I've done to him. Amazingly written. I wonder what's going to take place when Tom sees the abuse? I just see this thing going so many ways. I love the scenarios and the way things are set up in this story. Job well done for another great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
What do you mean some of the things you've done to him like in your stories... or in your head? I have no idea how I am going to write Tom's reaction yet. I am glad you like it so much. I didn't think it would go over very well.
Date: 03/26/12 07:57 am Title: The 1st Day
LOL....OMG my review really sucks and I'm also surprised how twisted it is. About morphing? it's not your story it's me*facepalm*, about puzzling? what I mean is intrigued *sigh*, my my my, I'm really sorry. Anyways I'll just keep on tracking. I'll give you reviews on the next chap I'll make up for it...^_^
Author's Response:
Your review does not suck it was just a bit confusing. Thanks for clarifying the points I asked about. I hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Date: 03/26/12 12:40 am Title: Tom's Slave
Lol, wellll it would have been better beta'd. Lots of punctuations errors here. And you don't have to worry about updating "late" because many authors on here go *months* between chapters.
Anyway, lovely installment. Except for the end D: Uh oh. I forget who exactly Gustav is in this fic. I'll have to go back and look to previous references.
Author's Response:
I like to post every other other day and if I become just like the other authors then I won't feel as good about my stories. I am glad you liked it. Gustav is the house master, the main person in charge.
Date: 03/25/12 11:01 pm Title: Tom's Slave
Dun dun duuuuuunnnnn. This is certainly not ging to end very well at all, is it? I knew that ws going to be Gustav's response to Tom's reasoning. It may have worked if Bill had been claimed by someone other than Tom though.
I knda get the feeling that the other girl is gonna die, but I don't really understand why she was all aloof and stuff in the room with Sarah and Bill. I feel bad for her though, I kinda get the feeling she mght;ve gotten attached to Eric, or maybe he made her promises to get her to behave or something...
I liked the bit about the mountains
Good chapter! Can't wait to see more!
Chuffed is a good thing. If you say your are chuffed at something, its like saying you are pleased with it.
Author's Response:
I had to make Tom fight at least a little bit but I knew it wasn't it going to work either. Amelia is a character that I haven't decided what to do with yet but I don't think her part is over yet, I tried to make it seem like she was looking down on Bill and Sarah for talking and laughing, like she was better trained then them so when she snaps it's seems more suprising then if Bill or Sarah had freaked. I feel bad too and I'm not sure if I am going to give a reason about Eric not taking her on yet. I thought I would show a bit more personal information not only about Bill but about Tom as well. I reall want people to bond with these characters. I am glaf you liked and I always like your reviews. They are long and you always have such nice things to say. :D I was wondering if you were going to tell me what chuffed meant. I hope you continue to be chuffed by this story.
Date: 03/25/12 09:33 pm Title: The 1st Day
Your story seemed puzzling me. I had read lots of stories about kidnapping and bondage, prostitutions and whatnots. The only thing is that when I read read this it's like I morphed to period piece the style the dominance and the situation the way they train and handle their victims are quite puzzling me really, the masters and servants. I truely love this, I like stories with a bit of cliffhanger and like a guessing game to what would be the next situation to be revealed. Can't wait to know about Gustav's purpose. I manage to take my time tracking this one. Till then goodluck and read from you soon.....^_~
Author's Response:
I am not sure I understand our comment. Do you mean my story morphed into sort of a period piece? I am fascinated by the sex trade but I thought this was a more interesting version of that kind of thing. How is the way they trade and handle their victims puzzling? I would like to clear up anything you don't understand. I am glad you like the way I write my stories and this story in particular. Gustav is definitely up to something but that is all I will say about that. I hope you continue to read, enjoy and review.
Date: 03/25/12 09:06 pm Title: Tom's Slave
More more more more more more more more MOOOOORRRREEEEE! :D
Author's Response:
I am happy to oblige with that command.
Date: 03/25/12 03:27 pm Title: Tom's Slave
Yay for Tom getting to claim Bill! I feel kinda bad for Sarah, maybe Tom can claim her? Why didn't her trainer claim her?
I'm nervous for Bill, hope he takes what Gustav dishes out without being disobedient...
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response:
Her trainer hasn't reached master status yet so couldn't calim Sarah. There is a rule I will explain later that will explain why Sarah is in he situation she is in. I am working on the Gustav's scene right now and it's really good. I will try to get it up tomorrow.
Date: 03/25/12 02:43 pm Title: Tom's Slave
Got excited... submitted too soon. Add on to that.... I love the emotional range of this fic! I'm totally encompased by it through the entirity of the chapter and find myself feeling what Bill/Tom are. This fic is being pimped all over a few facebook pages so I hope that brings you more reviewers for your absolutely phenominal fic! Surely, I will read it over and over after it is complete.
Author's Response:
I love preemptive reviews they are amusing. I try to touch and everything that Bill and Tom could be feeling not only in regards to their situation but in regards to haaving such intimate and close contact in a place is filled with hopelessness, fear and broken spirits. I am glad you like it enough to post on facebook, that makes me very happy. I am glad you like it so much.
Date: 03/25/12 02:42 pm Title: Tom's Slave
T__T OH GOD! I'm so nervous for him. I LOVE how fast you update!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like how fast I update. I have read other not finished stories and find myself hating the time between updates. I try to make that time as minimal as possible for all my lovely readers.
Date: 03/25/12 01:53 pm Title: Tom's Slave
I love this story. I check for it everytime I sign on to this website. Great job!!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so much. I hope you continue to read and enjoy.