Date: 05/01/23 01:07 am Title: Desperate Times
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/16/12 08:18 pm Title: Desperate Measures
I really like the setting in this. I have a weak spoty for homeless or otherwise a bit "out of society's norms"-twins. There were few typos here and there, but nothing big or bothering.
Damn that rim job scene was hot! Loved it!
I think this universe could easily use more stories. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) This idea just randomly came to me in the night when I was thinking of how the twins would have to be put into a sexual situation with each other and boom, homeless twins :) It made me sad writing it XD Yeah I probably could benefit from a beta but I don't trust anyone XD Hehe I love rim job scenes, I feel like there aren't enough of them :P Don't worry, I'm already working out the next story in my mind ;)
Date: 03/11/12 06:22 am Title: Desperate Measures
Oh my... That was really good.
I kinda felt like shooting their mother.
But besides that I really liked it.
Great story line. When they met Don at the bookstore at first I thought he was going to offer them a place to live. I can see I was FAR from what was really going to happen.
Haha
Author's Response: lol yeah i had a much more complex thought in mind hehehe im evil! though it ends up being a good thing so maybe not too evil ;) glad you liked it :D
Date: 03/09/12 06:53 pm Title: Desperate Measures
i love it and i can't wait to read other chapters about their poor life and "crazy" adventures
Author's Response: the craziness shall continue :D
Date: 03/09/12 05:54 pm Title: Desperate Measures
this was hawt ;D
Author's Response: i know XD i love my dirty mind
Date: 03/09/12 01:30 pm Title: Desperate Measures
This is such a cute and awesome story :3 you should definitely write more!
Author's Response: and write more i shall :D thank you for your support :P
Date: 03/09/12 01:22 pm Title: Desperate Times
Im confused though, since they're only sixteen, doesn't that mean that they don't get the money? how is that a happy ending...Im so lost :(
Author's Response: it shall make sence :)
Date: 03/09/12 10:44 am Title: Desperate Measures
this was a really good story!!
i cant wait for the sequel!!!
to see what happens to bill an tom after this!!
Author's Response: thank you :D i have to work it out in my mind first but it shall continue :)
Date: 03/09/12 05:59 am Title: Desperate Measures
it's already over? :/
I can wait though (:
Author's Response: haha yes but there shall be more to come in the series
Date: 03/09/12 04:29 am Title: Desperate Measures
Writing more will definitely be worth it. I'm so glad you decided to make a series because this was seriously enjoyable.
Author's Response: thank you :3
Date: 03/09/12 04:25 am Title: Desperate Measures
Oh, I forgot to mention- "We didn't really have time to date, we were kind of busy being homeless." .....made me ROFL!! Literally. Fav line EVER. Hahhahahahahhaha. XD
Author's Response: Hahaha thank you, I was rather pleased with that like myself :) If I can say one thing about myself it's that I am one for comedy XD
Date: 03/09/12 04:20 am Title: Desperate Measures
OMG, I loved this!!! What a fucking great idea for a fic!!! Like, brilliant plot! I can't wait to read more. This was so freaking sexy. I love your characters too- the fact that Tom cares for Bill so deeply is heartwarming. And I like how you drop in some humor and flashbacks. Very nice. I have one criticism though- please proofread for typos, there's quite a few in this fic. :( Thank you for writing this. I'll be not-so-patiently waiting for your sequel! :D
Author's Response: haha i looked over but there were no red squiggles under anything so i assumed since everything was spelled correctly that it was fine, i'll be sure read through and correct any outstanding typos though, those really bother me lol. thank you so much for your praise, its review like this that keep me going :) be on the lookout for more! though i do need to finish my other stories as well XD
Date: 03/08/12 04:14 pm Title: Desperate Times
yay twin porn
Author's Response: oh the twin porn it shall be!
Date: 03/08/12 02:47 pm Title: Desperate Times
Haha I'm definitely looking forward to the second chapter, in which I'm sure the twins will accept the offer and exciting things will happen ;)
On another not, I hope they'll make it out of homelessness with the movie's profit, because it makes me sad to see them poor :(
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I was really excited about this story and yes, next chapter will bring oh so much joy for all :) All shall come to a happy ending so I can guarantee all will be well :) I hope thats not a spoiler, all my stories end happily XD I hate realistic endings. You know, sad ones. Hope you like the next one!
Date: 03/08/12 06:27 am Title: Desperate Times
It's gettin good (:
Author's Response: It shall get better :D