Date: 03/22/12 02:53 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
This was an adorable chapter. I love Jake's character. He's so warm and funny. Bill's doubts and thoughts are so realistic and I love that. Well done!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! I kind of like Jake too. Glad Bill is coming across as genuine, thanks for letting me know :D
Date: 03/22/12 02:34 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Omg, hahaha! a Ferchichi sandwich!? ummm, I'd tap that! as well as Bill... How is Jasmine, is she ok? Is her lover supporting her? I don't think so...
Author's Response: Laffin....I'm going to look up pics of his brother now. Jasmine...well, we'll find out eventually. But I'm kind of doubting that Tom is going to jump right up and be supportive and caring, ya know?
Date: 03/22/12 01:04 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
What a relief that he's ok... and that awkward moment when you find your partner chatting with his/her ex, hahaha.
Changing the subject, have you ever thought about bringing Anis' brother to this or any of your stories?
Author's Response: I haven't done any research on the real Bushido, so I didn't know anything about his brother except that Raiju mentioned him in King of Kingz. Guess I'll have to look him up, maybe there could be an interesting little one-shot about Bill and a Ferchichi sandwich...?
Date: 03/22/12 12:35 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
So, it was the embezzeler. Guess he got his just desserts. So happy Anis wasn't too badly hurt. Bad enough though. I could feel Bill's panic. Thank goodness Jake was there. He's just great, a good friend. Ha! I knew that nurse was Micah! You are so clever to bring him on the scene that way. Love jealous Bill, he makes me laugh trying to get one over the attractive nurse. The end part was so tender with Anis reassuring Bill that he'd thought of him on every date with Micah. So sweet. Not exactly sure it was wise for Bill to come clean about being pregnant, not that I think Jake will let anything slip, but he's bound to tell his wife and the more people who know...if Tom gets to hear he's going to put 2 and 2 together. With Bill being only 6 weeks preggers he'll know it's his. Great chapter, as ever. So eager to know how all this will play out, and especially whether Tom will get wind of the pregnancy...almost hope he will because some serious drama would follow. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Hi, Helen! Thanks for the review, as always :) Glad you liked the chapter, I struggled with it a bit. I think Bill told Jake about the preg thing because, first, he's Anis' best friend, and second, because Bill trusts him and feels like Jake is HIS friend, too. We'll have to see what happens about the whole Tom thing! I liked jealous Bill! One reviewer mentioned something about him not being jealous about Tom, and I knew there was a reason he felt different. I did a pschological review in that answer :D (p.s...I'll email soon, gonna be another busy work week tho :(
Date: 03/22/12 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Aww micah is so nice but i can still understand why bill is jealous :)
great chapter by the way ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/22/12 03:22 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Wat! It can't end so quick.............. I'm still very addicted! I would die without it!
Date: 03/22/12 03:07 am Title: Fog filtered emotions
Oh dear . hehe. Bill's display of jealousy is frightening. I remember how appalled he was when Tom was jealous and when it comes down to it, Bill is definitely being a man about it himself. I'm not saying it's a double standard because that's just how love works for some apparently :)
Good luck to Anis for trying to fatten up someone with the metabolism of a racehorse *g* I suppose it will get easier to gain weight when the morning sickness passes. Until then, he'll just have make do.
More trouble for Bill with the divorce ahead? I'm not able to guess where you're taking this sequel yet except I imagine twins to be had in the end, so I look forward to next chapter :)
Author's Response: You're right, Bill WAS appalled by Tom's jealousy. But Tom was a complete jerk about it. Not sure why Bill feels this way about Anis. He's being pretty territorial! Not that he doesn't trust him, I think he's...wait, I've got it...He feels more on equal footing in this relationship, so he has a right to be possessive. Tom was someone from a much higher echelon than Bill, and so Bill was far more accomodating, feeling that Tom was more important than him. Ha, I knew there was a reason. rnBill will be plumping up! He's getting all that estrogen, so that will help. Hopefully, it won't settle in the hips ;)rnMore on the divorce coming up! Thanks for your review, MDE!
Date: 03/22/12 01:44 am Title: Fog filtered emotions
OH.
MY.
GOSH.
*slaps your arm* Don't do that to me! QnQ
Author's Response: So worth the abuse.
Date: 03/22/12 12:33 am Title: Fog filtered emotions
Oh whew *sags* thank god. Bill really didn't need to go losing Anis when he only just got him.
*giggles* Oh Billy, green is not a good shade on him. But it was kinda cute, himtrying to keep the claws put away in regards to Micah. btw have I mentioned how much I love that name? No? Cuz I do.
Bill"s gotta get fat!! Oh nos!! Fate worse than death!! But he must do it. For the babies!! It tickles me that Anis is so concered about it even though they aren't really his. Its so great that he doesn't care.
I really REALLY hope Tom accepts this initial divorce proposal. It would just add insult to injury to try and drag this out. He never even tried to leave her, until she was already pregnant. At least, thats how it appers at this point, I would kind of like to find out what exactly went on on his end.
Wonderful work! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Great review! I love the name Micah, too. Unusual without being weird, and very pretty-sounding. I'm thinking we're going to see a little bit of a fat Bill, but I'm trying to wind it down. Tom's definitely in the future, we'll see what he's been thinking!
Date: 03/21/12 11:45 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Ooh, jealous Bill is so cute. I'm happy that Micah and Bu are on good terms, and that Bu and Bill have Jake. He's such a reliable friend. :)
Author's Response: Wouldn't you love to see a throw-down! Bill would go nuts on that blue-eyed nurse! Hopefully, they'll be able to get along. I kind of liked Micah's character. I think he was falling for Anis more than he let on in the last story :\ I like Jake, too. It's good for Bill to have a solid little world of caring people. He's never had that before.
Date: 03/21/12 11:33 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
haha poor Liz she scared amy bill!!!! and jake too... well thwy are good people.... uffffff anis is okey
Micah is a metiche....... get away Micah
hahha
great capi ME ENCANTO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anis will go with bill at the doctor?!!!! yesssssssssssss
XD
Author's Response: Gracias! Micah... a little metiche, maybe. And doctor's visit, up next!
Date: 03/21/12 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Ok I guess, I'll wait.......is dis a trilagy?
Author's Response: No, a few more chapters and it's done. On to the next!
Date: 03/21/12 09:20 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Anis está bien..!! eso me hace sentir mejor, me encanta que Bill se ponga celoso, lindo capítulo.
Quién es Micah en la vida real? alguien como Jared Leto, un cantante, actor, modelo??
Author's Response: Anis esta bien! Lo siento para susto! Yes, Bill definitely got jealous! Muy celoso! And I didn't have anyone famous in mind for Micah. You may imagine anyone you'd like.
Date: 03/21/12 04:42 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
He is ok, Thank God! And in the end it was not Tom to shoot Anis. Next we will see Tom trying to get back what he thinks it's his? Thank you for this and pleaaaase updates soon!
Author's Response: He's okay! I could never hurt Bu! We'll be seeing Tom in short order, and I'll be working on an update asap!
Date: 03/21/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Wat? No....... She's tall I'm short so she's got levarage, bt I could totally kick her ass , she doesn't eat much so she's week n am heaver than her any way so I would so take her down bt then we won't be able 2 stay together 4 Da rest of Da semester............ It would be awkward and weird n we'd eather get kicked out 4 fightin or fight again then get kick out.......... No I'd rather read about a fight than have 1................... That was a fast reply, wat ar u... Watchin 2 see if people are readin n reviewin?
Author's Response: I'm reading Mirror Image and I'm hooked - 83 chapters? And still not done? Yeah, if I have spare time between work/writing/spending time with significant other, I'm reading that story! rnGuess I should put in a fight scene just for you. But ...it'll have to be the next story!
Date: 03/21/12 04:02 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Can u make it so tom finds out n totally hoes ape shit on bill n ani has 2 step in n bitch slap him silly............... Sorry I was sick n now I have unused energy.......... Ohh bt I love Da jelousy play, make em fight! I really need 2 work on my issues......... But still, I WANT A F****N FIGHT SCEnE!!! Or else.....................
Date: 03/21/12 04:00 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Can u make it so tom finds out n totally hoes ape shit on bill n ani has 2 step in n bitch slap him silly............... Sorry I was sick n now I have unused energy.......... Ohh bt I love Da jelousy play, make em fight! I really need 2 work on my issues......... But still, I WANT A F****N FIGHT SCEnE!!! Or else.....................
Author's Response: Sounds like you need to work off some of that aggression. Here's what you do: go find your roommate. Get really mad about the last time she ate something of yours that you really wanted. Jump full-wrestler on her. Throw a few punches. Roll around a little. Get bruised. You'll feel better.
Date: 03/19/12 08:09 pm Title: The fog takes me to you
HOLY WHAT THE MOTHER- NEEEEIIIIINNN!!!! It was so fluffy, and happy, and hot...and now...*wibbles*...is he gonna be okay? *wimpers* bitte?
Kismet sounds so sweet and cute, how on earth could someone abandon the precious lil thing? I hope Rabbi will accept the newest member of the family.
They're gonna get married!! ..no *smacks self* not if, when, when Anis gets better and the divorce is finalized. So yay!!
I am looking forward to finding out the sex of the babies. Probably won't happen anytime soon though huh?
Wonderful chapter! *wiggles excitedly* update soon!
Author's Response: Fluffy, and happy, and hot - yes it was! Thank you! As for the rest, we'll have to wait and see! I'll be updating tonight, tomorrow morning at the latest. Keep wiggling until then! Viel danke!
Date: 03/18/12 11:44 am Title: The fog takes me to you
OoO I.....I....WHAT?!
Date: 03/17/12 10:26 am Title: The fog takes me to you
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Please tell me that Anis will be ok!!!!!!! he must because el es protagonista no? jajaja :D AY se van a casar..... hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!! all peefect no dura para siempre..... o por mucho tiempo.. quien es el tipo que le disparo? lo mando tom? el papa de tom? de otro caso? please please Im desesperate for the next.... because this is bad for bill just right now and Anis too of course he is the hurt...
XD saluditos!!!! Great capi. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter won't be up for a couple days, unfortunately I'm working, but it'll be here asap!