Date: 03/25/12 07:11 pm Title: At the heart of the fog
Well I red this for the 2nd time and all I gotta say Tom is still the immature selfish prick bastard with now violent behavior. I guess either the divorce is a rough one especially if Tom finds out about the twins. His sentence about taking care of the baby now means everything. Or he just leaves the city and Bill could hide his " secret" from him for a few more time. All i can say is that all this stinks and is going to be messy.. love it as usual and can't wait to read the update cuz it bring a smile on my face
Date: 03/24/12 04:56 pm Title: At the heart of the fog
apperantly only "married" man that get caught cheating have sex addictions. i never heard of a single guy checking into rehab for an addiction to sex.
Author's Response: Maybe they stay single because they're smart and they don't want to hurt anyone or they want the freedom to do what they want. They just want lots of sex with lots of people, and if they're okay with that and aren't deceiving anyone, no harm, no foul. For the most part. I think guys who get into relationships and then cheat constantly have other issues besides sex addiction. I think they like to lead secret lives, maybe it gives them a high. Well, it's all conjecture anyway :)
Date: 03/24/12 09:44 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
So tru............... My hero!!!
Date: 03/24/12 04:20 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Sorry I didn't review yesterday, it was my son's birthday so I was busy baking. Thank you so much for another update. Okay, fave line in this chapter - When Bill asks Anis if he's ready to be a husband and father and Anis replies “I’ve been ready for a while. Was just waiting for you.” That was a true awwwww moment; made me go all goosebumpy. Loved Anis at the unltrasound and he wants little girls...so cute. Bittersweet for Bill, though, remembering how attentive Tom had been at the doctors' appointments. That stuff with Andreas is freaky; sad too. Has me wondering how he''ll react when he finally learns of the pregnancy. Tom finally shows his true colours, all the possessiveness coming to the fore. I remember writing in the first story that he sees Bill as a possession and that really comes out in this chapter - also his behaviour regarding the kid he's having with Jasmine...it's his so he has rights to it, never mind what's best for the child. Before this I wasn't quite happy with Bill's decision not to tell Tom he was pregnant, but I now think that he's made a really good call. And yet I still feel kind of sorry for Tom, with his father its no wonder he thinks money can buy him whatever he wants, even the people he wants. He just can't conceive how Bill could possibly give eveything up and thinks if he makes it as hard as he can for him financially Bill will eventually come crawling back. In essence he's just a sore loser, can't bear to think that Bill can possibly have a life without him. So he's weirdo number 2 in Bill's life. Thank God he has Anis to show him that not all the men he thought he knew are possesive pricks...means Anis has a lot to live up to though, all Bill's expectations and fears following from his past experiences are riding on Anis's broad shoulders. I'm pretty sure he's up to the challenge though. Oooooh, I just love how he is with Bill. Okay, gotta go. More soon...please.
Author's Response: Well happy birthday to boy-o! Hope the cake turned out good. I love bday cake! Thanks for another review. I love that you picked out a favorite line. I think Anis just has such a big heart for Bill, and for a solid relationship - he doesn't hold back once he feels it's going to work (remember, he got kind of jerkish with Andrej, but he admits it freely and plans on being much better now). Andi freaks me out, too. I can just picture him, glancing for a look at Bill's mini-boobs, fantasizing about being father to his child. Now Tom falls apart and lets his angst make him go coo-coo! Poor Bill. He'd be pretty bad off if he was on his own, but I still think he'd do it. Won't be posting for a few days, sorry! Maybe Tuesday night? Thanks for the review Helen !
Date: 03/24/12 02:59 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Tom is breaking, and this is the most dangerous moment to be around him. I hope he will come to terms with the consequences of his behavior (maybe Steve can help a bit?) and do the right thing, not only with Bill but also for Jasmine and her baby. Like I said in another comment I don't believe he is really bad, just needing to grow intorno tha man he was supposed to be. Hope stress is not going to his Bill and the babies ( btw I would love to see him and Anis with lovely girls!)
Author's Response: It would be nice if emotionally immature people could grow up, wouldn't it? The future is planned.....
Date: 03/24/12 02:41 am Title: At the heart of the fog
want to c more of tommmm and were did he get his tan from!? another fling? :O and please keep adding tom in this it makes it more interesting! and after THAT i hope tom doesnt find out dat bill's pregnant with HIS kids o.o
Date: 03/24/12 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
So tru............... My hero!!!
Author's Response: Yes, yes, I know. You're welcome. ;)
Date: 03/24/12 12:50 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Oh my bajeezus. That was intense from beginning to end, in various different ways.
Barebacked sexy times!! I'm glad they're clean, and can enjoy eachother fully now.
AndiKs doc has me super worried now... I hope he manages to get to a stable place, and doesn't do something to make Bill have to stop visiting.
Bleh, Tom. Such a child. Ass needs to grow up. I really hope someone talks some sense in to hin@ be it his lawyer or his father. And what he's doing to Jasmine? Ridic. I feel so horrible for the poor kid that's gonna be stuck in the middle. I can't blame Bill at all for hiding it after seeing that. I just hope hiding it doesn't blow up in their faces, seeing as Tom's gonna drag this out as much as he possibly can.
Wonderful work. I can't wait to see more ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! rnI'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I too am a bit worried for Andi, he's just a bit twisted about Bill, in a kind of ....ew....sorta way. I'm thinking Bill's glad he got even more proof that Tom would make a terrible dad (when it comes to split parenting, anyway). We'll see what happens! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/23/12 10:43 pm Title: At the heart of the fog
Damn. If I had second thoughts about Bill not telling Tom about the babies, this wiped it all away. It's disgusting. Forcing custody on the child because she didn't get an abortion? Made me vaguely nauseous when I read that part.
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom has not been the shining example of what makes a good father, has he? Sorry to make you feel ill. He's just bad :(
Date: 03/23/12 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Haha!!! No wander I'm more attracted 2 girls......... But u ar awsome!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Nobody plays 2 boys better than 2 girls anyway. Thanks!
Date: 03/23/12 12:55 pm Title: At the heart of the fog
Sería lindo que tengan girls :D
Poor Tom, está desesperado, el divorcio no será facil..
Author's Response: Twin girls would be so pretty...can't you just see Bu on the floor, playing dolls with his daughters? (let's all give a great big "aaawwwwww!"). Tom's having a total meltdown, the brat!
Date: 03/23/12 10:52 am Title: At the heart of the fog
ooh. Drama. :)
Author's Response: I know, huh!
Date: 03/23/12 10:25 am Title: At the heart of the fog
i changed my mind : a want the next story to be about Tom and Andrej,pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee
Tom has a nervous breakdown and is starting to realize that he won't get back with Bill.
Good thing that Bill didn't tell him about the pregnancy and didn't throw up on him (that would've been kinda funny)or faint ....
Author's Response: At the last chapter, you and me, we'll look back on this review and laugh.
Date: 03/23/12 06:33 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Wow. The meeting with Tom was certainly explosive! Will he ever learn? *shakes head* I feel so bad for Andy... Hope things get a little better for him. And Bill has so much to face... Hopefully the babies will bring joy and contentment in his life.
Author's Response: Tom...well, maybe when he's 40. No, I'm thinking a midlife crisis would only make him worse. I'm thinking that, all in all, Bill has a pretty happy base going on. He's all in love, and stuff. You know, whatev. ;)
Date: 03/23/12 05:39 am Title: At the heart of the fog
i was kind of hoping Tom found out about the babys xD i dont know why... i just like drama drama drama! xD
Author's Response: Shhhh.....those babies are a secret!
Date: 03/23/12 05:00 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Ur a mean mean person, how dare u play with our emotions like that?...................... Ohh god I got so exited wen he threw the tantrum...............* Drama*!!!
Author's Response: I can play with your emotions like that BECAUSE I'm a mean person!!! Bwaaahhh hahahahaaaa! I know, that tantrum was great. Guys are such babies. (Seen this behavior with my own eyes!)
Date: 03/23/12 03:14 am Title: At the heart of the fog
MEEEEEEP!! I was having a gollyawful day when I saw this. I love this story.
Author's Response: "MEEEEEEP!!" is a great expression! I am so MEEEEPing glad to have made your awful-in-a-golly-way day better! Thank you!
Date: 03/22/12 07:03 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
awww I feel so so relieved now
Author's Response: Yay, me too! Didn't mean to upset you :(
Date: 03/22/12 06:10 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
didn't read it yet I first wanted to say I'm glad to read you I was getting worried.. now I'm gonna read this chapter xx
Date: 03/22/12 05:02 pm Title: Fog filtered emotions
Eeee, again :DD That was well-written interaction between Bill and Anis and Micah.
Author's Response: Thank you!