Date: 03/30/12 04:01 am Title: Journey through the fog
U......... Evil......... Bitch............u had me thinkin I at least had a few more days........ God I hate u right now
Ok sorry, sorry , sorry ............. Its just that.......... My emotions......... I ddnt mean to........... I think I need to Carm down.........
Ok I'm Calm........... Sorry 4 Da swearin and Da screamin and Da throwin of things I'm ok now, in good................... Great story, really captivatin................ Ur awsome
Author's Response: Aw, Missy P, I am feeling the love. I am so pleased to have affected you this way, giving you apoplectic fits and all! You've been delightful.
Date: 03/30/12 03:14 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
That went so fast
Nawww :(
Author's Response: I know, sorry!
Date: 03/30/12 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
OF CORSE I WILL, THAT'S NOT EVEN A QUESTION!!!!!!!!
Make it beautiful............. Pls........... God I need 2 get a life n stop living through fanfic................ But I guess if there's gonna be more, I'll let Da story end......... Sigh..............
Date: 03/29/12 11:04 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Oh thank goodness, theres another chapter. I wasn't ready to see this go yet. I still probably wont be. I a a bit worried about the last chapter though, everything was pretty well wrapped up in this one, but I have faith you will do well.
I am glad that Tom gave up. Wonder what slutty ho-face snatched his attention in order for him to give up on Bill.
Wonderfully fantastic chapter! Can't wait to see the last one!
Author's Response: You don't want it to end AND you have faith in me - I am truly blessed. rnrnI am dying about the "slutty ho-face." You'll understand why soon enough. rnrnAnd thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/29/12 10:25 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
you're scaring me. everything is so perfect..
Author's Response: We have collectively decided that sometimes life can be perfect.
Date: 03/29/12 06:59 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Lol, I too have that "everything is perfect so that means something bad is going to happen" feeling indoctrinated in me. But then I saw it has just one more chapter :)
It was a little rushed, but I think you did a good job covering all the events that still needed to happen :)
(And wtf, what's up with that Missy P person down there)
Author's Response: Maybe sometimes people do get to have perfect happiness. At least, we can pretend that, can't we? Good.rnrnThere was a LOT to cover - and you know, sometimes when a bunch of huge events happen at once, it does feel rushed and condensed, kind of like the chapter.rnrnAnd....I don't know... Better not say anything. She might cut me. ;)
Date: 03/29/12 06:23 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Wow!!! Too much happiness in one shot! Are you preparing us for a bad hit?
Well, I couldnt help myself think you got bored with this story, when all happened so fast in the last part of this chapter.
But I almost was in tears when Anis described how he was taking in and loving every one of Bills moves, his smiles, even his traces in the house... really, really sweet and well written.
The next part of the chapter was a little rushed, like in a fog. Yeah.
I loved though how you hinted real names and the new colour of Bills hair. Kudos to judith182, too, if it was her idea. With the names, I mean.
And I pity Tom. Its obvious hes struggling, he didnt get what happened to him, he lost Bill, he lost Jasmine (if he ever had her in some way), he lost his father, and Im sure he is not happy at all. But as you said, its not about him in this story.
I only have one big worry. If Tom or his father see the babies, as you said they look like Tom, they will know they are Toms. And hell will start. I dont know the laws for that situation, but I cannot help thinking they will want to do something.
Im sure you already have it all planned, so Im waiting for the next and, sadly, last chapter.
Author's Response: I know it was rushed! Sorry. I just couldn't see making long chapters about Bill being pregnant (Majestrix's "Makes Three" was flawless in that respect, but that's what her whole story was about - this wasn't, so too much on that would have made it imbalanced) or about the divorce, or more visits with Andi, or the house. I tried hard to round everything out as well as possible, though. I knew I'd have to compress it all eventually because I needed a time jump .... I wanted everything DONE - the divorce, the babies, the house, the wedding, all that, but more chapters would have dragged, I thought. SOOO I had to make a sacrifice. rnrnI'm glad that the description of how Anis watched Bill moved you. I wanted to show how he felt, glad it worked. And yes, judith182 gave the names (except Shay, she didn't care about the other middle name). rnrnWe'll see about maybe showing a bit of what Tom's been going through....rnrnThanks for all your fabulous reviews!
Date: 03/29/12 03:33 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
The twins are adorable :) I love the whole thing that Anis and Bill have finally become parents. The wedding was gorgeous, too. Getting the new house ready also a really nice point and made me wish I had the energy to just paint my walls :) This has turned out such a wonderful little sequel. Now there’s one chapter left? I wonder if Tom has a final input somewhere besides donating the sperm...!
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved making them parents. I hated rushing everything together like that, but at the same time didn't want it drawn out, chapter after chapter of house decorating and a pregnant Bill and the wedding and such. Now it's just all a nice little picture. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. We'll see about Tom......
Date: 03/29/12 02:08 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
O~O I told myself
...
Q~O that...that I wouldn't
...
Q~Q CRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Author's Response: FTW!!! No, no, I mean, I'm sorry. Tears of joy, right? They're all so happy!
Date: 03/29/12 12:56 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Amé este capítulo :D todo sucedió tan rápido pero su vida es tan bonita y me alegro de que Bill y Anis sean felices con sus twins, sus gatos y sus amigos.
Qué pasará con Tom? Creo que estaría bien que conozca a sus gemelos, supongo...
Date: 03/29/12 12:26 pm Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Aww! This is so cute! One more chapter?! Noooo! This story can't end!
Author's Response: I know, I hate it too. But I'm looking forward to the next story soooo much! Bill is going to be a ....well, we'll just have to see.
Date: 03/29/12 11:44 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
All happened here so fast!!!! Im sorprendida..... Bill is happy!!! yeah!!!!!!!!! great capi very nice and sweet :D
Author's Response: I know, I had to rush things a bit, but tried to make them nice and full at the same time. Thanks!
Date: 03/29/12 11:16 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
is Tom going to bust in again? :D
Author's Response: Hmmmm....not sure....
Date: 03/29/12 10:44 am Title: At the heart of the fog
omg Tom is crazy!!!!!
Date: 03/29/12 10:21 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Ohh God! 4 a second there I thought it was over, I was gettin ready 2 kill u
I'd even planned how 2 make it look like suicide............. Just kiddin, I'm not goin 2 kill u.............. Do I always sound This creepy? God I seriously need help............mmhhh............
Anyway it was really good so, worth Da wait,................. Still dnt think I can handle Da end wen it comes........... Ohh................in just............ Ahh.......WHY!!!!!!
Author's Response: There, there, Missy P..... This story must come to an end so that others may follow. I'm hoping you'll be around for the next one.
Date: 03/29/12 08:48 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Ooh, the babies and the house! I'm so happy. And so excited for the last chapter. :)
Author's Response: I know, me too!!
Date: 03/29/12 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Haha, u 4got ma first peircin, I did it myself wit I Hugh needle n dared it 2 get Infected , cnt read it yet cos I'm in class bt as soon as its ova imma be on it lyk a pube 2 its.................... Mmhh............
Author's Response: Ah, the first self-inflicted piercing....you make me nostalgic
Date: 03/29/12 04:27 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Omg this chapter was amazing!!!! But I can't help but sense the ominous tone in it. xD god how far Bill and Anis have come. :'D and I love the babies' names!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really struggled with the idea of having something really wrong happen, since, you're right, all that "everything is so friggin perfect and happy and full of love" stuff usually portends doom. But I like happy endings. One chapter to go, though, so you never really know.... rnGlad you like the names. Except for the Shay, Judith182 asked for those. I liked them, too.
Date: 03/29/12 04:22 am Title: Great achievements are accomplished in a blessed, warm fog
Took u long enough, I havnt even read it yet, imma do dat now................ It had better be worth Da wait or else I'll kill u.............
No I won't bt its still a threat
Author's Response: Um..... were you fed raw meat as a baby? rnThat would be cool. I can totally picture your first tattoo. When you were five, smoking a cigarette, glaring at the tattoo guy for not making it hurt enough. rnHope you like the chapter.
Date: 03/26/12 05:48 am Title: At the heart of the fog
Tooooom................. now I feel sad for Tom :/