Date: 03/30/12 09:31 pm Title: Journey through the fog
HOLY HELL.
CAN'T BREATHE.
/GROSS SOBBING
Author's Response: Holy hell! I ...um..... wow. Thank you!
Date: 03/30/12 08:31 pm Title: Journey through the fog
PPS: Oh, the stroller that Bill has is one of those side-by-side ones, so the twins can interact. I initially thought it was one of those strollers where one baby is behind the other, each with his own shade hood.
Also, one last little question that I hadn't thought of till now... Are Jacob and Julian identical twins, or fraternal?
(I reread it again. So my parting line is: Andrej, "prettiest [guy] he'd ever laid eyes on"? Prettier than Bill? Sacrilege XDD Eh, but I understand.)
Author's Response: (cut off my last response sorry) anyway, Tom is willing to admit faults, but not willing to change them. At least he can finally see what he was doing wrong, whereas before, he felt entitled to do whatever (whoever) he wanted)rnAnd we're going to go with identical. So much cuter. rnIf Tom believes Andrej is prettier than Bill (and yes, in some ways he is, don't shoot), it feeds his ego, makes not being with Bill a little less painful.
Date: 03/30/12 08:21 pm Title: Journey through the fog
So sad :( Es dificil de imaginar que Tom haya visto a sus hijos y haya decidido no hacer nada, y dejar a Bill rehacer su vida en paz. Es como castigarse a él mismo por todo lo malo que hizo, dejando atrás a sus propios hijos...es triste. Bill siempre tuvo miedo de que si Tom se enteraba del embarazo le haria la vida imposible, pero fue todo lo contrario.
Author's Response: I know it's sad that Tom let Bill leave with their sons, and didn't say anything. It was his way of trying to make up for all the other things he'd done. Bill looked so happy, he didn't want to mess that up. He has his little girl. A few people to play with. And now, maybe Andrej?
Date: 03/30/12 07:58 pm Title: Journey through the fog
PS: I want to add in that I positively adore -- it really got me right here *indicates heart* -- that Tom was able to let go, was able to achieve a definite step in becoming a much better person. *happy smile*
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I was worried it might be a bit out of character, but I'm thinking Tom really did some soul searching. Not willing to change bad habits (*cough*chronic cheating*cough*)
Date: 03/30/12 07:38 pm Title: Journey through the fog
Wow... I wouldn't have thought having it from Tom's point of view. This really does end it perfectly. You're a genius.
It's... sad. But not too sad. Lol, with Andrej it brings it full circle. God I love when books/stories are able to do that.
This was a pleasure to read.
Author's Response: I'm a genius! You've made it official, I want a plaque! (lol). I'm so glad you thought it ended perfectly. I know I crunched the second-to-last chapter a bit, but I needed to get to this last one. And the sad/not "too" sad - exactly what I was striving for! Thank you!
Date: 03/30/12 06:37 pm Title: Journey through the fog
waooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Author's Response: Glad you...um....liked it?
Date: 03/30/12 05:37 pm Title: Journey through the fog
Omg, Tom really made me cry. I feel sorry for him, but at the same time it's better this way. But it so sad how he recognized them as his sons :( I wonder if he got together with andrej, I can imagine how hot they are together.. ;D Thank you for another amazing story, i can't wait till the next one!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Dia! Loved all your reviews and chatting with you. Sorry for making you cry. No, wait, that's a compliment. Thanks! (see why I couldn't spill any secrets? It wouldn't have been as fun to read!). I'm thinking Tom and Andrej would be great together. Thanks for reading and taking time to write to me. Working on the next one!
Date: 03/30/12 03:08 pm Title: Journey through the fog
Me encantó el final... Tom y Andrej? Interesante
Author's Response: Yo soy.... Tom y Andrej, fue un fechazo? Le agradezco mucho su reaccion! Gracias!
Date: 03/30/12 03:02 pm Title: Journey through the fog
So, so clever this last chapter. I loved seeing things from Tom's POV. When he was paying attention to the twins I was all 'how can he not see himself in them?' And then you had him walking away and knowing that they were his. That was so sad. Also, that he's in a loveless marriage because he just can't control his sex addiction or whatever it is. Despite still being a cheating whats-it he has come a long way and it was lovely that he just wanted Bill to be happy. I hope he someday gets control of himself and meets someone he can really commit to. Maybe Andrej? Because the ending was truly inspired having him meet up with Andrej on the plane. Something else that was absolutely lovely was the way he was with Isabelle. I'm so happy that he at least has someone he really cares for in his life. Wonderful story from start to finish. And I can hardly wait to see what your next project is going to be.
Author's Response: Helen! Hi! Love reading your reviews, as usual. I'm so glad you liked the last chapter. I'm so glad it's done! It was a lot of fun. But I'm feeling nudged to write a short one about Tom/Andrej.... Maybe? You'll have to let me know what you think. I'm looking forward to many more chats with you!
Date: 03/30/12 11:43 am Title: Journey through the fog
GYAAHHH!!! Will you write a Tom/Andrej story next? 'Cause if it turns out that Andrej tamed Tom's wild streak, that'd be awesome....
I was waiting for this story to end before I read the whole thing and boy, am I glad I waited! I really liked how you showed that Tom did something unacceptable but faced up to it and could even acknowledge his sex addiction. Not many people can understand that accepting this a huge part of making things right again. Keep up the good work and good luck with your future stories too!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I totally understand waiting til a story is complete - I get so disappointed when an author disappears, leaving a great story unfinished. I mean, really, really disappointed. (Mohanrocks, where are you!). Reading your review actually put the idea in my head that maybe a small 2-3 chapter shortie about Tom/Andrej might be in order....hm....
Date: 03/30/12 11:21 am Title: Journey through the fog
wow tom estoy sorprendida..... conociste a tus hijitos y ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
jamas cambiaras!!!!!!!!
great history!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: Gracias, Ninel! I know, Tom's behavior was a bit of a surprise. And he realized he'd never change. That can be tough to understand about one's self. But I'm sure he'll find diversions (*cough* Andrej *cough*)
Date: 03/30/12 10:44 am Title: Journey through the fog
Wow I have to say I didn't expect the whole Andrej thing. xD I don't know whether I like that or not. However I did love that you ended in Tom's perspective. Gave good closure to the whole thing. I'm glad Tom didn't fight Bill for the babies or the divorce. All in all I loved this story. Well done, yet again! :'D
Author's Response: Thank you! Loved all your reviews. I know the Andrej thing was a bit of a surprise. I just thought everyone would feel better for Poor Tom if they could imagine him having a romp with pretty pretty Andrej. Thanks again :D
Date: 03/30/12 09:23 am Title: Journey through the fog
OMG this chapter. I watched him walk away with our sons. amazing...
This has been fantastic! Great story, great characters, everything!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: 03/30/12 08:59 am Title: Journey through the fog
This a been a nice story, I also read the first one, but this one is also good.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed them, thanks for letting me know you liked them :D
Date: 03/30/12 08:49 am Title: Journey through the fog
Finally Tom's POV!!! I knew you will just allow him at least this. You took everything else from him. I'll go back reading.
Author's Response: Yep, we needed a quick look into his mind, and find out what's been going on with him. I think I didn't so much take everything away from him as he threw it all out. He wasn't very good for Bill. Thanks for all your reviews, it's been a lot of fun!
Date: 03/30/12 08:25 am Title: Journey through the fog
Oh my god. Tom figured out they were his kids. I feel so sad, but proud though, that he had to walk away as if they really weren't his, and that he accepted they never would be because of his cheating ways. Andrej made an appearance again. I can't imagine what would happen if all of them (Bill, Bu Tom and Andrej) met up again. I'm guessing disaster. Haha. I would love to see that, like a mini spin-off or something. Anyway, great work on the story! I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! rnI am thinking Tom could never hold on to someone like Andrej, with his desire to have complete sexual freedom at all times. But ....maybe the pretty blond could tame him, who knows?
Date: 03/30/12 06:57 am Title: Journey through the fog
oh oh oh i'm so happy Tom finally know he has a set of twins*and that he understood things
Strange like Tom and Andrej are going to be in love with each other because I know it is what's going to happen and be the next subject for the new story.
Crazy Ho I get obsessed with your writting lol
Author's Response: Obsessed - I'm taking that as a supreme compliment! There's your Billshido, Callypyge, I know the Tom/Bill thing skeeves you out a bit (twincest! Kind of twisted!). Glad you stuck around and kept reviewing, hope to see you for the next one!
Date: 03/30/12 05:16 am Title: Journey through the fog
LOL full circle aye now including andrej
Author's Response: Couldn't leave poor Andrej out in the cold. Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/30/12 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1: The fog comes in on little cat feet
Hihi, thanks................ IV had fun wit ur stories, can't wait 4 the next 1
Author's Response: Me neither! I started writing it a couple days ago, it's really, really fun! Look forward to your comments :)
Date: 03/30/12 04:10 am Title: Journey through the fog
thanks for keeping sebastian and julian as names.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving them to me! I'm pretty sure it's not quite what you had in mind, but I hope you could enjoy it anyway!