Omg that would be brilliant! I just saw The Game for the first time a week or two ago, because it was on tv guide channel, it was soo good. I would love to see something inspired by it here. *hinhintnudgenudge* you should work on that

Author's Response: How funny is that! I don't have the kind of mind that can work in puzzles and riddles, but maybe I can throw a little bit into the next story (which keeps getting a little weirder and more interesting in my head, we'll see where it goes)

you make good points, sorry for always being so against everything and critical.
Like I have said before I'm stubborn as fuck get it from my dad sadly ;) hehehe. Anywho you are still an awesome writer because you cause me panic attacks and challenge the comfortable way I think and I like a challenge. I can't always be comfortable change is always good.

Author's Response: I thought you made some good points, too. I thought about your last review a lot. I know Bill and Anis jumped into a relationship. Right now, they're rolling around in joy/sex/love/fun, but who knows how they'll be in, say, two years. In MY head, their "love at first sight (sorta)" is going to last, but realistically, that may not be the case. Bill could have used some time to himself, but I think that because he happened to meet Anis at this time in his life, he'd much rather be with him than alone. I've always believed that everyone needs time alone in their lives, to be single, discovering who they are. But I realize, through this story, that not everyone might feel this way. Especially if they are with the right person. rnI like your reviews. I don't just discount them because they don't align with my viewpoint, I think about them. It's good for me, keep it coming!

I feel like Anis is not ready to help raise children because he still has his own demons to get through and even though it seems like he would help Bill, those kids are still and will always be a part of Tom. Tom would also not be ready to raise children because he needs to grow up. Bill also needs to grow up. But having these twins is going to change everyone for the better even Tom. Even though Bill says he hates Tom for what he is done, you can tell a little part of him still kinda loves him...and idk how. Anis is a good man but is he ready to be more than a PI. Can Tom be more than a Cheater. Can Bill be more than always dependent on people. Can he be a stronger person for those little babies growing in his belly does he know that maybe he also has the strength to raise children by himself if the situation called for it. I think if he became a single parent that he would mature and become the dependent confident man I know he can be...I know he can my mom did it. To me it seems like Bill needs a relationship to keep stable, nothing wrong with that but in a way its his defense mechanism so that he wont face life by himself.I feel like even though he says he loves Bushido that he is still using him because he was the person in that moment that gave him affection when he really need it. He married young and never got to really experience anything wild that was not within the security of having money, and feeling comfortable. and the one person that seems way out of the norm and sort of wild and different like Bushido obviously attracts him. I just think that Bill has some issues and is insecure about somethings. I would really like him to be a single parent so that his character can develop more. Tom needs to suffer alone and appreciate what he use to have (Absence makes the heart grow stronger). Bushido needs to figure his shit out before he becomes engrossed in his work again an neglects the people he cares about.

Author's Response: Ah, wouldn't it be lovely if everyone waited until they were absolutely the most perfect versions of themselves before they had kids! rnI think in some cases, not all, because I'm basically against having kids in general, that having a baby (or two) helps shake off some of the last vestiges of immaturity in some people. I feel that way for Bill. Not Tom, though. As for Anis, I think he learned his lesson with Andrej. He loves Bill, and it's not superficial, and I'm sure he won't make the same mistakes he did with his other boyfriend. And besides, Bill is not Andrej - he's not going to flip over Anis' career. Also, Anis is getting older, he might want to stop putting himself in dangerous situations so often.rnrnAbout how Bill feels about Anis: I don't think you give him enough credit! Bill isn't foolish - he's very careful. He isn't using Anis. I don't see him as jumping in like this, with "I love you's" and moving in and making long range plans, with someone simply because he is scared to stand on his own. He really does love Anis, and he isn't with him because he doesn't want to be alone. The timing is just coincidental. Besides, I don't think it's necessarily a good thing to be a single parent, especially of twins. That's a hard life, and although a lot of people do it, that doesn't mean they wouldn't have prefered to have a partner with them (just, the RIGHT partner, which can be hard to find). rnrnAs for Tom, well, you may have trouble accepting that Bill doesn't want to be with him. At all. Babies or no babies. Even if Tom was a changed man (again), Bill doesn't want him. I can't say I blame him, either. Bill did the smart thing. He left a man who isn't going to stay monogamous. Who is going to cheat and knock up his lovers and be incredibly selfish. rnrnI do love hearing your point of view, knowing you're breaking down the story, analyzing it - I think that's great! Thanks for such a long review, J!

OMG! it was a perfect morning... Bill with hope of a future very prometedor wuth his love, work in law, Anis here Anis there.... :-) then el malestar... Well ... Andreas ... That guy is witch? ! But.... Why God? Why he'll have the twins of tom?!! Ok a baby is always very good news and twins better of course! But de bill and anis... No tom that he now must be out completly! Al menos no entrometiendose?? Pobre bill tan bien q estaba haciendola...comenzando una relacion tan bonita... Wow ahora se pone buena la cosa haha DRAMA! uhhhhh I love it! La reaccion de Anis cuando Bill se lo diga, la reaccion de Tom porque tiene que saberlo ėl es el padre anyway... Tom is going to cry as always again he is a coward baby cry haha que sufra! :-) Y me dio risita los doctores cuando hacian la ecografia a Bill haha lo hacian angustiarse de curiosidad y miedo hihihi Super, genial , very , good , dramatic, esperado, uff i dont have words ..... Me encantó! En espera del sgte.

PD; espero que entiendas mi review... Intento escribir en ingles pero algunas expresiones no se y las escribo en español... Sorry. GRACIAS por esforzarte en leerla y contestarlas siempre :-)

Author's Response: Otra vez tu!!! Tu resena es muy bonita, muchas gracias! Entendido mucho de tu escrito. La Drama! Es similar a television de Mejicano, no? Grito! (deep voice) "Los bebes es mios!" (eyes go wide in surprise) "No! No, los bebes es Juan's!" Que dramatic music. I love you reviews, love how much you have to say, and we'll manage to understand each other! So glad you're still here! rn

Oh dear Lord!! I saw that coming unfortunatly
Now i dunno how Bu is going to react though I think he's gonna keep Bill for himself and help him thru.
But soon or later, Tom will find out.
Now it can be two things: or he is a father and Bu a step father and all is smooth or it is war ( begging, yellin, crying, well drama ahead)

Author's Response: Exaaaaaaactly!

Yesss!!! This is perfekt!!

Author's Response: I like that kind of perfekt - seems, not perfect, but perfekt anyway. High praise! Thank you!

OMG! OMG! OMG! We all knew Bill was pregnant, right? But freakin' twins. Such a mixture of emotions in this chapter. Such sweet love and hot sex at the beginning. Then so sad with the visit to Andi and him being out of it on his new meds. And finally the ultrasound. How the hell is Bill going to tell Anis he's expecting Tom's babies? Will he even tell him, at least for the moment? And when will he tell Tom? Surely he'll have to...or sometime Tom will find out. Even though the docs can't say anything Bill's gonna start showing at some stage and gossip will surely get back to Tom. One more thing, will Bill even consider having an abortion? It was him who wanted a baby before Tom was so eager to get him knocked up, but then it was Tom's baby he wanted in what he thought was a loving marriage. Will he even want the babies since they're Tom's and now he's with Anis...And if he has the twins? Will Anis want to play daddy to someone else's kids? And when Tom does find out will he want custody? Will he try and use the kids to get Bill back? Ooooh, so many possibilities. What will you go with? Guess I'd better keep reading...and you'd better keep writing.

Author's Response: Helen darling! This is right out of Bill's head in the next chapter!

Hah! *crows* I knew it! Wow. Twins. The first part of the chapter was sexy like hell.

Author's Response: I'm so glad the sexy-fun-times worked. I don't want it to seem gratuitous or to fall kind of flat (oh, they're screwing. Okay. Lube. Fingers. Butt-sex. Yawn). So thanks for pointing out that it worked! rnTwins might put a damper on things, though :\

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH. I knew it. It wasn't the kiwi. Damn. Twins. Tom. Pregnant. Hormones. Boobs. Andi. Pills. Anis.

I can't even form coherent sentences.

God, I hope Bill doesn't pass out when he tells Bu. No, I hope Bu doesn't pass out, or react badly or anything. wonder how Bill's going to get rid of the baby?

Good job! I'm excited to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm excited to write more! Next chapter: Bill's decisions. Bu's reactions.

Wow, have they already been together so long that Anis made Bill pregnant... or... or could it be Tom's ???? oh, dear. Such a mess if that's the case.
It's funyn how Bill's already detached the thought of a pregnancy because neither him or Anis are connecting the dots correctly to his suddenly sick to the stomach - or they're in delusion...
That is - if the mpreg is a fact already of course *G*

I like the way Bill is settling in his new life. He's really happy and content about the pace and closeness surrounding him. He likes Anis' friends, but they're still Anis' friends. Hopefully in time, they'll be his, too.

Author's Response: I wonder how Anis would feel if he knocked Bill up.... Hm... I'll have to think about that for a bit. He'd be pretty shocked, I'm sure. As for the other stuff about the mpreg...well, hope you enjoy chapter 2! rnI'm glad Bill is feeling so happy and settled and is making new friends and feels so in love and let'sjusthopeitdoesn'tallgetruined! Noooo!