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Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/12 01:18 am Title: Chapter 12

this was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOODDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gott i love this story!! :D keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Dodge-challenger Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/12 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

I WANT MORE! D:

Author's Response: Working on it! :)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/12 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 11

This chapter was amazing!!! The story is developing really well :) keep up the amazing work!!!!! :) I'll be waitin for an update as usual ;)

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Dodge-challenger Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 11

POST MORE I HATE YOU!!! x( WHY DON'T YOU POST MORE? PLEASE POST MORE AND MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!

Author's Response: XD haha sorry. I post every time I finish a chapter and since it's all coming straight off my phone I can't really tell how long chapters are. Plus I wait a little after posting because I want more reads before posting again. :p I'll start writing today.

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/12 02:00 am Title: Chapter 10

This was amazing!!!!!!!!! I think you have retrieved your muse!!! :P like, wow... :) keep up the amazing work!!!!!! I loved it!!! *hugs*

Ps, love the banner ;) haha

Author's Response: D'awwww x3 vielen dank!! *big hugs* and yea, isn't the banner great! Wonder where i got it from. ;)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/12 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

becca_lynn_136@hotmail.com, send me an email and ill send you the banner! :)

Author's Response: Will do!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/12 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 9

ps: you no longer have a banner, do you want me to make ya one?! :) haha or did it just get deleted?! :) again, good work, can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: It got deleted. I need to resize it. :( I would love to see a banner you made though!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/12 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 9

wow.... i think your muse has returned!!! :D this was amazing!!! really and truly :)

i can't wait for more! Billa is just so lost in himself, its so sad :( *hugs!* keep up the great work! :D

Author's Response: Oh good! I didn't think it was very amazing. But had to post anyways since it's been so long. XD

Reviewer: Dodge-challenger Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/12 10:47 am Title: Chapter 9

I am willing to read more. :)

Author's Response: I am willing to write more!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/12 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

But I love this story!!!! It is soooo good!!!!!! :) I can namedrop u in one of my stories :P

Author's Response: I do too! Hahaha and. That's up to you. :p so far I've been posting it on tumblr but no luck. :/

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/12 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Paradise Lost is actually an epic poem by the English poet John Milton from the 17th century. It's one of literature's great treasures.

Author's Response: I've never heard of it. I'll have to look it up.

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/12 01:10 am Title: Chapter 8

What just happened?!?!?!?!?! Omg!!!!! Bill???? Dead???? Gah!!!!!! I'm so rattled.... I think I have brain damage from holding my breath till the very end!!!!! :P

Author's Response: Don't die! Or get brain damaged! Holding your breath can be dangerous! D8 I'm wondering if I should shorten the fanfic. I barely have any readers. That's why it took me a little longer to get up motivation to write this time. :(

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/12 12:05 am Title: Chapter 7

Poor Billa!!! He is still so lost!! My heart melts for him!! *squeeze hugs him* keep up the great work and have a good vacay! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! That's probably where the beach came in here. I'm subconsciously bouncing up and down going "beachbeachbeachbeachbeach!" I'm so excited! I've never been able to swim in the ocean! We have lots of beaches here but you never seen anyone swimming, the waters too cold. Sometime's you see people walking in the water or doing water sports. But not swimming. Ahhhh! I'm excited to feel the ocean around me!!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/12 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ooooo!!! New chapter!!! Yay!!! *jumps up and down squealing* has your muse returned?!? Cuz this chapter was AMAZING!!!!!!!!! :) please keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: I keep getting distracting with other stuff. XD plus i'm going on vacation soon so i'm all over the place right now. :p and thank you!!!!! That really makes me happy to hear. ^-^

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/12 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

So short!! I want more!!!! ;P how is what possible?! Wat a way to draw me in even more! Haha! Update soon please! :)

Author's Response: Oh I know! I hate it when they end up short. But I had no idea what to add! >.<

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Billa is so lost!!! *squeeze hugglz him* :) can't wait for the next chapter :) maybe some of his questions will be answered? :)

Author's Response: Maybe! :P

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/12 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Aww she is a sweetheart :) I wanna know what Tom did to Bill!!! :) good story so far :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! :) I wanted to make Lyric the kind of person with traits we all wish we had! Whether it's completely selfless, more outgoing, kind enough to make an angel jealous, absolutely beautiful, self happiness, etc. But with good reason! You'll see soon! ;)

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/12 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

So Tom isn't dead.... ?! Haha I wanna read more!! :) *runs to next chappy*

Author's Response: Noo. He's not. I couldn't do that to Bill, even if it's a fictional Bill! I did want it to seem that way until about the 4 chapter though. :p

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/12 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hmm... I think this shall be an interesting story! :) I never have the nerve to kill off one of the bandmembers :P even writing it would break my heart :) haha can't wait to see how the story unfolds!!! :)

Author's Response: I hope this is an interesting story! My other stories were all pre-written and all planned out. I'm writing each chapter for this one as it comes then hitting submit. I really have no previous complete idea of where it's going before I start writing a new chapter here.

Reviewer: myth Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 07:07 am Title: Chapter 2

Silly me thought Bill died until the last line of the last chapter. I like your story, and i like the girl. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Sorry about that! >.< i'm glad you like it though. :)

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