Date: 03/12/12 02:51 pm Title: No Leaving
Well as said before, it does seem a tad rushed. None the less, it was very sexy! Really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Sorry for that! This is my first fiction writing all by myself. I'll try to slow down a bit and give you all more details! :)
Date: 03/12/12 12:59 pm Title: No Leaving
faewoajowjfea. This was amazing! Just like the first one. :3 I love these types of storylines & whatnot. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: AWN Thanks!I'll update as soon as possible!
Date: 03/10/12 11:54 am Title: It Could be Worse
Oh Tom, for shame.
what the hell? I am definitely interested in what's going on, and how Tom is going to feel in the morning, and what Bill's story is. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! More is coming:)
Date: 03/08/12 01:43 pm Title: It Could be Worse
That is f**king hottttt. More please ^^
Author's Response: But of course! I'm currently writing the second chapter, but I'm stuck! I have some help so it should be finished soon!
Date: 03/07/12 11:22 am Title: It Could be Worse
Well that was positively delightful. And don't worry about it being 'out of character.' It wasn't. Some men are very fickle about their macho pride. A lot of guys would overreact to that type of situation. It was maybe a little rushed, but written well and yummy fun. Hope to see more.
Author's Response: Thank you:) This is my first fic writing alone, so I'll learn as I go on. <3
Date: 03/07/12 02:54 am Title: It Could be Worse
this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/06/12 10:11 pm Title: It Could be Worse
I thought Tom was going to be nice to Bill, but instead he raped him! :O Poor Bill! What will Tom think when he wakes up, still inside another boy? Will he be angry or nicer? To know the answer, I'll stay tuned! lol
Date: 03/06/12 07:27 pm Title: It Could be Worse
I love it. Please update soon! :3
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'll start working on it now.
Date: 03/06/12 12:28 pm Title: It Could be Worse
Guess Tom was so angry at finding the 'girl' was a boy that he decided to teach him a lesson. Being drunk also affected his judgement. But damn, he was an animal. I hope he makes it up to the boy somehow. And the poor boy thinking he was being rescued and ending up being raped. Promising start to your story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks:) Exactly<3
Date: 03/06/12 12:14 pm Title: It Could be Worse
Erm, this is wildly out of character. A person doesn't go from feeling sympathy to becoming a rapist in minutes.
Author's Response: Don't worry. I know it is, it's just a start on how I want you all to see how he is;)
Date: 03/06/12 10:23 am Title: It Could be Worse
great start... can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you<3